my songs (3)

Here you can see my songs. Btw do not steal my songs! Hope you enjoy! =^-^=

published on April 28, 2015not completed

final salvation

In the swirling mist, my path is lost,
no turning back, it's the cost

To the darkness, forever I am bound,
for me, final salvation is found

My darkest secret, black veil of death,
in it's cold embrace, I take no breath

Final sacrifice, split blood,
out, from veins just flood

Everlasting hunger, my final cross,
in the misery of past, it is no loss

Last drops of life, poured from the dead,
sacrifice for this night, made for the undead
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Oh, my god... that just gave me the chills, it was so good! I love the last one! Keep it up! It's so awesome! Submit into a magazine, it's so good!
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Thanks!
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on April 28, 2015
You inspired me to write my own poem :D
Here's the link to it: http://www.qfeast.com/story/AcgU13/Colors-1
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No problem :) :D
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