The Red-Ribboned Killer

The Red-Ribboned Killer

Apparently, once I put in completed for my other story, I can't change it back so I can add another chapter. Hope you like it!(Picture almost has nothing to do with her appearance. She has long dark brown hair but kept in a ponytail with a red ribbon, a blue flowy shirt, jeans, and blue sneakers.)

published on September 02, 2014not completed

How I Got my Name

After we left the attic, everyone gathered to the dining room.
Laughing Jack: *points at Sally(the one I found at the forest)* Who's that?
Sally: *widens eyes* I...I'm Sally...
Ticci Toby: Y-y-you have the same name as *twitches* her? *points at the CP Sally*
Me: I can see this will probably be a problem...How about we change your name?
Sally: Well...yes...Maybe to Kelly or something...
Me: Kelly? I guess it could work...Yep! It fits you!
Sally(now to Kelly): Thank you...
Jeff: So...how was your first kill?
Me: REALLY?
Jeff: What? The once-very-sweet girl actually killed someone? Come on, tell us about it!
Me: *whispers to everyone but Kelly* NOT IN FRONT OF KELLY! Her dad was my...
Everyone: Ohhhhh.....
Kelly: What's the matter?
Me: Oh nothing...*whispers* I'll probably tell you afterwards...
Laughing Jack: *whispers* YAAAAY!
We soon finished breakfast and went on to do our normal stuff.
~5 hours later~
BEN: Hey, Sophie! You might want to see this!
BEN led me to the T.V. in the living room. The news was on.
News: Our top story: A dead man was found in the forest. He had multiple stabs on his stomach. All that was left was a red ribbon and a note saying, "Just taking out trash." We may have an idea who the murderer is. She might look like this:
A picture of a really ugly woman was shown. I guess you can almost always never rely on the news...
News: Also, we just discovered the victim had a daughter. She might have been killed too but no evidence of her body has been found yet. Now onto-
BEN turned off the T.V.
BEN: That was you, wasn't it?
Me: Yes...
BEN: Hmm...Pretty good for a beginner...So how did it go?
Me: Well, he grabbed me like if I was a grizzly bear or something, but I stabbed him on his stomach. On the verge of his death, I stated that I can't take it being in a world full of scumbags like him. And then...
Jeff: So that's what happened...
Me: WHAT THE?! Were you there the whole time?
Jeff: Ehhh....Long enough to hear the whole story...
Everyone except Kelly and Mom came out in all different directions.
(was hiding under the table)E.J: Ehh...Wouldn't it be better if you went after his kidney?
(was hiding under the bed)L.J: Awww! You should have searched his pockets if he had candy or not!
(was hiding in the closet)Slendy: It would have been nice if I was there...
Me: SLENDY TOO?! And please! It was just my first time!
Jeff: Well, we do have one thing in common: we both use a knife.
Me: No kidding...
BEN turned on the news once again.
News: The murder of this man remains clueless. The victim showed blood on his fists, which probably solves the disappearance of his daughter, Sally.
A policeman then appears on the news.
Police: We now think that maybe the victim may have killed his daughter Sally. We believe someone who was close to Sally may have taken revenge after the murder. After all, there was a girl's ribbon in the scene of the crime. We call her, "The Red-Ribboned Killer." Until she is caught, we advise you to keep your doors shut.
News: And now, back on to-
BEN turned the T.V. off.
Me: THAT'S what they're calling me? COOL!
Jeff: So I take it you're happy being called that?
Me: Yep! I LOVE red and I always wear ribbons on my hair!
Slendy: *smiles* I'm glad you like it...
Me: Although, I don't know if I'm ever going to do THAT again...
Jeff: *whispers* But didn't it feel so good to have the stress you were holding up inside you to be released?
Me: Huh?! How did you know I had stress?
Jeff: It's obvious, really. You, regaining all your memories especially THAT one, it's gotta have some stress on you. Plus, if you have too much stress, doesn't it lead people to suicide or insane?
Me: Why are you just telling me this now?
Jeff: *whispers* Because we all know about your 6th grade...
~Flashback~
Back in 6th grade, there sits me sitting alone. I was picked on the most for no reason. I only had one or two friends, but no BEST friends. My friends would just talk to another person if I talked to them long enough. I was so lonely, I was almost driven to...that. I never did self-harming...But I DID consider that...
~End of flashback~
Jeff: Yep, we all know about that...
Me: Why didn't you come? *tears up* WHY?! *cries*
Jeff: Well, think of it this way- you, on the verge of committing THAT- don't you think it will drive you there more if you knew about your lost memory?
Me: *still cries but looks up* I guess...
*knock on the door*
Slendy: Who could that be?
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I love how crystal says badwords!xD
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on September 12, 2014
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on September 12, 2014
When is the next chap
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Probably today or tomorrow...
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on September 11, 2014
Awsome!!
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Thank you!!! Did you finish you chapter on lets play hide the soul?
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on September 10, 2014
Awsome!also i made a chap of lets play hide the soul
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I read it! Loved it! :D
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Ok awsome!
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on September 09, 2014
You'll see!:D
(probably going to make the next one tomorrow or somewhere along there...)
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on September 09, 2014
When r u doing the next chap?
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on September 09, 2014
Can't wait to read it!!!
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on September 09, 2014
Im making chap three and adding Stuff to the chap 2
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on September 09, 2014
Im adding things right now
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on September 09, 2014
Soooooooooo awsome!i ove it!write moré please!
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Thanks!:D
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on September 06, 2014
About the daddy thing,Looks like the song of miku this is the link to understand https://m.youtube.com/watch?v=EuoePPdKGnY
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Whoa...
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