Divergent - Sonic Style (The Story)

Divergent - Sonic Style (The Story)

At long last, it's here! You've been waiting for it, and it's the story of Divergent, told in the style of Sonic the Hedgehog!!! The actual Sonic characters are the leaders/representatives, whilst the confirmed OC's are the initiates.

published on May 12, 2014not completed

Making The Choice (Part 1)

Making The Choice (Part 1) Crimson
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All of the Erudite have now chosen. It is now the turn of the Dauntless dependants.
Me included.
"Justine."
A cat called Justine walks up to the bowls. The man offers her the knife, and she slits her wrist. We all watch as she looks at the bowls. She squeezes her hand, and her blood falls into a bowl.
"Dauntless."
The first Dauntless-born initiate.
A few more names are called out after her, and I still wait, anxiously.
"Crimson."
My turn.
I walk over to the bowls, where the Abnegation man offers me the knife, which I take. "Thanks."
I look at the bowls before slitting my wrist. If my test tells me to remain Dauntless, then so be it.
I let my blood drip into one of the bowls, watching as it sizzles on the coals.
"Dauntless."
The Dauntless roar at the top of their voices.
I'm not going anywhere.

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Lea-Anne
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"Lea-Anne."
This is it. My choice.
Dauntless, or Erudite.
I know my brother is carefully watching. He'd want me to stay with him in Dauntless. It's where our family is.
I take the knife and walk over to the bowls. I glance at the pale water of Erudite, then at the burning hot coals of Dauntless.
But where should I let my blood fall?
I slit my wrist and squeeze my hand above the bowl containing the coals. As my blood sizzles, I breathe a sigh of relief.
"Dauntless."
The Dauntless cheer like they did for Crimson. When I walk back to them, I see my brother, who pulls me into his embrace.
I promised him I wouldn't leave. I know he'll keep me safe.
Dauntless is my home. My refuge.
My faction.
And here I will stay.
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@Weiss_Schnee I am loving this story, when is the next chapter coming? Because this so cool.
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on June 21, 2018
I'm so sad she's gone it was a great story
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on March 18, 2018
The other commet you put about christina
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Because it's a spoiler, and since you haven't read the story, I can't let you know about it.
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on June 14, 2014
Don't worry, we're not far from it now anyway. Couple more bits we need to get through first.
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on June 14, 2014
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on June 14, 2014
Block what?
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on June 12, 2014
Awww! Jackie why did you block it! DX Lol Somebody tell me!
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on June 11, 2014
I think i know since I read th book :3
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on May 27, 2014
Yeah well guess what? Since you're like Christina in this, there's still more. And unfortunately you end up *This part has been blocked for spoiler reasons.*
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on May 26, 2014
^O^ I helped you on the train!
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on May 26, 2014
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on May 20, 2014
Wow, this is really cool, are the next chapter how we all meet?
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on May 17, 2014
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on May 14, 2014
WOOHOO! AWESOME! SO LEAT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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on May 13, 2014
I was planning to XD
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on May 13, 2014
On part two, can you put Leat's P.O.V.? Please?
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on May 13, 2014
Nice!
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on May 13, 2014
Thumbs up!
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on May 13, 2014
Like in Divergent itself, Tris is Divergent, she's a transfer, but a Dauntless-born (Uriah) is also Divergent, though it is not confirmed until the 2nd book, Insurgent.
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on May 12, 2014
Nice! But BOTH are Divergent? Really? XD That was unexpected.
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on May 12, 2014
cool!
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on May 12, 2014
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on May 12, 2014
Glad you like it :)
There's still more to come. And it's not just told from Jackie's view, oh no!
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on May 12, 2014
Awesome!!
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on May 12, 2014