Swift's story

Swift's story

I got bored so i decided to make this story. Basically, this is Swift's backstory, so... yea... Enjoy! :D

published on May 17, 2014not completed

I'm a wha.?

I'm a wha.? I wake up on the softest bed I've ever laid down on. I quickly got up noticing I was in an unfamiliar place. The bed had ruby colored drapes hanging from the top, and I was wearing a... dress?!?! 'What the hell!?!?!' I thought with the most utterly confused face I had ever put on 'I was in a jumpsuit... now I'm in a dress?!?!'. As I pulled the drapes open to get off the bed and take a look around, I looked at the nightstand and it looked like it had golden embroidery on it. The further I searched the room, the more I grew confused.
I sat down, back on the bed, and looked at the nightstand again. It had a crown on it. It had golden outlines, and it was filled with ruby, with four diamonds, and diamond designs on it. As I got up from the bed, my knee grew weak and I almost fell making the loudest noise that even scared me. In came a stranger, rushing as if he's running away from the cops, because he just killed somebody. "Your highness are you alright?!" The stranger said with worry in his voice. "Your highness? What do you mean? I've never even met you. Who are you?" I start asking questions like I just caught the criminal, and now I'm trying to prove he's guilty.
"My, whatever do you mean, my queen?" Now things are getting strange. 'Your highness? My queen? What the hell is he talking about?!' "All I know is that I am no queen of anybody what-so-ever ." He laughed at my response like he was just proven innocent when he know he's guilty. "My league, you are quite the entertainer. But leave that job to the jester. Now you must come out, and see your subjects.Their waiting." He put the crown on my head, and pushed me out of the room to the terrace.
It was night, but a beautiful night. All the stars could be seen.They looked like snow falling down on a nice, cool, winter day. As I made my appearance to what seemed the biggest crowd in history, they all cheered and shouted, as if I magically saved them from their worst nightmare.
The strange guy who claims I'm the queen said in a low voice "Your majesty, say something to your subjects, they eagerly await your voice to be heard." "What do they want to hear?" He didn't respond back after my response. He stayed silence as if he didn't know what to say to me, or he thought I was acting like a complete idiot. Well after a while, I finally say something that might or might not be stupid "Good evening my fellow subjects," of course, I went on as if I was their  queen, I had to wing it if I wanted answers. "We are gathered here tonight, for... for.. for... erm..."
Everybody started whispering, and gasping, as if I was an idiot. The stranger leaned in closer and told me "Your highness, we are gathered here tonight for a surprise, you have been planning for the past month." I start thinking fast to see what i could be, I look to all sides possible and I even look down to my so-called 'subjects', but I didn't find anything that could give not even a clue to me.
The stranger leaned in again and told me " Your majesty, you have been planning a execution, to the most wanted person in the kingdom ever to step foot. Now it's your call, my league." I set my eyes back to the crowd, puff up my chest with courage, and say "My fellow subjects, we are gathered here tonight on the most momentums of nights. Where we will finally get the freedom we deserve!" Everybody started cheering, and jumping up and down, and screaming "LONG LIVE THE QUEEN!". But when I speak they all shut their mouths as if I just fired a gun and their listening to where it came from. "Tonight we get rid of what should've been taken care of long ago, tonight is the execution of the most wanted criminal in the kingdom!" Everybody started cheering again and shouting "LONG LIVE THE QUEEN!", music started and people started dancing. Then the gates to go inside the castle open, and everybody rushes inside. As I get off the terrace into whats seem to be my room I start thinking and panicking 'If i'm a queen... then... is there a KING?!?!'
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NOOOO!! SWIFT!!
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on September 03, 2014
Beyonce's not gonna cheer me up, NOT WHEN I KNOW YOU'RE GONNA F*CKING DIE!
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Welp! Beyonce tried!
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YEAH! XD
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on September 03, 2014
OMG ME TOO!!!!
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on September 03, 2014
I LOVE 5SOS!!
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on September 03, 2014
No, if you wanna cheer me up, you'd have to get some 5SOS (5 Seconds Of Summer)
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on September 03, 2014
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on September 03, 2014
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on September 03, 2014
Hey yo! The story had been updated!
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on September 03, 2014
Hey, Swift! Can I be in your story?
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on July 25, 2014
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on July 25, 2014
*blacked out*
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XD
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on July 14, 2014
*wakes back up* JUST KIDDING!!!
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on July 14, 2014
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on July 14, 2014
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on July 14, 2014
Cool!!
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Thank you!
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No Pwoblem ^-^
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on July 14, 2014
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on July 14, 2014
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on July 14, 2014
God this was cool!
Are we all getting added or just certain people?
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I'm adding whoever wants to be In it! I don't add whoever I want, they might not want to so yeah... Do you wanna be in it? :)
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Oh, I had an idea. Maybe when Jackie comes in, it could be like, related to Dauntless or something. You know, with Sonic and Camille being Dauntless leaders and Jackie is the Queen of Dauntless.
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on July 02, 2014
Np ;)
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on June 30, 2014
Alright! I'll use that! Thanks!
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on June 30, 2014
I've got a pic on my wall of me in Dauntless with a gun if you wanna use that!
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on June 30, 2014
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on June 30, 2014
I was thinking of doing that! XD
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on June 30, 2014
Sure, yeah, but when I come in, maybe it could be some sort of situation with a bad guy, and I kinda help to stop the bad guy Dauntless style!!!
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on June 30, 2014
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on June 30, 2014
Awesome!
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on June 30, 2014
Cool!!!
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Thank you!
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on June 30, 2014
XD I just can't' wait t write to he next part!
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on June 30, 2014
I Know The Both Of Us So Cool!!
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on June 30, 2014
Don't worry! I'll Make the next chapter tommrow! It's just getting so excited, I'm even getting suspense!
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on June 30, 2014
I Can't Wait For The Next Chapter :D
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on June 30, 2014
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on June 30, 2014
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on June 30, 2014
Sure! anything for a sonic fan! ^3^
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on June 04, 2014
Oh my god I love coming home and I can be in your story two
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on June 04, 2014
Le sank chu!
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on June 03, 2014
Love your story Swift!
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on June 03, 2014
Just wait for le next chapter.
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on May 28, 2014
I'm confused
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on May 24, 2014
Don't say it!!!! Just don't say it!!!! I want people guess!!!!!!
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Kk ^.^
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on June 10, 2014
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on May 23, 2014
Hmm..I have a idea why may happen..
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on May 23, 2014
Not quite just wait until the next chapter
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on May 21, 2014
So wait. she's a ROYAL?!?!
I'm confused (no offence)
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on May 21, 2014
Thank you!
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on May 19, 2014
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on May 18, 2014
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on May 18, 2014
Thank you!
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on May 18, 2014
Good Story Swift
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on May 18, 2014