The Land Of Kaito

The Land Of Kaito

What if Alice in Wonderland wasn't just a fairytale? What if stories and magic were real? What if you could travel to a new world? Giselle Singer, an ordinary girl, discovers that the world isn't as ordinary and as plain as she thought. Join her as she travels to a new world and faces new enemies, not just your typical bully. P.S. I have actually started this story before, I just didn't finish it. So now I'm going to finish it and I hope you enjoy it as much as my other readers enjoyed it.

published on January 07, 2016not completed

Jenny

I stumbled back, surprised.

What was a picture of my mom doing here in Kaito?

"Giselle?" Cairo called, "Where are you?"

"Uh, coming!" I responded.

I didn't want Cairo to see this right now. Maybe I'd show him later.

"What is it?" I asked, running out of the room.

"Let's explore for a bit," Cairo suggested, "that way, we get to know our surroundings a bit better."

I nodded.

"That's a good idea," I approved.

We walked outside. As we were walking, I felt something whizz by me. I turned and saw a fairy. My eyes widened.

"Hello," she squeaked, "you must be Giselle."

I nodded, too astonished to speak.

"I'm Jenny," she said.

"I-I'm Giselle," I stuttered.

"I know," Jenny replied impatiently.

"Sorry, it's just.....I've never seen a fairy before."

"You haven't?"

Now it was Jenny's turn to be surprised.

I shook my head.

"But-" Jenny began.

She gasped.

"What?" I asked.

"The mark! You have the mark!" Jenny pointed at my face.

I sighed.

I was getting tired of this whole mark thing.

"So?" I snapped.

"You don't know what the mark means, do you?"

"No,"

"Well, then it's better that you don't know," Jenny pursed her lips, "all I can tell you is that you had the mark of Kaito."

"Giselle? Come on, lets continue exploring!"

Cairo.

"Got to go, bye!" I called over my shoulder to Jenny.

She waved and flew away.

Later on, when Cairo and I were done exploring, I took him to the portrait room.

"Look!" I pointed to the painting of my mom.

"So?" Cairo raised an eyebrow.

"What do you mean, so? That's-"

I broke off, realizing that Cairo didn't know what my mom looked like.

"That's my mom," I said.

Cairo frowned.

"What's a picture of your mother doing here in Kaito?" he asked.

"I don't know," I shrugged.

Cairo's eyes moved from the painting of my mom to the scary red-head.

"Who's she?"

I shrugged again.

"Interesting," he mumbled after a bit.

"What?" I moved forward.

"There's a plaque underneath this portrait, I can't read what it says though."

I leaned forward and to my surprise, there was indeed a golden plaque underneath the painting. My eyes widened as I realized that this was the same mysterious language that the letter was written in.

I read the name.

Celine.
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*Claps* Great job, once again!
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on May 05, 2016
I will not throw a rock at you!

*Protects you from any rocks thrown*

Mothenzerath...wait, isn't that the boy with three-year-old Giselle in your mini-chapters?
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Aww...thanks!

Yup XD
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No problem!

o_o Cliff-hanger!
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on April 03, 2016
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on April 03, 2016
I request a Love triangle please
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on April 03, 2016
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on April 03, 2016
I thought she got turned into some monster in chapter 20 xD
Can't wait to see what the master's like hehe...
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on April 02, 2016
This is so good! Great job!

Why did Giselle scream?

I MUST KNOW.
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XD

You'll see...
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on April 02, 2016
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on April 02, 2016
This is already getting so good xD
Can't wait for more
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on March 31, 2016
Ohmigod write more this is so interesting
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Thanks ^_^
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on March 31, 2016
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on March 31, 2016
Add more! :)
It doesn't matter how many people read it, my own story doesn't get noticed yet I love writing more, and seeing my very few readers happy

Can I give you some advice? I feel that the bully is a little cliche, an interesting backstory would be cool

This is a lovely story, please keep writing!
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Thanks ^_^

I do have a backstory, I just don't know if I want to put it in here...maybe I'll make a separate story for Zoe. So everyone can understand why she's the way she is.

Yes, writing is wonderful! And it feels so nice when people read.
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^_^ @Eeveewarrior
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on March 30, 2016
@Mooncloud16 thanks a lot! :D
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on March 30, 2016
Thanks ^_^

I forgot to comment on your wolf story, but it was really good! I enjoyed it a lot! @Eeveewarrior
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on March 30, 2016
That's lovely to hear! I'll be cheering along the sidelines.
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on March 30, 2016
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on March 30, 2016
No! POST MORE I NEED TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS NEXTTT
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XD

I will try to post A.S.A.P.
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on March 30, 2016
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on March 30, 2016
Ugh, I don't know if I should add more....not many people seem to be enjoying/liking this...
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addd morrreee omg
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on January 15, 2016
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on January 14, 2016
Aw...thanks @HAMSTERVAMPIRE you're pretty good at writing too though :D
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on January 14, 2016
omg kewl 5 star <3 ya bestie u so good at writing stories im jelly of yo skills lol
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on January 14, 2016