Unforgiven

Unforgiven

I died yesterday. I'm not accepted into heaven. But I still have a chance to get in. Why I'm not accepted, you ask? I died doing bad. I died killing my best friend. If that makes any sense. I must prove myself worthy by doing good. But not just any good deed. I must be sent back in time, to stop myself ever meeting my best friend and stop myself from being over powered by greed and manipulation.

published on October 12, 2014not completed

The Task

"Walk up the stairs to receive your task," The voice tells me. I nod and look for the stairs. I see a long line of stairs leading up onto a huge golden cloud, lined with silver.
"Thankyou," I say gratefully. I start my way up the stairs.

"Hello?" I question doubtfully. I see a boy, around my age, maybe a bit older, 18 perhaps.
"Name?" He asks as if he's had to do this a million times, which he probably has.
"Stephania Glaydon," I reply. The boy pulls out a scroll from thin air. He sighs before looking through it.
"Hmm..." I stand there, waiting. I wonder what one must pay for attempting to kill their best friend. "Ah ha, Stephania Glaydon, here you are," I stand there, eagerly awaiting my task. "Oh, this is a good one,"
"Good for me? Or good for you to watch?" I ask.
"One of the two," He replies.
"Thanks for nailing it down," I grumble.
"Look, do you want your task, or not,"
"Fine, I'll shut up,"
"Good, anyway, your task, we will send you back down, you will be you in the past but will know everything about now, you must stop yourself from ever meeting Dominick Eyekon, and to not get corrupted by money and greed,"
"What?! I wasn't corrupt-"
"We will send you down in three hours exactly, I hope you're ready," I nod reluctantly. I feel horrible. Not meeting Dominick, will be horrible. He was my best friend for numerous years.
What do I do?
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Beautiful simply marvelous!
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on March 23, 2016
Awesome!!
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on December 10, 2014
Love. Love. LOVE IT! :)
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on December 10, 2014
Really awesome! Some minor spelling mistakes, but great writing!
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Yeah, I noticed them but haven't had time to go through and fix them. :)
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on December 09, 2014
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on December 09, 2014
Yay!! :D
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on December 09, 2014
Awesome new update! Write more soon!
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on December 08, 2014
Write more!!!!!!
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on October 20, 2014
Awesome! (Yes! I finally read it! ;) :P )
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on October 20, 2014
Love it
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on October 18, 2014
Write more soon!
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on October 15, 2014
Dark, but seems like an interesting plot!
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on October 14, 2014
I like it :) it's different write more!
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on October 12, 2014
Dark but cool
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on October 12, 2014
Too dark for my taste
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on October 12, 2014
AMAZING!!!!!!
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on October 12, 2014