Divergent - Sonic Style (The Story)

Divergent - Sonic Style (The Story)

At long last, it's here! You've been waiting for it, and it's the story of Divergent, told in the style of Sonic the Hedgehog!!! The actual Sonic characters are the leaders/representatives, whilst the confirmed OC's are the initiates.

published on May 12, 2014not completed

One Choice Is All We Get

Crimson
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It's total overwhelming. Today's the big Choosing Ceremony, and I am shaking like MAD!
Yesterday's test told me Dauntless is where I should be. Makes sense. Since I'm born Dauntless.
But it's my choice. So to the Test yesterday, I say meh!
While the other factions walk towards the Ceremony hall, us Dauntless have our own way of getting there. We are the only faction who takes the City train, so we can use it to prove our bravery.
And today, we have it planned.
When the train is close to the hall entrance, the doors open, as the Dauntless start jumping out. The train doesn't stop, because what's the point in bravery if it stops, right? I jump out with Lea. She and I have been best friends for 10 years. Her brother, Sonic, is a Dauntless leader, so hopefully she'll stay Dauntless, because I intend to.

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Sapphire
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Usually when someone asks me if I'm nervous about something, I say "No, I'm not nervous," because it's the truth. But this time, if someone asks me, I have to admit that I am. Because it's how we should act in Candor.
Truthfully.
But my Aptitude Test told me I'm not cut out for Candor.
And I'm not surprised. I never fitted in at Candor. And I never will.
So today I can choose differently; I can find the faction I truly belong in.
The entire population of 16 year-olds are gathered in the Ceremony hall. We sit with our own faction, with our families beside us.
But I know that soon, my choice will sink into my family's hearts forever.
Will they come visit me?
Transfer families rarely visit, because the fact that their child ditched them for another faction is still too much to bear.
But we have to move on from it.
Faction before blood.

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Lea-Anne
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The hall is so big! It's so amazing!
I look at the stage, and there stand 5 bowls. Each one represents a faction, with its own containment. Grey stones for Abnegation, a piece of earth for Amity, broken shards of glass for Candor, sizzling coals for Dauntless, and clear water for Erudite.
When I walk up, my blood will be either spreading across the water, or sizzling on the boiling hot coal.
I am still shaking in fear. Even more than yesterday.
"Thank you everybody for joining us today," an Abnegation man says. He stands on the stage, in front of the bowls, holding a knife. "As you know, our dependants are now 16. They are at a time to choose their own path. One choice. One choice can transform them. But this choice is the only choice they have. Dependants, be aware. Once you choose your faction today, you cannot choose again. And if you fail initiation, you will live factionless."
Live factionless? Oh God!
"I shall call out your names from reverse alphabetical order of factions, starting with Erudite."
So after all the Erudite choose, the Dauntless will choose.
I don't have long to decide.
Dauntless, or Erudite.
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@Weiss_Schnee I am loving this story, when is the next chapter coming? Because this so cool.
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on June 21, 2018
I'm so sad she's gone it was a great story
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on March 18, 2018
The other commet you put about christina
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Because it's a spoiler, and since you haven't read the story, I can't let you know about it.
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on June 14, 2014
Don't worry, we're not far from it now anyway. Couple more bits we need to get through first.
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on June 14, 2014
Block what?
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on June 12, 2014
Awww! Jackie why did you block it! DX Lol Somebody tell me!
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on June 11, 2014
I think i know since I read th book :3
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on May 27, 2014
Yeah well guess what? Since you're like Christina in this, there's still more. And unfortunately you end up *This part has been blocked for spoiler reasons.*
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on May 26, 2014
^O^ I helped you on the train!
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on May 26, 2014
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on May 20, 2014
Wow, this is really cool, are the next chapter how we all meet?
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on May 17, 2014
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on May 14, 2014
WOOHOO! AWESOME! SO LEAT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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on May 13, 2014
I was planning to XD
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on May 13, 2014
On part two, can you put Leat's P.O.V.? Please?
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on May 13, 2014
Nice!
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on May 13, 2014
Thumbs up!
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on May 13, 2014
Like in Divergent itself, Tris is Divergent, she's a transfer, but a Dauntless-born (Uriah) is also Divergent, though it is not confirmed until the 2nd book, Insurgent.
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on May 12, 2014
Nice! But BOTH are Divergent? Really? XD That was unexpected.
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on May 12, 2014
cool!
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on May 12, 2014
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on May 12, 2014
Glad you like it :)
There's still more to come. And it's not just told from Jackie's view, oh no!
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on May 12, 2014
Awesome!!
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on May 12, 2014