Surprise!

Surprise!

The true story of a surprise that almost went terribly wrong. When six year old Amy and five year old Arie try to surprise their mom, something goes wrong...

published on April 20, 2018not completed

Surprise!

Surprise! The show had gotten to the very end when Amy smelled it, the smoke. “Oh no!” She yelled. “Mommy’s chocolate is on FIRE! Um... um... um... get your fan!” Arie ran to get the fan from his room to blow away the smoke. “I can’t lift it!”  He yelled back. Amy ran to help him. They got the fan to the kitchen and opened the front door just as the smoke alarm went off. Arie started crying. Their mom woke up of because of the crying and fire alarm. She ran to the kitchen and opened the microwave. She threw the bowl outside. “What were you thinking?!?” She yelled. “You could have burned the house down!” Now Amy was crying. “We were trying to make you your melty chocolate.” She gasped between tears. Their moms heart softened. “Thank you for trying to make me a surprise, but no more microwave, OK?” Then she hugged them both.





                                                                            








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