Crimson Snoe

this is a christmas story about a girl, boy, and demon. who the demon is, is never confirmed, so use your imagination!

published on December 27, 2016completed

The Girl

        Phew! Thought Crimson. I’m so glad to get Emily off of my back. Emily was the chairman of the dance decor. She would not stop getting on on her for not having a band yet. Crimson was so happy when Emily called to ask if she found performers. Of coarse Nate would say yes, so she told Emily “Yes”.
The Next Day
        Today was the dance and Crimson had to get ready as soon as she got home. She would be going to the dance with the cutest boy at school.
She got out her dress, did her hair, and painted her nails. Now she would just wait for her ride.
BEEEP! BEEEP! There he is. I better go. “Bye! See ya later!” she called to her mom as she walked out the door. She got in the car, and off she left.


        She was all happy, then the next thing she knew, was white. And that was it. Nothing else. No pain, no noise, nothing. Just White.


        He walked in, knowing he was a little over half an hour late. The only way Aaron’s band would come play was if he came too, so, he came late. He walked in, and everything was trashed. Streamers were ripped from walls, balloons popped, the band’s instruments broken, tables overturned, and red liquid that he hopped was punch. He saw a hunched figure in the corner. He walked over to see who, or what, it was. “Hello?” his voice was shaky. “Who are you?” he bent down close to it. It turned around, not looking up. “Let me see your face.” Nate was worried if they were hurt. The girl slowly looked up. And to Nate’s horror, the girls eyes were all White.
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Awesome story and keep up the great work ??
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