For You

For You

Hinata Hyuga had loved Naruto since... forever. Then this dark haired, light eyed boy came into town. He was better that Sasuke in everything! And he, she had to admit, was better looking than Naruto. But that didnt change anything. Then, one day, he stole more than a few coins from her... (I realize that my stories are wierd. But their more or less alternate dimesnions.)

published on April 20, 2017completed

Crush?

Crush? Hinata got up extra early to spy on Sesa.

She kinda felt guilty about it, especialy since last night was amazing, but it needed to be done. Not many people trusted him, so she had to do this. If not to prove he's the decent man to let on to be, then to at least stop whatever he may be up to.

She spotted him enter the old Uchiha district.
"Why would he go there?" She asks herself, suspicion elevating. "Everyone in Kohona always says stay away from there. I wonder..?"

She followed him, making sure not to let him know she was there. All he really did was stop and look at the old buildings, nothing too weird there, but then he began talking.

"Hello, Ichiru. How is your shop?" He asks, picking up a rotten piece of fruit. "Thats good! And how is that Sasuke kid?"

This peaked her curiosity.
There hadnt been anyone here in years.
So what the hell was he doing?

"Sesa?" She finaly musters, slowly walking behind him. She reatched out, touched his shoulder, then was immediatly thrusted backwards, her breath knocked out of her.
She saw a man standing in the shop, having a conversation with Sesa.  

This was where she got scared.
And screamed.

"Hinata?!" Sesa asks, completely surprised. "Whatre you doing here?! Youre not dead, are you..?"  
Hinata gasped. "Dead...?"
Sesa nodded, then pushed her away, causing her to gaps again and look around her.

There wasnt anyone around but her and Sesa.

"Sesa what... who... how..." Hinata asks, completely lost.
"Im... Its my family jutsu... Shisha no Suguta, Sight of the Dead. It more or less alows me to see the dead in the Underworld, and talk and even fight them." He explains sheepishly.

Hinata was amazed.
"So you can talk to the dead..?" She asks, seeing where he was going with this.
"Yeah... I can also call on them to fight for me." He admits.

This makes her heart skip a beat.
That was a forbudden jutsu.   
He was a forbidden jutsu user.
She needed to-

"Thats not legal, Sesa!" She says, not able to help herself. "Thats ground for imprisonment!"
He nods, holding his hands out. "I know. Do what you need to." He says, not willing to hurt anyone.

Hinata hesitated. Should she turn him in, he would die. But if she didnt, he would probably hurt someone.

"I hate this ability." He admited, still holding his hands out. "I cant go anywhere without someone wanting me dead because of my abilities. I wish I never had them! Im sorry, Hi-"

She smacked him, then kissed him. She could tell he was telling the truth. He just wasnt someone to lie.
Especialy not someone he had grown to care for.
"Sesa, its ok. I l... I loveyouanyways." She says, hiding her face in his chest.

He smiled, growing a little red himself.
"I... love you too." He replies, hugging her closely.

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"Hm. So that punk can speak to the dead." Sasuke says, lurking in the shadows. "Lets see if he can talk the Gods into giving him a second life."
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You know what? That ending was exceptional. It was unexpected like Romeo and Juliet o(≧∇≦o). Sesa was not prepared for Hinata.
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Damn, that was a good ending@xXEmo_KingXx
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Done.
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on April 28, 2017
Suspense +Curiosity+ Anticipation+ Excitement= Me dies from them Σ(*ノ´>ω<。`)ノ
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on April 28, 2017
Wait and see
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on April 28, 2017
What is it going to be about? (ノ・д・)ノ @xXEmo_KingXx
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on April 28, 2017
YYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAASSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS!!!!! ୧༼✿ ͡◕ д ◕͡ ༽୨
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THERE'S GOING TO BE MORE?!! YYYYYYYYYYYYAAAAAAAAAAASSSSSSSSSS!!!!!!!!!! (۶* ‘ꆚ’)۶” ˭̡̞(◞⁎˃ᆺ˂)◞*✰ (╯✧∇✧)╯ ヾ(。・ω・)シ
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on April 28, 2017
Thanks! I love using my OC so much, Im adding him in the next story.
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She's kicking Sesa ass, yeah! @xXEmo_KingXx
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on April 27, 2017
Hinata snapped! She killed Kakashi and Orichimaru!
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SHE'S HAS TURNED YANDERE! 。゚(TヮT)゚。
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YYYAAASSS!!! (。☉౪ ⊙。) @xXEmo_KingXx
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on April 27, 2017
Lol I shall write some more!
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on April 27, 2017
Just like me! (☉ε ⊙ノ)ノ @xXEmo_KingXx
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on April 27, 2017
My point exactly. The whole point of this story is this:

Even seemingly normal people can be utterly insane.
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on April 27, 2017
Yep, they were shy. @xXEmo_KingXx
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on April 27, 2017
*remembers all of the anime characters that have snapped*
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on April 27, 2017
True @xXEmo_KingXx
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on April 27, 2017
Shy people usually snap under extreme cercumstances.
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I loved it. Shy quiet Hinata is now a Yandere. YYYAASS! (๑˃̵ᴗ˂̵)و @xXEmo_KingXx
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on April 27, 2017
And she kidnapped Sesa! @xXEmo_KingXx
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on April 27, 2017
That was good@xXEmo_KingXx
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The Clone chapter was great! O hope he does prove him wrong. @xXEmo_KingXx
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Maybe...
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Yeeessss! ᗜಠ o ಠ)¤=[]:::::> @xXEmo_KingXx
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on April 27, 2017
Hehehe. Ill work on the next chapter immediately!
Hops on horse and rides like a samurai*
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on April 27, 2017
There is going to be deaths, my demon soul is happy. ╰(◉ᾥ◉)╯ @xXEmo_KingXx
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on April 27, 2017
Maaaaaaaaaayyybeeee...
Maybe you should be
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on April 27, 2017
(」゜ロ゜)」 now I'm worried for Hinata @xXEmo_KingXx
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on April 27, 2017
Yes I have...Why, is something like that going to happen? (○□○)
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on April 27, 2017
Ever read Romeo and Juliet?
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on April 27, 2017
That means there will be deaths and tragedy!@xXEmo_KingXx
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Maybe. ;)
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on April 27, 2017
@xXEmo_KingXx! Hi!
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on April 26, 2017
Hey!
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Hey, @a.amaducci1122. Im sorry I havent been able to respond. It wont verify my account.
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Me too.
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on April 26, 2017
I'm glad we are together!!
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on April 26, 2017
^///^
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on April 26, 2017
You are the best!
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on April 26, 2017
Of course. Anything for you.
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on April 26, 2017
You said we could talk there, right?
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on April 26, 2017
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on April 26, 2017
Im back. And I mentioned you in a post.
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on April 26, 2017
I'll be here, counting the minutes until you're back!
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on April 26, 2017
Ok, if you say so. Ill mention you in my page! Brb
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on April 26, 2017
*Hugs back* It's fine... don't worry...
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on April 26, 2017
Me sowwy.
Huggles*
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on April 26, 2017
I know...
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on April 26, 2017
Chapter 8
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Yes it was!
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on April 26, 2017
Relally?
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on April 26, 2017
OMFG! THAT WAS GREAT!!
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No problem
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on April 26, 2017
Grazei, amico.
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on April 26, 2017
Will do so @xXEmo_KingXx
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on April 26, 2017
Could you possibly send a message to my girlfriend? You know, the girl I asked out yesterday? Could you please tell her that the site wont verify my account, so I cant remessage her? Id be grateful if you did.
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on April 26, 2017
Yes and what is it? @xXEmo_KingXx
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on April 26, 2017
Could you do me a favor, @TylerWay?
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Orichimaru is his father =-O
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Orichimaru is the ultimate bad guy, is the battle going to end with a fatal wound? @xXEmo_KingXx
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XD yes it is. ( ̄ω ̄)
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on April 26, 2017
XD
*dies from laughter cause trollin is awesome*
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(ノಠ益ಠ)ノ彡┻━┻
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on April 26, 2017
But not this chapter.
XD
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Yay! Deaths! @xXEmo_KingXx
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Yes! An ominous sentence! Will there be ant deaths? @xXEmo_KingXx
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on April 26, 2017
Evil laugh*
But wait for chapter 8, dear friend!
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on April 26, 2017
The anticipation will kill me @xXEmo_KingXx
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on April 26, 2017
Perhaps. I have a LOT more twists and turns in this story. ;)
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on April 26, 2017
Imagines Kakashi as a father. Remembers training with Naruto. Remembers the books.
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on April 26, 2017
Really? It was either going to be Orichimaru or Kakashi. I decided the ultimate bad guy. :P
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on April 26, 2017
Doing good. The father surprised me. That was a good twist @xXEmo_KingXx
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on April 26, 2017
Fine. You?
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on April 26, 2017
Hey you, how you doing? @xXEmo_KingXx
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Wow, Hinata stopped the fight. Though I would've liked if one of them became wounded, future battle maybe? (ノ*゜▽゜*)
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∩(︶▽︶)∩, It will be an epic, deadly battle!!!
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on April 25, 2017
o(≧∇≦o)
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on April 25, 2017
Hell yeah!
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on April 25, 2017
Oh hell yeah
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on April 25, 2017
Hinata! She's over Naruto now. @xXEmo_KingXx
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I know! Heheheh I try to make ever fanfic I write to the point where it shows a main character doing something thats out of their league or just straight up them. Also, i added another chapter to The Beginning of Nothing.
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I shall go and read it
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on April 25, 2017
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on April 25, 2017
Poor Naruto!!! Is Hintana going to get stolen from him?
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on April 24, 2017