Long Roads
My feet were aching."How much farther?" I groaned.
It felt like we had been walking for ages.
"Not much, not much," Kim replied.
"That's what you said an hour ago!" I muttered, rolling my eyes.
Cairo snorted.
After a few more painful minutes, Kim stopped.
"We're here!" he said cheerfully.
"Wow," Cairo gasped.
Wow was correct.
There were giant toadstools and flowers, along with butterflies flitting about. But there was one insect in particular that caught my eye.
It was a beautiful black and blue butterfly.
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Mothenzerath...wait, isn't that the boy with three-year-old Giselle in your mini-chapters?
Yup XD
o_o Cliff-hanger!
Who?
Can't wait to see what the master's like hehe...
Why did Giselle scream?
I MUST KNOW.
You'll see...
Can't wait for more
It doesn't matter how many people read it, my own story doesn't get noticed yet I love writing more, and seeing my very few readers happy
Can I give you some advice? I feel that the bully is a little cliche, an interesting backstory would be cool
This is a lovely story, please keep writing!
I do have a backstory, I just don't know if I want to put it in here...maybe I'll make a separate story for Zoe. So everyone can understand why she's the way she is.
Yes, writing is wonderful! And it feels so nice when people read.
I forgot to comment on your wolf story, but it was really good! I enjoyed it a lot! @Eeveewarrior
I will try to post A.S.A.P.