Unforgiven

Unforgiven

I died yesterday. I'm not accepted into heaven. But I still have a chance to get in. Why I'm not accepted, you ask? I died doing bad. I died killing my best friend. If that makes any sense. I must prove myself worthy by doing good. But not just any good deed. I must be sent back in time, to stop myself ever meeting my best friend and stop myself from being over powered by greed and manipulation.

published on October 12, 2014not completed

Above

Above Light fills my vision as I slowly open my tired and sore eyes.
Where am I?
I place my hand gently over my stomach.
No knife.
No blood.
Just a pitch black t-shirt. That's funny. I was wearing a grey, long sleeved top earlier. Maybe I'm in hospital. Maybe Dominick came back to save me, despite the wrong I was planning to do to him. I move my long brown hair from my eyes and gaze at myself. I'm wearing a sleek, black t-shirt and dark blue skinny jeans. Along with ankle length, dark brown boots. I was NOT wearing this earlier. I was wearing pitch black trousers and my dark pink and blue trainers.
"Welcome, young Stephania Glaydon," Comes a low, smooth voice.
"Where am I!" I shout desperately.
"You are, At the gateway to heaven," The voice replies.
"Gateway?" I ask
"Yes, it seems you were held back," The voice tells me. I gulp.
"H-Held back?" I stammer.
"Yes,"
"Why?"
"Because you have done something terrible,"
"What?"
"Does the name, Dominick Eyekon, ring a bell?" I completely forgot about that. I gaze at my surroundings. I see golden clouds completed with ocean blue sky. Everywhere is light. The only spot of darkness is my clothing.
"So, I don't go to heaven?"
"No," What will happen to me then? Should I even ask? I might get a horrible answer, but I must know.
"What will happen to ME?"
"You will be given a task to undo your bad, If you do not complete this task we give you, you shall be sent to live a horrible and treacherous life as a dark angel,"
"A dark angel?"
"You ask a lot of questions,"
"Yes, yes I do," I need to.
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Beautiful simply marvelous!
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on March 23, 2016
Awesome!!
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on December 10, 2014
Love. Love. LOVE IT! :)
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on December 10, 2014
Really awesome! Some minor spelling mistakes, but great writing!
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Yeah, I noticed them but haven't had time to go through and fix them. :)
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on December 09, 2014
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on December 09, 2014
Yay!! :D
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on December 09, 2014
Awesome new update! Write more soon!
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on December 08, 2014
Write more!!!!!!
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on October 20, 2014
Awesome! (Yes! I finally read it! ;) :P )
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on October 20, 2014
Love it
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on October 18, 2014
Write more soon!
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on October 15, 2014
Dark, but seems like an interesting plot!
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on October 14, 2014
I like it :) it's different write more!
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on October 12, 2014
Dark but cool
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on October 12, 2014
Too dark for my taste
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on October 12, 2014
AMAZING!!!!!!
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on October 12, 2014