Noises
I heard footsteps. I ignored it, and cuddled with my blanket. I began to sleep, and in my Nightmare I had so much pain. I woke up, and felt like crawling. My brother cried and called 911. "Sheesh! So much blood! Why?" Cried my brother, screaming.I softly whined and I felt my back. I felt nothing below, just flesh cut. As the police came, they ran into me and put me into the van. Slowly, I blinked twice and I fell asleep. I woke up, and tried to stand up. I quickly fell. "Let me help you up," Said a docter, lifting me up.
"Thanks.." I said.
"No problem, sir.. We cannot say this in a good way, but you lost your kidney for some... Odd reason. The police will investigate. It was maybe... A pycho murderer..." He said.
"Yeah.. But I wonder-" I rubbed the area, as it stung. I felt cringe.
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If there are two people having a conversation, you don't need to bother putting "said" at the end of each time a person speaks. E.g
"How was your day?" Sam asked.
"Not good."
"Why?" See More
P.S there are a few grammar mistakes but I don't think anyone really cares about them
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