The Land Of Kaito

The Land Of Kaito

What if Alice in Wonderland wasn't just a fairytale? What if stories and magic were real? What if you could travel to a new world? Giselle Singer, an ordinary girl, discovers that the world isn't as ordinary and as plain as she thought. Join her as she travels to a new world and faces new enemies, not just your typical bully. P.S. I have actually started this story before, I just didn't finish it. So now I'm going to finish it and I hope you enjoy it as much as my other readers enjoyed it.

published on January 07, 2016not completed

Mothenzerath

Mothenzerath "Mothenzerath," I whispered.

"What?" Cairo looked confused.

"So you do remember," Mothenzerath looked relieved.

"I don't mean to be rude....." Cairo said, "but WHO THE HELL ARE YOU?"

Mothenzerath glared at him.

"My name is Mothenzerath,"

"Mothawhat?"

I stifled a laugh.

"Mothenzerath," Mothenzerath gritted his teeth.

He jumped off the toadstool and landed right in front of me. There was a moment of silence, then I lunged for him.

"Why you!" I spat, "Where have you been all these years? You left me alone with no friends or life! I HATE YOU!"

I balled my hands into fists and started to punch him. Mothenzerath grabbed my wrists.

Cairo started forward.

"Take the boy into a room," Mothenzerath called.

A few more creatures that looked similar to Kim took Cairo away.

I glared at Mothenzerath.

"Let go of me!" I snarled.

He gazed calmly at me.

"Giselle, I had no choice," Mothenzerath said, "you know your mother was ready to kill me the next time I came back and-"

I snorted.

"So you made me suffer, just to save yourself?" I was very angry.

"You didn't let me finish," Mothenzerath let go of my wrists, "I also had work to do here. I couldn't abandon that."

"But you could abandon me?"

Mothenzerath looked at the ground.

"I'm sorry," he said, "you're right, I was being a coward. Will you forgive me?"

I considered it.

"Yes," I said slowly, "but on one condition; promise me you'll never do anything of that sort again."

Mothenzerath looked back up.

"I promise," he said solemnly.

He glanced at my face.

"The mark," he whispered.

"You mean the tattoos?"

Why was everyone obsessed with my face?

Mothenzerath nodded.

"You look tired," he observed.

It was then that I realized that my feet were still aching and that I could barely stand.

"Let me help you," Mothenzerath insisted.

No need to ask, I was ready to fall asleep on the floor!

He took my arm and lead me into a cave behind a waterfall. There was a long hallway with lots of doors. He took me to one near the end.

"This will be your room," Mothenzerath said softly, "good-night."

I yawned and opened the door.

There was a bed, a dresser with a mirror on top and a chair.

It wasn't much to look at but it was good enough for me.

I heard the door slam shut behind me as I flopped onto the bed and fell fast asleep.
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*Claps* Great job, once again!
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on May 05, 2016
I will not throw a rock at you!

*Protects you from any rocks thrown*

Mothenzerath...wait, isn't that the boy with three-year-old Giselle in your mini-chapters?
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Aww...thanks!

Yup XD
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No problem!

o_o Cliff-hanger!
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on April 03, 2016
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on April 03, 2016
I request a Love triangle please
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on April 03, 2016
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on April 03, 2016
I thought she got turned into some monster in chapter 20 xD
Can't wait to see what the master's like hehe...
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on April 02, 2016
This is so good! Great job!

Why did Giselle scream?

I MUST KNOW.
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XD

You'll see...
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on April 02, 2016
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on April 02, 2016
This is already getting so good xD
Can't wait for more
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on March 31, 2016
Ohmigod write more this is so interesting
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Thanks ^_^
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on March 31, 2016
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on March 31, 2016
Add more! :)
It doesn't matter how many people read it, my own story doesn't get noticed yet I love writing more, and seeing my very few readers happy

Can I give you some advice? I feel that the bully is a little cliche, an interesting backstory would be cool

This is a lovely story, please keep writing!
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Thanks ^_^

I do have a backstory, I just don't know if I want to put it in here...maybe I'll make a separate story for Zoe. So everyone can understand why she's the way she is.

Yes, writing is wonderful! And it feels so nice when people read.
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^_^ @Eeveewarrior
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on March 30, 2016
@Mooncloud16 thanks a lot! :D
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on March 30, 2016
Thanks ^_^

I forgot to comment on your wolf story, but it was really good! I enjoyed it a lot! @Eeveewarrior
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on March 30, 2016
That's lovely to hear! I'll be cheering along the sidelines.
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on March 30, 2016
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on March 30, 2016
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on March 30, 2016
No! POST MORE I NEED TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS NEXTTT
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XD

I will try to post A.S.A.P.
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on March 30, 2016
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on March 30, 2016
Ugh, I don't know if I should add more....not many people seem to be enjoying/liking this...
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addd morrreee omg
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on January 15, 2016
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on January 14, 2016
Aw...thanks @HAMSTERVAMPIRE you're pretty good at writing too though :D
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on January 14, 2016
omg kewl 5 star <3 ya bestie u so good at writing stories im jelly of yo skills lol
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on January 14, 2016