Redik the hedgehog

Redik the hedgehog

This is the story of a hedgehog, an experiment, born to kill Sonic and his friends. This is my story. Thanks for reading this, I hope you enjoy.

published on January 04, 2016completed

In to Eggman's lair

In to Eggman's lair I smashed into the base, and... it was empty?*...There is something wrong, I can feel it.* I focused...I could sense every bios in the base...their energy...was weird...Eggman must have done something to them.
*I can sense it! This is the energy of Delta-Bios! The same guy that the last time took away Eggman...I must not underestimate him*
I started to run in the base... but something was strange. No one was in that complex. So i decided that Eggman would have waited...
*If the energy of the bios is here..where are they?It's like they aren't here and at the same time they are...*
Nothing...the base was really empty.Then I found a room, with a machine. It was turned off. Suddenly the machine turned on, and a portal appeared in front of my eyes.
*What?! That's Mobius? Why is it full of Eggman's robots?*
Trough that portal I saw a lot of mobians, turned in Eggman's robots...
"Is this...the future?I ...will not be able...to stop Eggman?"
Suddenly  a female light blue robot hedgehog saw me, and started to run into me.I istinctively hit the machine, and it shutted down.
Another portal appeared, in the corner of the room, and it was showing another version of Mobius...this one was full of bios,and I was with them!
"This...CANNOT be the future!" I shutted down the machine one more time.
"You're right R3D1K,those weren't pictures of the future."
I turned back, and I saw him: Eggman. He was standing at the entrance of the room.
"Those are alternative universes. Universes where I win, and you obey."
I tried to hit him, but I went trough him.
"Ohohoh...You can't hit me now,this is just a hologram!If you want to see the real me, please, come here..." a holographic map of the complex appeared,with a huge room pointed in red.
"...and face your destiny! Ohohohoh!"
I left that laughing hologram and ran to the pointed room.
It was like a stadium... with several entrances for players.
"WELCOME TO MY PERSONAL COLISEUM R3D1K."Eggman's voice was shouting out of four huge speakers.
"MY NAME IS REDIK!!!!"
"YOU HAVE NOW TWO CHOICES: FIGHT AND DIE HERE,FOR YOUR PRECIOUS FRIENDS...
OR JOIN ME,AND LIVE LIKE A KING OVER MOBIAN AND HIS INHABITANTS!"
"NEVER! I WILL NEVER JOIN YOU EGGMAN!"
"VERY WELL...ROBOTS! BIOS! KILL HIM! DESTROY HIM! ERASE HIS EXISTANCE!"
Several robots and bios came from the entrances, but i couldn't lose.
The robots shooted me, the bios hit me...they were too many to defeat them without damage.
I slayed,and destroyed every robot an bios there was.
At the and of the battle, I was exhausted.I couldn't even stand.
Then...appeared him...Delta-Bios.
"Hey, how are you, Big bro?"
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Ok, thanks to all those who read this story,who remained with Redik until now and who asked me to continue this.
A special thanks goes to sapphirethehedgehog who made me rediscover the passion for Sonic's universe.(I know I have already said this but I wanted to thank you again)
Atsuko_Maeda_15_Acchan aka Jackie the Hedgehog, I'm sorry that your part has been See More
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Hey, it's fine, I don't mind if I'm a small addition, I'm in there, right? :D
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Nah, not this girl!
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on January 13, 2016
I'm glad you didn't get angry...usually when I give a part to one of my friends, if it's short, they get mad
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on January 13, 2016
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on January 13, 2016
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on January 12, 2016
Duuude nice!
And may I make a suggestion for my OC to be included, please?
Her name is Jackie,and she is Sonic's wife.
Pwetty pwease???? *Puss In Boots eyes*
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I don't see why not.
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on January 08, 2016
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on January 07, 2016
Nice job so far :)
Keep this story going, I have a feeling it will become a big hit within Qfeast's Sonic fanbase!
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This is the first time we talked each other. This still makes me smile. *hugs*
https://www.qfeast.com/story/KH7XDN/6-months-treasure-hunt-2
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*hugs back* I can't believe it... that long ago...
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on April 28, 2016
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on April 28, 2016
Thanks, I hope to be good enough
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Thanks, I'll do it.
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on January 04, 2016
I'm sure you will be, just keep working at it, and you'll get better.
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on January 04, 2016
XD I love how Amy was like like "lalala....SONICS IN TROUBLE! ARHHHHHH!" XD it's like she knows o.o
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I have to thank you sapphire. It's thanks to you if I found again the passion for Sonic. So...THANKS A LOT!?
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Dun dun duunnnn XD
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on January 04, 2016
You're a hero, Sapph! XD
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on January 04, 2016
Oh- wait really? Haha! That's awesome! Thanks! :D
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on January 04, 2016
I'm glad that you're liking it.?
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on January 04, 2016
Niiiiiiiiiice. :3
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on January 04, 2016