Mobius Paradox

Mobius Paradox

Two dimensions,one peaceful and full of adventures...the other ruled by Eggman,with only a few mobians still alive or not robot. One day they have been connected, and the chaos was released. Only a few heroes can bring peace now.

published on January 14, 2016not completed

Chapter 5:The first mission day...not good

The next day all gathered to decide what to do.
Then came Shadow...the other. (I will call him Shadow 2 from now)

The first to speak was Sonic. "So, Shadow 2, how can we get into your dimension?"
"The only things we need are four Super state users that combine their power during the chaos control, in order to open the gate."
Knuckles: Easy enough.
Tails: That means we need the chaos emeralds.
Sonic: That's not a problem.
Scarlette: But who will go?
Knuckles: I for sure.
Silver: I want to go too.
Redik: Calm down everyone, we'll decide who'll go when we'll have all the chaos emeralds.Until then all of us have to help finding them.
Shadow 2: I have one of my dimension, but I don't think it will work for the gate.
Scarlette: We can use it for chaos control, to help us with the search.
Shadow: Good idea.
Scarlette: Thank you.
Sonic: Well then, lets find those emeralds.
Everyone started to search, helped with Tails's tracker and the chaos control. In a few minutes all the chaos emeralds were gathered, and the members of the team who would be entering the portal were chosen.
Combining their power, Sonic, Silver, Shadow and Shadow 2 opened the portal.
The team, that consisted in Sonic, Shadow 2, Silver, Knuckles, Scarlette and Redik, entered in that gate.

When they came out, the show that comes to their eyes was desolating.
A land of death and destruction was standing in front of their eyes.
Dead bodies, robots that were searching for survivors, mobians turned into robots...
"This is...even worse than I imagined." A tear seemed to go down from Shadow 2's eyes,but he wiped it istantly.
"Eggman will not get away this time." Said Knuckles, grinding his teeth.
"Stay down."Whispered Scarlette "Those robots culd hear us..."
A metallic voice is heard behind them, where before there was the portal."It's a shame, but I've heard you."
All turned behind, and all exploded. All the guys flew in different directions, and all went black.

Sonic's POV
When I woke up, I couldn't see the others...
"Hey, guys?Where are you?"
I was in a cave,dark and wet...
"Ufff...And I was hoping to be able to wake up on a tropical island for a time."
I started to run trough the cave, but it was hard to see where to put the feet.
I fell a couple of times, but when my eyes got used to the darkness, it has been easier to run in that place.
I came out in a place full of lanterns, a very big cavern, that seemed to be a mine.

Silver's POV
"Ugh, my head...huh? Where am I?"
The place where I woke up was a desert, in the real meaning of the word.I saw something red come out from the sand, it seemed like a pair of legs...
I went to take a closer look and... those were Knuckles legs! I took him out of the sand, unconscious.
"Oh well...It's the case to start finding a way out of here...lets see..."

Shadow 2's POV
Someone woke me up. It was Scarlette.
Even if I'm not her Shadow...she's treating me like I was him...It doesn't matter.
"Where are we?"
"We are in some kind of garden...don't push yourself, you're still weak. It was a bad fall."
"And so?I can walk,and you too, so let's go." A few steps and I felt on the ground, feeling a huge pain to the left leg.
"Shadow! Are you ok? Let me help you." She tried to help me, but
"I don't need your help...ugh...maybe..." She helped me to walk, with a warm smile on the face."...Listen...thank you..."
"You're welcome" Now that I see her closer...she is very pretty...no, I have to focus.

Redik's POV
"Brrrr, I'm freezing here"
I was in a woods, but it was hailing, and it was cold,very very cold.
"I have to f-f-find the o-others, before I d-d-die here..."

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Creepy o.O
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Point taken
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on February 25, 2016
Redik: Hey, I'm a demon after all. Without a demoniac nature what kind of demon I would be?
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on February 25, 2016
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on February 25, 2016
Whoa, f*cking dark.
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on February 25, 2016
He wants that action....
IF YOU KNOW WHAT I MEAN! *wink wink nudge nudge*
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*Facepalm*
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XD I had to, okay?
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on February 03, 2016
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on February 03, 2016
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on February 03, 2016
REDIK'S GOT A GIRLFRIEND!!!
REDIK'S GOT A GIRLFRIEND!!!
HOO HOO HOO, I FOUND SOMETHING FOR JACKIE TO TEASE HIM ABOUT! XD
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Don't you dare
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Jackie: Alright, deal.
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on January 21, 2016
Redik: ...Ok...but don't do that again ok? I feel bad enough without these jokes.
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on January 21, 2016
Jackie: I only did that to take the nightmare off my mind so I could sleep again!
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on January 21, 2016
Redik: I'm sorry that you still do that nightmare...but that is not a good reason to take pictures of someone who feel alone!
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on January 21, 2016
Jackie: *nods* Under Eggman's influence...
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on January 21, 2016
Redik: Sonic that shot you?
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on January 21, 2016
Jackie: Just said. I couldn't sleep that night because I had THAT nightmare again...
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on January 21, 2016
Redik: Why did you do that?
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on January 21, 2016
Jackie: *winks* Snuck into your room one night when I couldn't sleep. I couldn't help myself, and took pics. Sent them to Sonic the next morning.
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on January 21, 2016
Redik: What?! Where did you take these?!
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on January 21, 2016
Jackie: I know that you kissed your pillow pretending it was her! I got pics of it! *shows him*
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on January 21, 2016
Redik: You don't know that...maybe...
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on January 21, 2016
Jackie: REDIK'S GOT A GIRLFRIEND! THAT HE'LL NEVER SEE AGAIN!
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on January 21, 2016
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on January 21, 2016
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on January 21, 2016
Eep... what's gonna happen to them now?
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I don't know...any idea?
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Thanks, but I have it already.Eheh.
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on January 21, 2016
I don't have any good ideas, but I know something that can help.
When I'm stuck for action ideas, I usually listen to a kick-ass music, with a kick-ass beat! Here, I'll give you one:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=QImBolnTVH8
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on January 21, 2016
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on January 21, 2016
AWWWWWWWWWWWWW THAT MADE ME BLUSH!!!!!!
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on January 20, 2016
Ok,if someone want to be in the story, he/she has only to say it, and I will try to put him/her in.
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Okay,
Name: Scarlette the wolf
Age: 36
Looks: https://www.qfeast.com/Electpurr_the_electric_cat/profile/photo/f1aHxe
Crush: Is married to Shadow the hedgehog and has a 14 year old daughter named Mystic(what Mystic looks like):https://www.qfeast.com/page/tdwTQ9/A-page-for-when-I-run-out-space/photo/e1ZPLX See More
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Ok, I'll start to work on that.
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on January 19, 2016
Possibly 36
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on January 19, 2016
Is that right?
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on January 19, 2016
So, she had Mystic at 12...
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on January 19, 2016
Wait sorry i meant she is 26
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on January 19, 2016
Only a question: how can she have a 14 years old daughter if she's 20?
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on January 19, 2016
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on January 19, 2016
ok, give me the info and I'll put her in the story
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on January 19, 2016
Could Scarlette be in it if thats okay? I'll give you the info about her
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on January 19, 2016
KISS, KISS, FALL IN LOVE!
(I had to! Cuz of that kiss scene! XD)
(Lyrics from Ouran High School Host Club )
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on January 17, 2016
LOVE IT!
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Yes it's really good so far keep up the good work.
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on January 14, 2016
Really?
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on January 14, 2016
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on January 14, 2016