Redik the hedgehog

Redik the hedgehog

This is the story of a hedgehog, an experiment, born to kill Sonic and his friends. This is my story. Thanks for reading this, I hope you enjoy.

published on January 04, 2016completed

To the moon

To the moon I traveled to Eggman's base,only to find that it wasn't there anymore.So I begun to travel around Mobius. Nothing. I couldn't find nothing. Where the hell could it be?
I was traveling for months... I was tired...tired of Eggman and his bios. They seemed to be disappeared. I started to miss the others...No,i told myself, I can't go back, I would get them only troubles and danger.Plus ,I thought staring my arms, I have still to learn how to dominate that power." !? Sure! That power! Maybe if I activate it again..." what...? If I activate it again what?Uff...I'm out of ideas. I can't find Eggman,but I can't just return to the others and say: "Hey, since I couldn't find Eggman,I came back to you!".What can I do?
I lyed on the ground looking the sky. It was night...and the sky was full of stars...
Eh...look at that huge rock on...the moon...
How? How could I be so stupid? The answer was in front of me every night, and I didn't find it! But now you can't escape from me anymore Eggman. Not now that I know where you are. I decided to go back to Sonic. I needed help to go on the moon "Tails must have something to help me".

Sonic's POV
Someone is knocking? At this hour? Aww..."I'm coming!"
"Ok, who is...Redik?"

"Hi brother..."
"REDIK!TAILS COME HERE!"
Tails:- What?Redik! You came back!
Sonic:- It's almost a year that-
"Yes I know. Tails, have you got something for space travel?"
Tails:- Well, I have the blue typhoon...
Sonic:- Wait wait, why do you need the blue typhoon?
"Eggman.He's on the moon."
Sonic and Tails:- What?
"Please, I need your help" I was on my knees, begging
Sonic:- You don't need to be so dramatic y'know?We'll help you.
"Thanks guys."
The next day was all ready to go.All the guys were there.
10...9...8...7...6...5...4...3...2...1...0, Take-off.
The journey has been short.I was thinking that would be longer...
Once arrived...I knocked'em out, and set the auto-pilot to send them back to Mobius.
No one of my family will get hurt this time.
Eggman,I'm coming for you.
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Ok, thanks to all those who read this story,who remained with Redik until now and who asked me to continue this.
A special thanks goes to sapphirethehedgehog who made me rediscover the passion for Sonic's universe.(I know I have already said this but I wanted to thank you again)
Atsuko_Maeda_15_Acchan aka Jackie the Hedgehog, I'm sorry that your part has been See More
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Hey, it's fine, I don't mind if I'm a small addition, I'm in there, right? :D
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Nah, not this girl!
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on January 13, 2016
I'm glad you didn't get angry...usually when I give a part to one of my friends, if it's short, they get mad
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on January 13, 2016
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on January 12, 2016
Duuude nice!
And may I make a suggestion for my OC to be included, please?
Her name is Jackie,and she is Sonic's wife.
Pwetty pwease???? *Puss In Boots eyes*
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I don't see why not.
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on January 08, 2016
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on January 07, 2016
Nice job so far :)
Keep this story going, I have a feeling it will become a big hit within Qfeast's Sonic fanbase!
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This is the first time we talked each other. This still makes me smile. *hugs*
https://www.qfeast.com/story/KH7XDN/6-months-treasure-hunt-2
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*hugs back* I can't believe it... that long ago...
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on April 28, 2016
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on April 28, 2016
Thanks, I hope to be good enough
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Thanks, I'll do it.
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on January 04, 2016
I'm sure you will be, just keep working at it, and you'll get better.
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on January 04, 2016
XD I love how Amy was like like "lalala....SONICS IN TROUBLE! ARHHHHHH!" XD it's like she knows o.o
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I have to thank you sapphire. It's thanks to you if I found again the passion for Sonic. So...THANKS A LOT!?
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Dun dun duunnnn XD
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on January 04, 2016
You're a hero, Sapph! XD
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on January 04, 2016
Oh- wait really? Haha! That's awesome! Thanks! :D
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on January 04, 2016
I'm glad that you're liking it.?
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on January 04, 2016
Niiiiiiiiiice. :3
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on January 04, 2016