my songs (3)

Here you can see my songs. Btw do not steal my songs! Hope you enjoy! =^-^=

published on April 28, 2015not completed

this night

Rays of light, last in the sky,
with descending sun, soon to die

Diving behind horizon, light just disappear,
from the darkness reaching out, shadows appear

Dark shadows, lurking out to hunt and eat,
children of the dark, soon biting mortal meat

Loud screams of desperation and pain,
echoing for dead ears, just dying in vain

This night, demons will have feast,
this night, world is for the beast
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Oh, my god... that just gave me the chills, it was so good! I love the last one! Keep it up! It's so awesome! Submit into a magazine, it's so good!
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Thanks!
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on April 28, 2015
You inspired me to write my own poem :D
Here's the link to it: http://www.qfeast.com/story/AcgU13/Colors-1
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No problem :) :D
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