Seven admirers

Seven admirers

You are Viola, a brave independent young lady, sixteen years old, Hanging around the forest as usual, come across a beautiful wounded bird, which leads you to Eleven unique Suitors, Each eager to know about you and make you ..their BRIDE! Which gentleman out of those perfect guys will win your heart? (Please read intro)

published on August 20, 2018not completed

Waiting in the woods

Waiting in the woods The whole school day you were silent & looking outside . You were paying attention to lessons but didn't care about the messy gossips on you. you instead keep a dreamy face. Ria tried to approach but felt bad for not having trust on you and felt you would be angry at her so she slid in her chair looking at you and again at phone. you notice her and give her a bright smile. you felt your life was like one of the fairy tales. But a little disappointed that the school life isn't that good, as you were scolded by the science teacher for not submitting project while all others did, got scolded by math teacher for not being attentive, Gossips, ..but you didn't feel too miserable thanks to the surprises & shocks, you were immersed in curiosity & thoughts. But suddenly thought, what if all this was a trick , just to fool you. You were having many emotions and feeling drowsy as you didn't get to sleep all night.

After school you wore your bag on shoulders, and ran down stairs and headed to forest. You so wanted to know what the matter was. before you went , you bought the bird with you , which was still recovering from the injuries, in a small cage, which is actually your piggy bank. You looked around, seeing it's struggles, you wanted to free it, but waited for the "owner" to come.
It did look like a pet, as Ria suggested before.

The fog of the forest cleared. the birds were chirping all around. The blue color in sky was fading from blue to grey . the clouds formed in the so clear sky. The lightning was booming in the sky. Little scared , you run away, and try to find a place, but felt dizzy & slept under a tree.

You opened your eyes, and saw a Tall , brunette, the same man before from the cafe. you fluttered your eyes and could hear him softly speaking to you. you get up quickly . it was heavily raining. he handed you an umbrella, and said "You are wet. Come on in." he pointed towards the car. you refused his offer. but he asked again soothingly, and his pleasant eyes made you feel at ease &  think he's not a danger to worry about. you asked him to stop at the end of the woods, from where she'll walk to the house. he agreed and you sat in the luxurious big car. You wondered how the two guys were related, you were not sure they were siblings because the black haired seemed very young & had no resemblance to the other one. You expected to see a driver, but , in fact he was the one driving this big car. then you doubted he was a car driver, but he seemed to wear two seemingly gold chains. You were not very sure. this guy looked more like a royalty than the carefree black head.
You thought.
You sat behind the car and he glanced at you two or three times. After a minute or so , he gave his coat to you. you were honored and also felt good to feel the fragrance of lilies , which was a car freshener & also the classical music made you lighten up.
You unknowingly slept in the back seat , as you were sleep deprived. You could feel someone watching you and coming close to you. and felt a gentle touch on your forehead.
You woke up and saw yourselves trapped in a room. You tried your best to open it but the door was not opening up. You saw a shadow near the window & someone was opening the door. The door opened and you saw the brunette gentleman. You felt scared and ran to him & hugged him and said "Where are we" . The guy didn't respond to you. You looked into his eyes which went from pleasant and calm to Beady evil eyes. you pushed him away but he locked the door back & you had no way to escape. you had the most crazy idea, to leap out from the Window, but sadly the rods didn't let you to. You couldn't fit in it. You saw him slowly coming closer . you freaked out yet held  the tears as he would know you're scared. You picked up a vase & tried to hit him with it but before you did he gently held your hands to the back and you were trying to let go. He pushed you towards the bed & asked you "So, How much money do you want ?"  "What the heck?" you shouted back

"For making you MY..My possession" he held you by the chin . That's just when someone knocked the door. He opened the door slightly , to make you away from their sight. The brunette pushed the door and locked it from out and went away. You didn't know how to escape. You pushed the door, then you crashed the door with  the same umbrella . The door cracked a little. then with all the might, you kicked it hard & escaped.

You ran in the hallway , corridors. you see shiny chandeliers hanging elegantly . the house was huge and luxurious but you didn't get impressed much. You just wanted to be back safe & sound. You even lost trust in the black haired as he was involved in this.

You saw him in the hallway but rushed from the side covering your face with your jacket . He stared at you but you ran away , looking back , afraid, if he recognized you, then you bump into a Guy, With spiky red hair , Muscular, and with olive green eyes, perplexed , as you fell in his arms.

He hugged you, as you cried , and you held him tight , then , coming to your senses , you stood straight, your face got cherry red, he rubbed your tears & face with a cloth in his hands. he smiled like a concerned parent, even if you're a complete stranger to him, you thought.

"What's the matter dear child" he kind of  sat on his knees as he was a bit too tall.
"How are you inside ? " he asked you leaning towards.
"who is it, brother, a daughter of some client?" A guy, a hand   on his pockets, a hand scratching his fluffy sliver hair. He looked at you keenly .
"Will you take care of her? will you, i have to prepare today's buffet!" red head chirped
"Why me? I'm too lazy to go!!!" the silver haired whined
"I'm Amber, Please make yourselves home!" the red haired gave you a warm smile
"T-thanks" you groaned
"and it's Jaden, ready to adviE anyone. my body is lazy not my throat" the silver haired gave a small wink
"Let's go to my room, the bed's too cozy! " He said happily
"What...?" you felt awkward.
You reached his room, which was full of hand-drawn doodles, Which were elegant and gorgeous comics. And some were painting. Here and there, hung . It was such an artsy room.
"I'm heck lazy but when it comes to art, my battery's full!" he beamed.
He seemed dull but his smile was so bright that you blushed. He was really like a bright sun. He suddenly blanked out and the room was filled with melancholic feeling. you  hated it & said "why ...did you stop smiling?"  . "Oh, me, err, nothing...i just" he looked you right into the yes, you were deeply attracted to his icy cold blue eyes , but you realized that you were a bit close, you apologized. he looked away & changed the topic . "Man i'm so tired. i'm gonna sleep! " he jumped into his bed and rolled in his blanket. As you got wet before, you felt very cold and started sneezing and coughing. you were shaking . he walked to you & covered you with the blanket , and went to his table, with a jug placed there "I'm gonna make some tea for you! and me! it's simple though, just pour the packet in the jug , have it!" he gave you a big cup and he sipped into his tea too. You were red with fever & also blushing hard. you never entered
a guy's room before. You felt honored and sweet.
You sipped into the tea , and , leaned your head , tiredly , on his shoulders. But again felt too embarrassed and tried to remove but he gently tapped your head "Feel at home, remember, Amber said so!" he said, pouting his mouth.
"Yeah...i know ." you looked down at the floor, trying to hide your face.

"Come on" he said patting the bed . "Sleep here, with me, the bed's cozy and warm, you'll feel better"
you didn't know if he was too innocent or too playful. you guessed he was both.
You insisted but he grabbed your arm and two of them fall on the bed & he giggled lightly and got calm again. you somehow felt comfortable with him..awkwardly comfortable. you felt genuinely happy.

"This weather..ahh..wait , sit still. i'll draw a portrait for you" he said and bought few pencils and erasers. While he worked on it, you started at his charming style and grace which was too Classy & Stylish. The way he folded his sleeves, he flipped his fluffy hair, and his smile was his cold eyes were somehow pleasant and not cold. Even being Icy cold and calm his smile spoke a different story. "Done" he said , in few seconds.
"Wow, that's very fast!" you exclaimed .
You both giggled like elementary kids , hanging out. that's when your happiness faded, as few guards thrashed the door and the brunette entered "Quite cheeky , you are, dear future wife" he said harshly even though his words were not rude
"it"s you! " you said in horror, licking Your sweat.

"Hiro..." Jaden looked awfully surprised & shocked as he let loose your hand.
"Jaden!who is that harasser? call police! do you know him?"

You looked at jaden"s worried face and cried a few tears
Jaden looked at you but then he closed his eyes & was deeply thinking.

He finally took the courage to approach the brunette and asked him "Hiro..what is the meaning of this?"
"Don't tell me..so you're the one who got the bird?" He asked

"So what if i did? I just saved the poor animal. Is it a crime that you guys are locking me in an empty room!?!?" You shouted on top of your lungs.
"Brother...you locked her? In a room? Thats shameful . Where did your grace go away? " he asked , plesantly sipping into the tea and wiping his mouth.
"I dont think i have to answer my brother,that too my younger brother ,anyway ,Miss Violet, i apologise for all that i did  to you; right now , make yourselves at home ; and please ; guards, show her around and take her luggage to the room, oh wait, i wonder if she has any, .... Ms Violet, have you brought any kind of luguage ? " he asked holding her hand gently and kissing it.
Your cheeks flushed red ,  but you got irritated the most. Back then he was trying to harass you and in front of others he is like a pure gentleman.
You wabged to tell Amber or Jaden about it but were not sure if they would understand and believe you.
You walked to your room with a couple of guards. Your room was not old dusty attic but a beautiful cute room with elegant red carpet and sweet perfume smells.
There was a mini garden in the balcony ,everything  according to your tastes.
A spavious and gorgeous room with comfortable bed. You rarely experienced this in five star hotels where your dad booked a few times. The guard said the brunette made this arrangement for you, or ms viola , yesterday. You felt glad to know that but still angered on him.
You were sulking and feeling miserable. There was no chnace for escaping. The guard were right there at the entrance . And one couldn't possibly leap through the window as they could break all of their bones. The window was too deep. You were brave but did not dare to.

The sun was going down. The day seemed to pass by real fast. The sky went from bright blue to an eerie grey and a shade of y-orange was spread in the sky, finally faded to darker greyish-blue .

Soon after you heard someone calling you by your name and you looked down from the balcony and saw a young lady waving at you . She threw a rope on you and gestured you to climb on it. "C'mon , fly , lil birdie " she held the rope tightly and you leap through the window and fell into her arms. You blushed a little and smiled at her. She winked back.
You stood on the ground and said " Thank you so much for saving me ! I really appreciate it !!! You're a saviour! " you grinned
She closed her eyes pleased and  she softly spoke "It's my pleasure to be at some use. Anyway , you are miss violet, aren't  you, dear. She said , standing too close, rubbing your nose.
You moved back and froze there for a couple minutes looking at her . Something in her attracted you. Mostly her lustrous eyes which were pure black and watery, which entranced you.

"You're  not just kind but lovely too. I love your dress. It really suits you ma'am.  I wish i owned something like that. Even if i did , I'd look average." You complimented
She narrowed  her eyes.
"Really? I made it myself. I can make something for you too. You will definitely look gorgeous , little canary" she said
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The pic above is how Jaden looks like
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