Obsesion

Obsesion

Elise was anti-social, nervous, and an emotional wreck. Ever since she could remember, she was like that. Until she met Sesa.

published on May 10, 2017completed

Mind Games

Mind Games Sesa smiled at Elise.

He had been on her good side so far, and he didnt want to screw that up.
"Sesa, I want to play Monopoly!" She says childishly, jumping at him from behind. "Now!"
He laughs, then states, "Actually, lets play a game of hide-and-seek." He smiles, letting her know that he wanted to do this whole-heartedly.

She smiles, then says, "Ok! But you hide first! Im really good at finding people."
He laughs, pats her head, then leaves the room as she counts to a thousand.

He frowns.
She was insane.
He needed to know why.

He checked out the hallway, seeing that it was obviously an old motel. What floor, he couldnt say.
"Ok, Sesa." He says to himself, sneaking around to the door directly across from him, "Lets see how insane she really is."

He slowly opens the door, the hinges squeeking. Opening the door, his jaw drops when he sees her dimly-lit room.
Filled with pictures of him.
In the Millions.

"Oh my fūcking God..." he says, slowly walking in and stepping on pictures of him as a child. It was obvious she had put brick and mortar on the windows, and she had done a good job, too. Elise had, apparently, been following him longer than a year. In fact, it seems she had been following him all his life.

He walks, slowly as to not give a clue that he was there, to the closet.
Something told him to open it. To see what was inside.

His hand hovered above the closet door knob. He gulped,  then took a deep breath as he opened it, seeing a shrine.
To him.

"What the.. How..."
He bent on one knee, then flicked his lighter, casting a light around him by the flame.
What he saw next really made him freak out.

There was a baby tooth, a rusty knife, another picture, and a lock of hair with hundreds of love letters dedicated to him.
"This shits creepy as hell!" He whispered, trying to keep control of his frantic mind.

The door squeeked, and he immediately jumps in the closet, knocking the shrine over and slyly closing the door.
He heard her walk slowly in the room, then stop. She was muttering to herself, and he heard her sit down on the only other piece of furnature in the room.
"Sesa is mine now. Mine mine mine. He's mine now, Mommy. He's mine now, Daddy. Mine all mine..." she hardly whispered, hearing her rock back and forth on the matress on the floor.

He held his hand over his mouth, trying not to scream.
She was insane, all right.
Poor Elise...

She hitches her breath, then starts sniffling and laughing.
"Mommy, Sesa is so nice to me, unlike how you were." She says, catching his attention.

What was she talking about?

She laughed while crying, "And Daddy, he loves me, unlike you! He treats me like a queen, he talks to me like Im human..."

She gets quiet for a moment, then startles him by screeching out, "Unlike you, you worthless, sorry, pitiful excuses of meat! Thank you for locking me downstairs with the skeletons and rats, Mommy! Thanks for beating me sensless and telling me Im nothing, Daddy! I hate you both so much!" She laughs insanely, then cries and hiccups. "He was always there for me, unlike you! He loves me, unlike you! I hope youre both burning in Hell now! I hope you-! You...!" She cries heavily, then sniffles, suddenly happy again. "Well, Id better go get him. Its tea time!" She says happily, stopping in front of the closet.

Sesa nearly shit himself when she opened the door.
Elise didnt move.
She didnt even seem to see him.
"Sesa, what are you doing in my room?" She asks monotonously, sitting on her knees and looking him dead in the eye. "Dont you know a girls room is sacred? Just like a shrine."

"E-elise I...! I didnt..-!"
She kissed him gently, still staring at him in a thousand mile stare.
"Dont be afraid." She said, picking up the rusty knife and smiling sweetly. "It wont hurt too much."
She adds as she injects his leg with a syring filled with a clear liquid.
His vision went blurry, amd the last thing he heard before he passed out was, "Sesa, Sesa, Knocking at the door, Sesa, Sesa, Worry no more."
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Sesa has gone crazy!!
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Did anyone like it or was it bad?
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Yes it was amazing
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on May 15, 2017
IT WAS AMAZING I LOVE IT
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on May 15, 2017
okay! @xXEmo_KingXx
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on May 12, 2017
Heh. Actually, leta go to my page Stories. I meed a few ideas on what to write next.
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on May 12, 2017
No problem@xXEmo_KingXx
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on May 12, 2017
Thanks, @TylerWay
That means a lot.
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on May 12, 2017
Well then you have a lot of imagination.
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on May 12, 2017
Meh. Not really. Some of these stories Ive been wanting to write for years, others I come up with on the spot.
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on May 12, 2017
Okay then the first chapter. And do take a break if you need to. Writing fabulous stories must be exhausting.
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on May 12, 2017
You mean the first chapter. Ive been writing like a fool since a few weeks ago. Imma take a little break.
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on May 12, 2017
Yes do it! I shall be waiting until Monday to read it
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on May 12, 2017
Really? Ok. Ill start Monday.
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on May 12, 2017
But yes a pure romance story would be amazing
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on May 12, 2017
I always try to make a pure romance story, but in the end....I end up killing someone. DON'T LET THAT HAPPEN TO YOU!!!!
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on May 12, 2017
Bows*
(No death. Just romance)
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on May 12, 2017
Thank you sir!
(Purely romance...)
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on May 12, 2017
Thats the spirit!
Maybe next time Ill just do a purely romance story...
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on May 12, 2017
Oh well, at least they got to go killing together!
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on May 12, 2017
It is.
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on May 12, 2017
But that isn't the end of Obsesion?
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on May 12, 2017
Lolers
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on May 12, 2017
Will do sir!
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on May 12, 2017
You should. I mean, expect the unexpected from now on.
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on May 12, 2017
I thought Elise was going to kill Sesa, but instead he turned crazy. I didn't expect that.
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on May 12, 2017
It was great!
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on May 12, 2017
What's she on oml
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Insanity.
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on May 12, 2017
Damn, Elise has knocked Sesa out!
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on May 12, 2017
The basic gist of this story is that everyone has their demons.
Now, it all depends on one of two things:

You can reject them, and eventually become like them

Or

You can embrace them, and eventually fight them off.
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That's a good meaning @xXEmo_KingXx
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*goes to read*
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on May 12, 2017
Done with the next chapter
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on May 12, 2017
I think everyone has some. I have them too.
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on May 12, 2017
Ik. I have my own.
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on May 11, 2017
She's going full yandere
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Shes utterly insane
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on May 11, 2017
BEST PIC EVER!!!!!
@xXEmo_KingXx
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on May 11, 2017
lol. Thank you my good sir. @xXEmo_KingXx
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on May 11, 2017
Good luck!
Slaps back and hands cigar*
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on May 11, 2017
Yep, she wanted me to make her my Qwife. @xXEmo_KingXx
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on May 11, 2017
For now. Btw, are you engaged to Samantha?
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on May 11, 2017
Yep and that's a good thing
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oh my gosh so depressing why? she was doing so well why?
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She's insane. People who are insane are usually detatched from reality, and they have... certain thpughts. I should know.

Im completely bonkers.
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i am too don't feel bad just look at my new poll and it explains it all in one question
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SHES TURNING INTO A YANDERE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!YYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAASSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS!!!!!!!!!!
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^-^
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That face says it all. Peoples are gonna die. ^_^
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Im so glad so many people like my stories. ^-^
I try to make my stories speak out to those who have no voice, who want to speak but cant because all they can do is ehisper when they want to scream it as loud as they can. A lot of my work is actually inspired by music.
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on May 11, 2017
I love it! :0
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on May 11, 2017
plz write more u are really good and i rlly like this story
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on May 11, 2017
Heartwarming chapter!
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on May 11, 2017
Romulous=Romeo
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on May 11, 2017
Congratulations, sir. You have successfully created one of the most emo stories I've read. (Clap, clap, clap, clap)
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on May 11, 2017
AKARU!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Plus I finished my first chapter@xXEmo_KingXx
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i rlly love this story plz keep writing more
i am obsessed with it plz continue
Elise is just like me with her demoness and secret crush on someone who she may never be with sad but amazing
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on May 10, 2017
*Screaming in the inside*
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She was in spiritual pain.
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O_o
O_o O_o
O_o O_o O_o
O_o O_o O_o O-o
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on May 10, 2017
-_-
-_- -_-
-_- -_- -_-
-_- -_- -_- -_-
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on May 10, 2017
XD I'm a sassy demon.
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on May 10, 2017
True, we demons need some lower lifeforms to rule over little pieces of land.
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on May 10, 2017
Vampirws rule too
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on May 10, 2017
As a pure blood demon I completely understand. XD
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on May 10, 2017
XD lol
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on May 10, 2017
True. We don't really express gentleness.
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on May 10, 2017
Yeaaaaaaah, demons arent known for their gentleness.
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on May 10, 2017
O_o poor Elise
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Poor Elise, she might go crazy now thanks to Sesa.
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Evil laugh*
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on May 10, 2017
Somebody is going to die....
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on May 10, 2017
Hehehe
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on May 10, 2017
You're right, it wasn't. Sesa and his nightmare
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on May 10, 2017
Nope. Hehehehe
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on May 10, 2017
YAS! THAT"S A GOOD SIGN!!
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