Redik the hedgehog

Redik the hedgehog

This is the story of a hedgehog, an experiment, born to kill Sonic and his friends. This is my story. Thanks for reading this, I hope you enjoy.

published on January 04, 2016completed

Two years dead?Wow...

Two years dead?Wow... ...Black...again...why is this happening...why am I still conscious? Am I dead? Where am I?
"You're surely full of questions aren't you?"A female voice spoke.
Who talked? Who's there?
"Relax, I don't want to harm you."
Who are you?
"Please tell me,do  you want to be alive?"
So...I'm dead...*starting to cry*I'm so sorry guys...I...I couldn't save you...
"What are you talking about? Your friends are fine"
What? But Chrono told me...
"He lied, to make you despair, to make you lose your fighting spirit"
That...That means the others are still alive! I...I have to go back! To see the others, tell them I'm alive...if they care of me...
"You doubt of your friends? Why do you think they don't care about you?"
I...have known them for a short time...maybe...they will forget me...
"Oh yeah, and Sonic and Tails weren't waiting for your return, and all the others weren't there to help you...wake up! Even if it was a short time they care about you."
Are you...sure about that?
"Absolutely, maybe they're waiting for you in this very moment, don't you think?"
...Who are you?
"Hehe, someone that will be very close to you, one day."
Uff...I hate these kind of things...
"You have to go now, Redik, my kind demon"
What? Wait! Let me see your face at least!
All went white, I woke up, I couldn't breathe ,I was underwater!
I swam to the surface and I took a large breath.I looked around and saw a coast.After reaching the coast I begun to run to reach a city.
Exhausted, I asked to a light-blue hedgehog girl:
"Excuse me, what town is this?"
"This is Maple Cove"
It's not far from Sonic's house."Thank you very much!"
"You're welcome."
I started to run again.
Now that I think about it , the girl was very cute...No, focus, you don't have the time to think this.
I arrived at Sonic's house, and knocked.A Pink hedgehog with brown hair opened.
"Yes, do you need something?"
"I-I'm sorry...I'm looking for Sonic the Hedgehog, he still live here?"I hoped not to have been wrong.
"Yes, just a moment, HEY SONIC, THERE IS SOMEONE FOR YOU.Please come."
"T-thank you"
"Are you a friend of his?"
"Huh? Y-yes..."
"Who's there Jackie?"Said Sonic coming down from the stairs. "He said to be a friend of yours"
"Hi Sonic..."
Sonic's eyes widened "You..." He seemed to have seen a ghost "I don't believe it...REDIK!" He ran in to me and hugged me.
"Ahah.Where were you? You disappeared for two years! We thought you were dead!"
T-two years? I was dead for two years?
"Wait for the others to discover that you're alive.You have to tell us everything happened on the moon."
So...that voice was right...Sonic didn't forget me...
"Oh yes, Redik, let me introduce you Jackie, my wife. Jackie this is Redik."
She came closer "Nice to meet you Redik."
We spent all the day talking, then the others arrived and...that has been a mess, at the end it was impossible to understand who was talking and who wasn't...but all of them have never forgotten me...and then there has been a party...I have already told that I don't like parties but...
Hehe...I had fun, I admit that. It was incredible, to see their smiling faces, to see that everyone was happy...
I learned that Eggman has not showed since the explosion of the moon base, but Chrono...he was still alive, somewhere...
I just focused on the party, and when it finished Sonic and Jackie asked me "If you want, you can stay here."
And I said no once again, but this time... "Just kidding!I'll gladly stay, but only until I get my own place.I don't want to be a bother.Deal?"
And Sonic answered "Deal".
From that time, we had a lot of adventures, one stranger than the other.
We fought against fishmen, saved Mobius from Gaea,we had a race against strange banana-men...we had fun, until Eggman came to us asking for help.




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Ok, thanks to all those who read this story,who remained with Redik until now and who asked me to continue this.
A special thanks goes to sapphirethehedgehog who made me rediscover the passion for Sonic's universe.(I know I have already said this but I wanted to thank you again)
Atsuko_Maeda_15_Acchan aka Jackie the Hedgehog, I'm sorry that your part has been See More
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Hey, it's fine, I don't mind if I'm a small addition, I'm in there, right? :D
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Nah, not this girl!
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on January 13, 2016
I'm glad you didn't get angry...usually when I give a part to one of my friends, if it's short, they get mad
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on January 13, 2016
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on January 12, 2016
Duuude nice!
And may I make a suggestion for my OC to be included, please?
Her name is Jackie,and she is Sonic's wife.
Pwetty pwease???? *Puss In Boots eyes*
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I don't see why not.
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on January 08, 2016
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on January 07, 2016
Nice job so far :)
Keep this story going, I have a feeling it will become a big hit within Qfeast's Sonic fanbase!
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This is the first time we talked each other. This still makes me smile. *hugs*
https://www.qfeast.com/story/KH7XDN/6-months-treasure-hunt-2
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*hugs back* I can't believe it... that long ago...
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on April 28, 2016
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on April 28, 2016
Thanks, I hope to be good enough
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Thanks, I'll do it.
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on January 04, 2016
I'm sure you will be, just keep working at it, and you'll get better.
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on January 04, 2016
XD I love how Amy was like like "lalala....SONICS IN TROUBLE! ARHHHHHH!" XD it's like she knows o.o
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I have to thank you sapphire. It's thanks to you if I found again the passion for Sonic. So...THANKS A LOT!?
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Dun dun duunnnn XD
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on January 04, 2016
You're a hero, Sapph! XD
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on January 04, 2016
Oh- wait really? Haha! That's awesome! Thanks! :D
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on January 04, 2016
I'm glad that you're liking it.?
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on January 04, 2016
Niiiiiiiiiice. :3
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