Redik the hedgehog

Redik the hedgehog

This is the story of a hedgehog, an experiment, born to kill Sonic and his friends. This is my story. Thanks for reading this, I hope you enjoy.

published on January 04, 2016completed

Kill The Brother

Kill The Brother Eggman's POV
Mmmh...I didn't expect this...that little traitor has a lot of energy...*smirk* maybe I can use this on my advantage.

He seemed to be everywhere, thanks to his time control, but he was acting like a coward, trying every time to hit me on the back.
I blocked one of his attacks, just in time. He disappeared, and another hit from behind. This time I was ready, I dodged it and countered,he seemed to feel it, and I struck him  again in the face. He was on the ground, so I struck again, and again... why was I feeling a sense of déjà-vu?
"Ahahahah! You will never be able to beat me, Big-Bro!" Now he was in the middle of the coliseum.Damn, he rewinded the time.
"STOP CALLING ME LIKE THAT!" I ran, and I ran, and I ran..."STOP WITH THESE TRICKS CHRONO! FIGHT FOR REAL!"
My rage grew, making me stronger, but making me also lose my mind.
"Ok big-bro,no ,Redik, no more tricks." A cyan aura came out of his body, and a dark-red one came out of mine.
We both now had the same power, the same purpose: Kill The Brother.
"...Are you ready? Now we'll fight for real"
We both dashed to hit the other, and flew on the ceiling.Then we run on the ceiling,we flew in the air, hitting whenever we could.
Both of us slayed, hit, struck...without knowing what would be the decisive blow.
The whole place was full of the loud sounds of the battle.Our movements...seemed to be at lightspeed. I can't tell how long was the fight.
"TIME STORM!"A myriad of rays flew against me, and I resisted as much as I could.Everything exploded around me.

Chrono's POV
"So, did you like my last move?" It's impossible that he survived. It's just im...possible?
He was there, standing in front of my eyes...wrapped in his aura...
He's seriously injuried, I can see that, so why is he still standing? Ugh...I'm too weak now to rewind the time...Tch...What...
What is that?
The Dark-red aura wrapped his arm, making it looks like a demon's arm. "Rrrrrgh...."
"I don't think I will like this..."
"...Demon..."He charged his arm, like he would hit me.
"W-w-w-wait, time-out!"
"TEKKEEEEN!" He charged me, with that energy wrapping his arm, at an overwhelming speed.I couldn't react.
He struck me, sending me against the ceiling, through the ceiling, in the space...I couldn't breath...I fainted, conscious of my imminent death...

Eggman's POV
Oh-oh...better go away...
I went in my flying pod when suddenly I heard a howl.

"RRRRAAAAAAARRRGGGGHHHH!"
And then, the moon base exploded in a red light. Something was flying towards Mobius, something orange, something dead.
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Ok, thanks to all those who read this story,who remained with Redik until now and who asked me to continue this.
A special thanks goes to sapphirethehedgehog who made me rediscover the passion for Sonic's universe.(I know I have already said this but I wanted to thank you again)
Atsuko_Maeda_15_Acchan aka Jackie the Hedgehog, I'm sorry that your part has been See More
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Hey, it's fine, I don't mind if I'm a small addition, I'm in there, right? :D
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Nah, not this girl!
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on January 13, 2016
I'm glad you didn't get angry...usually when I give a part to one of my friends, if it's short, they get mad
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on January 13, 2016
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on January 12, 2016
Duuude nice!
And may I make a suggestion for my OC to be included, please?
Her name is Jackie,and she is Sonic's wife.
Pwetty pwease???? *Puss In Boots eyes*
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I don't see why not.
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on January 08, 2016
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on January 07, 2016
Nice job so far :)
Keep this story going, I have a feeling it will become a big hit within Qfeast's Sonic fanbase!
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This is the first time we talked each other. This still makes me smile. *hugs*
https://www.qfeast.com/story/KH7XDN/6-months-treasure-hunt-2
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*hugs back* I can't believe it... that long ago...
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on April 28, 2016
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on April 28, 2016
Thanks, I hope to be good enough
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Thanks, I'll do it.
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on January 04, 2016
I'm sure you will be, just keep working at it, and you'll get better.
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on January 04, 2016
XD I love how Amy was like like "lalala....SONICS IN TROUBLE! ARHHHHHH!" XD it's like she knows o.o
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I have to thank you sapphire. It's thanks to you if I found again the passion for Sonic. So...THANKS A LOT!?
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Dun dun duunnnn XD
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on January 04, 2016
You're a hero, Sapph! XD
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on January 04, 2016
Oh- wait really? Haha! That's awesome! Thanks! :D
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on January 04, 2016
I'm glad that you're liking it.?
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on January 04, 2016
Niiiiiiiiiice. :3
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on January 04, 2016