Blood of Dragons

Blood of Dragons

Abandoned at the doors of the Arcane tower, a little babe cries, eyes of brass and hair of gold, a half breed, between elf and man... And the blood of ancient fire running through his veins. The fate of the land rests on him, but where he leads it, no-one knows...

published on February 19, 2016not completed

Lost in the flames

"F*CK!!!" The Archmage leaps out of his seat, summoning water elementals to calm the blaze. "And you had to do that didn't you? By the gods, Gaeten was right, you had to be a fire baby" Rathashan cries out, basket being washed by the water "Oh boo hoo, it's water! Deal with it" The archmage went back to ordering around the elementals, leaving the small child in a basket full of water. As the fire dies down, as does Rathashan, enveloped in steam and smoke.

                                                                                      15 YEARS LATER

"Pardon my lord?" Darelith, Master Evoker of the tower queried to the Archmage. "You heard me, send him out into the field" The Archmage replied casually, tapping his fingers on his once again restored desk. "But my lord, he might do more harm than good to that area, especially with his... abilities" Darelith cautioned, but the Archmage swept aside the words. "He is going, and with his heritage he might just get along with those native to the forest." Darelith, at that point, decided to burst out laughing. "My lord, you cannot be serious, you know what the elves think of halfbreeds" "That is enough! Now, send our young pyromancer to the elven forests, and let him rid us of these pesky goblins"
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Whoooaaaaa

This is so cool!
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YUSSS

I NEED MORE

I also need to write a critique that totally kills your lack of perfect grammar. Give me two hours to write one that actually reaches my insane, perfectionist expectations.
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Whats wrong with my grammar? What did I miss?
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Your grammar is actually really good, but (as mentioned before) I am a perfectionist and think that this story should be totally perfect. So.
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