The Land Of Kaito

The Land Of Kaito

What if Alice in Wonderland wasn't just a fairytale? What if stories and magic were real? What if you could travel to a new world? Giselle Singer, an ordinary girl, discovers that the world isn't as ordinary and as plain as she thought. Join her as she travels to a new world and faces new enemies, not just your typical bully. P.S. I have actually started this story before, I just didn't finish it. So now I'm going to finish it and I hope you enjoy it as much as my other readers enjoyed it.

published on January 07, 2016not completed

The Portrait

The Portrait I awoke to a knock on my door.

"I'm coming Aunt Claire!" I called groggily.

I opened my eyes and was surprised to see that I was not in my room.

Mothenzerath entered.

"Who's Aunt Claire?" he asked.

Oh yeah. I was in Kaito now.

"My aunt, duh!" I mumbled.

Mothenzerath walked over to the curtains and pulled them back.

I hissed.

Quickly, I took my pillow and put it over my head.

"Are you always like this?" Mothenzerath sounded amused.

"Sometimes," my reply was muffled by the pillow.

Mothenzerath sighed.

"Anyways, it's time to get up."

"Why? It's not like I have to!" I said.

"Well, you came here for a reason, right?"

"Because you lead me here," I muttered.

"What?"

"Nothing!"

I threw the pillow of my head and sat up.

"Yes, I came here for a reason," I said while standing up, "I want to know what my mother meant."

Mothenzerath nodded.

"There are some clothes in the drawer. Once you're changed, come into the dining hall. We'll be waiting."

Mothenzerath walked back out of the room, closing the door behind him.

I quickly got changed into a t-shirt and jeans, then rushed into the hall.

I then realized that I didn't even know where the dining hall was!

I walked around aimlessly for a few minutes until I came across a portrait. Struck by curiosity, I stepped closer.

The painting was of a woman with very dark red hair and brown eyes. From her glare, you could guess that she was wanting and about to kill someone. Beside her portrait was a picture covered by a tapestry. I reached out to uncover the portrait.

"There you are!"

I turned around.

Mothenzerath was standing there, looking impatient.

"Come on, lets go!"

I sighed.

This mystery would have to wait for another time!
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*Claps* Great job, once again!
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on May 05, 2016
I will not throw a rock at you!

*Protects you from any rocks thrown*

Mothenzerath...wait, isn't that the boy with three-year-old Giselle in your mini-chapters?
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Aww...thanks!

Yup XD
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No problem!

o_o Cliff-hanger!
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on April 03, 2016
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on April 03, 2016
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on April 03, 2016
I request a Love triangle please
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on April 03, 2016
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on April 03, 2016
I thought she got turned into some monster in chapter 20 xD
Can't wait to see what the master's like hehe...
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on April 02, 2016
This is so good! Great job!

Why did Giselle scream?

I MUST KNOW.
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XD

You'll see...
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on April 02, 2016
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on April 02, 2016
This is already getting so good xD
Can't wait for more
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on March 31, 2016
Ohmigod write more this is so interesting
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Thanks ^_^
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on March 31, 2016
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on March 31, 2016
Add more! :)
It doesn't matter how many people read it, my own story doesn't get noticed yet I love writing more, and seeing my very few readers happy

Can I give you some advice? I feel that the bully is a little cliche, an interesting backstory would be cool

This is a lovely story, please keep writing!
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Thanks ^_^

I do have a backstory, I just don't know if I want to put it in here...maybe I'll make a separate story for Zoe. So everyone can understand why she's the way she is.

Yes, writing is wonderful! And it feels so nice when people read.
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^_^ @Eeveewarrior
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on March 30, 2016
@Mooncloud16 thanks a lot! :D
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on March 30, 2016
Thanks ^_^

I forgot to comment on your wolf story, but it was really good! I enjoyed it a lot! @Eeveewarrior
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on March 30, 2016
That's lovely to hear! I'll be cheering along the sidelines.
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on March 30, 2016
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on March 30, 2016
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on March 30, 2016
No! POST MORE I NEED TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS NEXTTT
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XD

I will try to post A.S.A.P.
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on March 30, 2016
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on March 30, 2016
Ugh, I don't know if I should add more....not many people seem to be enjoying/liking this...
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addd morrreee omg
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on January 15, 2016
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on January 14, 2016
Aw...thanks @HAMSTERVAMPIRE you're pretty good at writing too though :D
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on January 14, 2016
omg kewl 5 star <3 ya bestie u so good at writing stories im jelly of yo skills lol
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on January 14, 2016