A long stay, and an unexpected interuption
It had taken a few months for the pair to warm up to each other, and in that time, the forest was cleared of the goblin population, and the orcs... and the boggarts... and kobolds... Even after that, Rathashan stayed, and was even invited into the house to stay. A few years past, and Rathashan sent constant reports to the tower... and one night, as the pair were eating dinner, a messenger arrived. "Excuse me Sir, the Archmage want's you to return to the tower immediately" He stated. Rathashan turned to him. "Tell the Archmage I will be there within the week" the messenger bowed and left the room.Rathashan turned to Faunra. "I have a question for you Moonshine" He said, a slight quake in his voice. "Yes, what is it?" She inquired. Rathashan looked her in the eye, and flames danced within them, a flame of passion and kindness, tempered with desire. "If I asked you to walk the tree with me... what would you say?" (walking the tree is basically getting married for elves, pretty basic but kinda cute) She smiled brightly, and leaped across the table, wrapping him in a massive hug. The pair tumbled to the ground, kissing all the way. She then pulled back slightly, and whispered into Rathashan's ear "yes". The next day... ow! Dareskilith go away! No way, It's my turn! He's had eight chapters! But it's his story! I don't care! I want a part! Fine! You can have a few chapters but then it's back to Rath, and I'm only being this nice because your his cousin!
Hello everyone, my name is Dareskilith! And before we get into all that mushy crap with Rathashan and his alcohol, I wanted to give you some insight into what it is like to be a half elf of a different type. To be a half drow. Fun eh?
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