The Red-Ribboned Killer

The Red-Ribboned Killer

Apparently, once I put in completed for my other story, I can't change it back so I can add another chapter. Hope you like it!(Picture almost has nothing to do with her appearance. She has long dark brown hair but kept in a ponytail with a red ribbon, a blue flowy shirt, jeans, and blue sneakers.)

published on September 02, 2014not completed

Kayla

Slendy opened the door.
???: Hi mister! My name's Kayla!
Slendy: ...*about to close the door*
???: Wait! *puts her foot in front of the doorway to prevent the door from closing* I have your doll! *pulls out a doll that looks like Slendy*
Slendy: I appreciate that you have a doll of me (not really) but you shouldn't be here-
Suddenly, Slendy just moved aside and let that little girl step into the house.
???: Be nicer when you greet guests!
Me: Um...Excuse me, but who're you?
???: Oh? I'm Kayla! I ran away from home but somehow I came across voodoo dolls of everyone from the the entire world!(I just don't know how she got voodoo dolls  of everyone. I'm just making this up as I go along)
Me: You can stay...(I should buy more beds...)
Kayla: Can I come?
Me: Huh?
Kayla: Can I come with you to buy more beds?
Me: No I have to- *just realizes* You can read my mind?!
Kayla: Uh huh! I was born with it!
Me: O.O Anyways, I have to figure out which room you're going to stay in...
Kayla: *goes the BEN and Jeff* Hiya!
BEN: (Aww! She's adorable!) Ummm...hello...
Jeff: Who's this kid?
BEN: *whispers* I have NO idea...
Kayla: My name's Kayla! I'll be living here too!
Jeff: (How did she even get in...?)
Kayla: I just came in using my dolls!
Jeff: Dolls?
Kayla: Yep! I have dolls of everyone from the entire world!
Jeff: ...*evil grin* Everyone?
Kayla: Uh huh!
Jeff: Well, can you do me a favor? *whispers something*
Kayla: Sure!
~1 hour later~
Me: I decided to put you in the in my room. I'll be the one to sleep in the living room.
Kayla and Jeff: *one big smile*
Me: What's going on...?
Kayla: *pulls out my doll and Slendy's doll*
Me: *realizes she can't move* Huh?!
Kayla: *controls Slendy's doll, making him walk over to the living room and stand really close to Sophie*
Me: Kayla...What are you-
Kayla controlled our dolls and made us kiss.
Kayla and Jeff: *laughs*
Me: (I SWEAR JEFF! You are SO going to be dead when I get out of this!)
~A few minutes later~
Me: *realizes she can move on her own now* YOU ARE SO DEAD! JANE!
Jane: *runs into the room with an evil smile* Let's kill the douchebag!
Kayla: *grabs Jane's doll and makes her stop moving*
Me: UGH! *removes her red ribbon from her hair, gets a piece of paper that says "Just taking out the trash", kicks him in the you-know-where, and leaves like a boss*
Jeff: Ouch...(Been a long time since I felt hurt...)
BEN: Hilarious! XD
Me: *walks back to the living room and high fives BEN*
Jeff: Remind...me...that...I...should...never...be...here...when...you...two...are...around...
BEN and Me: Hahahaha!
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I love how crystal says badwords!xD
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on September 12, 2014
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on September 12, 2014
When is the next chap
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Probably today or tomorrow...
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on September 12, 2014
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on September 11, 2014
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on September 11, 2014
Awsome!!
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Thank you!!! Did you finish you chapter on lets play hide the soul?
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on September 10, 2014
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on September 10, 2014
Awsome!also i made a chap of lets play hide the soul
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I read it! Loved it! :D
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Ok awsome!
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on September 09, 2014
You'll see!:D
(probably going to make the next one tomorrow or somewhere along there...)
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on September 09, 2014
When r u doing the next chap?
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on September 09, 2014
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on September 09, 2014
Can't wait to read it!!!
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on September 09, 2014
Im making chap three and adding Stuff to the chap 2
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on September 09, 2014
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on September 09, 2014
Im adding things right now
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on September 09, 2014
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on September 09, 2014
Soooooooooo awsome!i ove it!write moré please!
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Thanks!:D
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on September 06, 2014
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on September 06, 2014
About the daddy thing,Looks like the song of miku this is the link to understand https://m.youtube.com/watch?v=EuoePPdKGnY
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Whoa...
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on September 04, 2014
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on September 04, 2014