For You

For You

Hinata Hyuga had loved Naruto since... forever. Then this dark haired, light eyed boy came into town. He was better that Sasuke in everything! And he, she had to admit, was better looking than Naruto. But that didnt change anything. Then, one day, he stole more than a few coins from her... (I realize that my stories are wierd. But their more or less alternate dimesnions.)

published on April 20, 2017completed

The Snap

The Snap Hinata looked at Kakashi like he was a monster.

"You let him get away?!" She asks, drawing a kunai secretly. "Do you realise how much pain he caused Sesa? He killed off his entire clan!"
Kakashi threw his hands up, then said, "It was an honest mistake. Besides, he seems to be fine to me. And theres no real harm done."

Hinata suddenly stabs Kakashi in his heart.
"For letting him suffer!" She whispered in his ear, letting the prod shinobi's corpse fall to the ground.

"I... Se... Gkyak..." Kakashi gurggled out, the blood seeping through his mask.

The son of White Fang was no more.

She immediately turned her attention to Orichimaru, who was getting pounded into a pulp by Sesa.

"KILL HIM, SESA!" Hinata screamed, jumping into the melee. "He brought you so much pain!" She immedeatly set out to stab Orichimaru, but caught him in the throat, causing him to choke on his blood.

Sesa stoped his attack, watching as the white-eyed girl steadily stab his creator, cussing him for a monster and a no-good bastard.
When she was done, she stood up, covered in the mans blood.

Dear gods.
She looked like his worst nightmare...

She glanced at him, smiling sweetly. "He's dead, sweety. You dont have to worry anymore." She said, hugging him to try to calm him down.

It was doing the exact opposite of that.

"Hinata, you--!"
"I did what I had to! For you, Sesa. For you." She interupted, desperate. "You make me feel... invincible. Bullet proof! You... You changed me. You made me change, all for you."

He looked at her, the wolf-form still present.
She was crazy.
No, insane!

"Hinata... Youre insane." He said, recieving a smack from her.
"Only for you, Sesa." She said, blowing some kind of dust in his face.
He suddenly felt heavy. Sleepy.
"Shush, Sesa." She says, holding him as he slipt from conciousness, "Just sleep. When you wake up, Ill be ready to make you happy."
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You know what? That ending was exceptional. It was unexpected like Romeo and Juliet o(≧∇≦o). Sesa was not prepared for Hinata.
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Damn, that was a good ending@xXEmo_KingXx
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Done.
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on April 28, 2017
Suspense +Curiosity+ Anticipation+ Excitement= Me dies from them Σ(*ノ´>ω<。`)ノ
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on April 28, 2017
Wait and see
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on April 28, 2017
What is it going to be about? (ノ・д・)ノ @xXEmo_KingXx
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on April 28, 2017
YYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAASSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS!!!!! ୧༼✿ ͡◕ д ◕͡ ༽୨
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THERE'S GOING TO BE MORE?!! YYYYYYYYYYYYAAAAAAAAAAASSSSSSSSSS!!!!!!!!!! (۶* ‘ꆚ’)۶” ˭̡̞(◞⁎˃ᆺ˂)◞*✰ (╯✧∇✧)╯ ヾ(。・ω・)シ
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on April 28, 2017
Thanks! I love using my OC so much, Im adding him in the next story.
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She's kicking Sesa ass, yeah! @xXEmo_KingXx
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on April 27, 2017
Hinata snapped! She killed Kakashi and Orichimaru!
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SHE'S HAS TURNED YANDERE! 。゚(TヮT)゚。
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YYYAAASSS!!! (。☉౪ ⊙。) @xXEmo_KingXx
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on April 27, 2017
Lol I shall write some more!
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on April 27, 2017
Just like me! (☉ε ⊙ノ)ノ @xXEmo_KingXx
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on April 27, 2017
My point exactly. The whole point of this story is this:

Even seemingly normal people can be utterly insane.
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on April 27, 2017
Yep, they were shy. @xXEmo_KingXx
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on April 27, 2017
*remembers all of the anime characters that have snapped*
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on April 27, 2017
True @xXEmo_KingXx
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on April 27, 2017
Shy people usually snap under extreme cercumstances.
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I loved it. Shy quiet Hinata is now a Yandere. YYYAASS! (๑˃̵ᴗ˂̵)و @xXEmo_KingXx
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on April 27, 2017
And she kidnapped Sesa! @xXEmo_KingXx
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on April 27, 2017
That was good@xXEmo_KingXx
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The Clone chapter was great! O hope he does prove him wrong. @xXEmo_KingXx
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Maybe...
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Yeeessss! ᗜಠ o ಠ)¤=[]:::::> @xXEmo_KingXx
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on April 27, 2017
Hehehe. Ill work on the next chapter immediately!
Hops on horse and rides like a samurai*
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on April 27, 2017
There is going to be deaths, my demon soul is happy. ╰(◉ᾥ◉)╯ @xXEmo_KingXx
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on April 27, 2017
Maaaaaaaaaayyybeeee...
Maybe you should be
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on April 27, 2017
(」゜ロ゜)」 now I'm worried for Hinata @xXEmo_KingXx
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on April 27, 2017
Yes I have...Why, is something like that going to happen? (○□○)
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on April 27, 2017
Ever read Romeo and Juliet?
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on April 27, 2017
That means there will be deaths and tragedy!@xXEmo_KingXx
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Maybe. ;)
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@xXEmo_KingXx! Hi!
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on April 26, 2017
Hey!
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Hey, @a.amaducci1122. Im sorry I havent been able to respond. It wont verify my account.
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Me too.
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on April 26, 2017
I'm glad we are together!!
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on April 26, 2017
^///^
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on April 26, 2017
You are the best!
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on April 26, 2017
Of course. Anything for you.
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on April 26, 2017
You said we could talk there, right?
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on April 26, 2017
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on April 26, 2017
Im back. And I mentioned you in a post.
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on April 26, 2017
I'll be here, counting the minutes until you're back!
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on April 26, 2017
Ok, if you say so. Ill mention you in my page! Brb
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on April 26, 2017
*Hugs back* It's fine... don't worry...
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on April 26, 2017
Me sowwy.
Huggles*
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on April 26, 2017
I know...
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on April 26, 2017
Chapter 8
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Yes it was!
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on April 26, 2017
Relally?
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on April 26, 2017
OMFG! THAT WAS GREAT!!
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No problem
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on April 26, 2017
Grazei, amico.
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on April 26, 2017
Will do so @xXEmo_KingXx
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on April 26, 2017
Could you possibly send a message to my girlfriend? You know, the girl I asked out yesterday? Could you please tell her that the site wont verify my account, so I cant remessage her? Id be grateful if you did.
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on April 26, 2017
Yes and what is it? @xXEmo_KingXx
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on April 26, 2017
Could you do me a favor, @TylerWay?
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Orichimaru is his father =-O
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Orichimaru is the ultimate bad guy, is the battle going to end with a fatal wound? @xXEmo_KingXx
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XD yes it is. ( ̄ω ̄)
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on April 26, 2017
XD
*dies from laughter cause trollin is awesome*
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on April 26, 2017
(ノಠ益ಠ)ノ彡┻━┻
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on April 26, 2017
But not this chapter.
XD
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Yay! Deaths! @xXEmo_KingXx
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Yes! An ominous sentence! Will there be ant deaths? @xXEmo_KingXx
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on April 26, 2017
Evil laugh*
But wait for chapter 8, dear friend!
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on April 26, 2017
The anticipation will kill me @xXEmo_KingXx
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on April 26, 2017
Perhaps. I have a LOT more twists and turns in this story. ;)
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on April 26, 2017
Imagines Kakashi as a father. Remembers training with Naruto. Remembers the books.
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on April 26, 2017
Really? It was either going to be Orichimaru or Kakashi. I decided the ultimate bad guy. :P
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on April 26, 2017
Doing good. The father surprised me. That was a good twist @xXEmo_KingXx
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on April 26, 2017
Fine. You?
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on April 26, 2017
Hey you, how you doing? @xXEmo_KingXx
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Wow, Hinata stopped the fight. Though I would've liked if one of them became wounded, future battle maybe? (ノ*゜▽゜*)
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∩(︶▽︶)∩, It will be an epic, deadly battle!!!
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on April 25, 2017
o(≧∇≦o)
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on April 25, 2017
Hell yeah!
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on April 25, 2017
Oh hell yeah
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on April 25, 2017
Hinata! She's over Naruto now. @xXEmo_KingXx
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I know! Heheheh I try to make ever fanfic I write to the point where it shows a main character doing something thats out of their league or just straight up them. Also, i added another chapter to The Beginning of Nothing.
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I shall go and read it
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on April 25, 2017
Poor Naruto!!! Is Hintana going to get stolen from him?
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on April 24, 2017