Divergent - Sonic Style (The Story)

Divergent - Sonic Style (The Story)

At long last, it's here! You've been waiting for it, and it's the story of Divergent, told in the style of Sonic the Hedgehog!!! The actual Sonic characters are the leaders/representatives, whilst the confirmed OC's are the initiates.

published on May 12, 2014not completed

Lea-Anne's Aptitude Test

Lea-Anne's Aptitude Test Lea-Anne
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Normally I'm very excited for events in my life. But this Test... I've never been so nervous in my life. What if the test tells me I can't be with my brother in Dauntless?
An Abnegation woman is inside, waiting for me in room 9. Crimson is in room 2.
"Hello," the woman says. "You are Lea-Anne, yes?"
"Yeah," I say.
"Please, take a seat. My name is Elizabeth."
"Can I call you Liz?" I ask.
"I prefer not to have a shortened name. It's self-extravagant in Abnegation."
Stiffs these days!
Liz (I can still call her Liz without actually saying it out loud, haha!) gives me this blue drink. Some sort of serum. Without question, I gulp the drink down.
She starts attaching wires to my forehead and to the chair before I close my eyes.
Must be to help her administer my test and get a result.
Whatever this test is, bring it on!

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I'm in this long hallway of mirrors. My reflection is everywhere. So I take some time to look at myself.
And I'm looking brave as ever.
"Choose," a voice says.
I then look in front. There are 2 bowls. One with a knife, the other with cheese.
Cheese? Seriously?
I don't even need the voice to say it again. I walk towards the bowls and pick up the knife.
"You have chosen," the voice says. The bowls then disappear as a door opens.
They've just released a vicious dog!
I let the dog run towards me, the knife tight in my clutch. When it's close enough to me, I stab the dog in its body. It falls down to the floor and whimpers. But just to be sure... I stab the dog again.
Vicious pets deserve to be put down.
And THAT was certainly a vicious dog.

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I'm now in a room with another man. He holds a newspaper. I can't see what the headline says though.
"Do you know this guy?" the man asks, pointing to the picture on the newspaper.
That man is gross.
I shake my head without hesitation. "Nope. Never seen him."
"You're lying," he says.
What the hell? I'm NOT lying!
"No I'm not," I say.
"Yes you are."
"No. I'm. Not!" I shout.
"You could save me if you know him! You could save me!" he shouts back.
"Well sorry, but I don't," I reply calmly.
And then the man fades.
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@Weiss_Schnee I am loving this story, when is the next chapter coming? Because this so cool.
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on June 21, 2018
I'm so sad she's gone it was a great story
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on March 18, 2018
The other commet you put about christina
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Because it's a spoiler, and since you haven't read the story, I can't let you know about it.
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on June 14, 2014
Don't worry, we're not far from it now anyway. Couple more bits we need to get through first.
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on June 14, 2014
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on June 14, 2014
Block what?
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on June 12, 2014
Awww! Jackie why did you block it! DX Lol Somebody tell me!
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on June 11, 2014
I think i know since I read th book :3
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on May 27, 2014
Yeah well guess what? Since you're like Christina in this, there's still more. And unfortunately you end up *This part has been blocked for spoiler reasons.*
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on May 26, 2014
^O^ I helped you on the train!
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on May 26, 2014
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on May 20, 2014
Wow, this is really cool, are the next chapter how we all meet?
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on May 17, 2014
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on May 14, 2014
WOOHOO! AWESOME! SO LEAT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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on May 13, 2014
I was planning to XD
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on May 13, 2014
On part two, can you put Leat's P.O.V.? Please?
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on May 13, 2014
Nice!
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on May 13, 2014
Thumbs up!
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on May 13, 2014
Like in Divergent itself, Tris is Divergent, she's a transfer, but a Dauntless-born (Uriah) is also Divergent, though it is not confirmed until the 2nd book, Insurgent.
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on May 12, 2014
Nice! But BOTH are Divergent? Really? XD That was unexpected.
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on May 12, 2014
cool!
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on May 12, 2014
Glad you like it :)
There's still more to come. And it's not just told from Jackie's view, oh no!
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on May 12, 2014
Awesome!!
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on May 12, 2014