The Land Of Kaito

The Land Of Kaito

What if Alice in Wonderland wasn't just a fairytale? What if stories and magic were real? What if you could travel to a new world? Giselle Singer, an ordinary girl, discovers that the world isn't as ordinary and as plain as she thought. Join her as she travels to a new world and faces new enemies, not just your typical bully. P.S. I have actually started this story before, I just didn't finish it. So now I'm going to finish it and I hope you enjoy it as much as my other readers enjoyed it.

published on January 07, 2016not completed

The Mirror

The Mirror Monday was gone just as quickly as it came and now it was Tuesday afternoon.

I was in front of the big mirror in the hall, making sure I looked decent.

Wait. Was that my imagination, or did that mirror just sparkle?

I shrugged.

It was probably just a trick of the light or-

No. It sparkled again. I ventured closer.

Just then, I noticed a beautiful black and blue butterfly that had flew into the room. It had landed on the mirror's smooth surface.

Come. It seemed to say. Touch the mirror. Follow me.

All of a sudden, it disappeared.

I gasped.

Tentatively, I reached out a hand and touch the mirror.

My hand disappeared. I quickly took it back out. Then I remembered the butterfly.

Taking a deep breath, I walked through.

Something wasn't right though.........oh my gosh, Cairo!

I tried to go back out, but it was too late.

I was in the mirror.
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*Claps* Great job, once again!
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on May 05, 2016
I will not throw a rock at you!

*Protects you from any rocks thrown*

Mothenzerath...wait, isn't that the boy with three-year-old Giselle in your mini-chapters?
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Aww...thanks!

Yup XD
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No problem!

o_o Cliff-hanger!
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on April 03, 2016
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on April 03, 2016
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on April 03, 2016
I request a Love triangle please
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on April 03, 2016
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on April 03, 2016
I thought she got turned into some monster in chapter 20 xD
Can't wait to see what the master's like hehe...
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on April 02, 2016
This is so good! Great job!

Why did Giselle scream?

I MUST KNOW.
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XD

You'll see...
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on April 02, 2016
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on April 02, 2016
This is already getting so good xD
Can't wait for more
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on March 31, 2016
Ohmigod write more this is so interesting
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Thanks ^_^
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on March 31, 2016
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on March 31, 2016
Add more! :)
It doesn't matter how many people read it, my own story doesn't get noticed yet I love writing more, and seeing my very few readers happy

Can I give you some advice? I feel that the bully is a little cliche, an interesting backstory would be cool

This is a lovely story, please keep writing!
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Thanks ^_^

I do have a backstory, I just don't know if I want to put it in here...maybe I'll make a separate story for Zoe. So everyone can understand why she's the way she is.

Yes, writing is wonderful! And it feels so nice when people read.
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^_^ @Eeveewarrior
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on March 30, 2016
@Mooncloud16 thanks a lot! :D
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on March 30, 2016
Thanks ^_^

I forgot to comment on your wolf story, but it was really good! I enjoyed it a lot! @Eeveewarrior
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on March 30, 2016
That's lovely to hear! I'll be cheering along the sidelines.
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on March 30, 2016
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on March 30, 2016
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on March 30, 2016
No! POST MORE I NEED TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS NEXTTT
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XD

I will try to post A.S.A.P.
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on March 30, 2016
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on March 30, 2016
Ugh, I don't know if I should add more....not many people seem to be enjoying/liking this...
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addd morrreee omg
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on January 15, 2016
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on January 14, 2016
Aw...thanks @HAMSTERVAMPIRE you're pretty good at writing too though :D
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on January 14, 2016
omg kewl 5 star <3 ya bestie u so good at writing stories im jelly of yo skills lol
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on January 14, 2016