Divergent - Sonic Style (The Story)

Divergent - Sonic Style (The Story)

At long last, it's here! You've been waiting for it, and it's the story of Divergent, told in the style of Sonic the Hedgehog!!! The actual Sonic characters are the leaders/representatives, whilst the confirmed OC's are the initiates.

published on May 12, 2014not completed

Jackie's Aptitude Test (Part 2)

Jackie's Aptitude Test (Part 2) Jackie
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I find myself in a narrow hallway packed with mirrors on every wall. Everywhere I look, all I see is my reflection.
And there are hundreds.
"Choose," I hear someone say.
Then I look in front of me. I see two bowls in front of me. The bowl on my right contains a small, yet sharp knife. The other bowl on my left contains a piece of cheese.
"Choose for what?" I ask.
"Choose," the voice says again.
If I don't know what to choose it for, then what am I supposed to choose?
I scowl and fold my arms, staying still on my spot.
"Have it your way," the voice then says, as the bowls disappear.
A door then opens, and a ferocious dog runs out at me.
Run!
The dog runs towards me, and I try to run away. But it's too fast for me. So I stop, turn round, and tackle it to the ground.
But I fall down into the ground as I grab the dog.
And the dog falls with me.
What.
The.
Hell?!

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Now I'm in a small room, and I see a tall man reading a newspaper. The headline reads "BRUTAL MURDERER FINALLY APPREHENDED!"
Murderer?
"Do you know this guy?" the man says, without even peering up from his paper.
How does he know I'm here?
I look closely at the man on the cover. I don't ever think I've seen him.
"I don't know," I say. "I don't think I ever have."
"You're lying."
"What? No."
"You ARE lying!" Now he sounds desperate, and angry.
"No. I'm not," I say, calmly. "I never seen him."
"You could SAVE me! Just tell the truth!" he shouts.
"I AM telling the truth!"
But before he can answer back again, the image fades.
Why didn't he believe me?
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@Weiss_Schnee I am loving this story, when is the next chapter coming? Because this so cool.
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on June 21, 2018
I'm so sad she's gone it was a great story
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on March 18, 2018
The other commet you put about christina
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Because it's a spoiler, and since you haven't read the story, I can't let you know about it.
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on June 14, 2014
Don't worry, we're not far from it now anyway. Couple more bits we need to get through first.
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on June 14, 2014
Block what?
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on June 12, 2014
Awww! Jackie why did you block it! DX Lol Somebody tell me!
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on June 11, 2014
I think i know since I read th book :3
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on May 27, 2014
Yeah well guess what? Since you're like Christina in this, there's still more. And unfortunately you end up *This part has been blocked for spoiler reasons.*
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on May 26, 2014
^O^ I helped you on the train!
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on May 26, 2014
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on May 20, 2014
Wow, this is really cool, are the next chapter how we all meet?
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on May 17, 2014
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on May 14, 2014
WOOHOO! AWESOME! SO LEAT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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on May 13, 2014
I was planning to XD
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on May 13, 2014
On part two, can you put Leat's P.O.V.? Please?
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on May 13, 2014
Nice!
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on May 13, 2014
Thumbs up!
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on May 13, 2014
Like in Divergent itself, Tris is Divergent, she's a transfer, but a Dauntless-born (Uriah) is also Divergent, though it is not confirmed until the 2nd book, Insurgent.
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on May 12, 2014
Nice! But BOTH are Divergent? Really? XD That was unexpected.
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on May 12, 2014
cool!
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on May 12, 2014
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on May 12, 2014
Glad you like it :)
There's still more to come. And it's not just told from Jackie's view, oh no!
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on May 12, 2014
Awesome!!
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on May 12, 2014