Mobius Paradox

Mobius Paradox

Two dimensions,one peaceful and full of adventures...the other ruled by Eggman,with only a few mobians still alive or not robot. One day they have been connected, and the chaos was released. Only a few heroes can bring peace now.

published on January 14, 2016not completed

Chapter 3 : The visitor of another dimension

"Do you think they're doing well?"
"Again,relax Jackie,there is nothing to worry about."
Sonic opened the door and...
"Hey guys, we're..."
They remained there, unable to understand what was happening.
Eggman was running after Redik,who was holding Uriah and Tris, imploring to let him hold the babies a bit.
"No Eggman!I already told that you can't hold'em!"
"Please, they are so cute...so little and unable to ruin my plans."
"NO!"
"...back..."Sonic was still standing, with the mouth wide open.
Suddenly Jackie shouted "What's happening here?!"
All stopped, Redik,still holding the babies, with a foot on Eggman's face, and Tails trying to move him away.
When all the thing calmed down, Eggman started to explain:
"I need your help, Shadow showed up at my base, shouting like a mad about someone I killed and destroying my robots.But I haven't done anything this time, I swear.If Chrono wasn't there..."
"Chrono? He's still with you?"Redik couldn't believe that his "brother" was still working for Eggman.
"Well...not exactly...He wanted some kind of cure for his eye..."
"Oh...yeah..."
Redik had a flashback of when he and Chrono fought, and Chrono's eye changed in a clock.
"If Shadow attacked you, there must be a reason,don't you think egghead?"
"Yeah ,Sonic, I normally have a reason to be attacked by you or your friends, but not this time!"
Sonic thougth for a little, and decided "Ok, we'll take a look."
Then he looked the childs " Jackie, I have to ask you..."
"To stay here with Tris and Uriah...I know. Be careful."
"I'll do.I love you Jackie."
"I love you too."
A quick kiss, and Sonic was already on his way.
Redik took Eggman, and ran after Sonic.
Tails was about to follow them but..."Tails, can you help me with the babies?"
"...Ok..."(Why does it have to happen to me?)

When they arrived at Eggman's base, they found Shadow,fighting with Chrono, with a lot of crushed robots around.
"SHADOW!WHAT ARE YOU DOING?"Yelled Sonic to attract Shadow's attention.
He saw them for an istant,but then he returned to fight with Chrono.
"Pssst.Redik, can you use your demon powers to stop them?"
"My what?"Asked Redik while letting down Eggman.
"Those demon powers you used to blow up my base."
"I don't have them anymore,and if I still have them, I don't want to use them."
Sonic and Redik then separated the fighters, holding'em until they calmed.

After all the necessary explanations (who are Redik and Chrono and why Shadow was there)...

"So, you are the Shadow of another dimension...where the bios never existed, where I'm not married and a lot of people we know doesn't exist...and the others are dead or transformed into robots..."
He took a look to Eggman.
"What?"
"Wherever you are you make disasters..."
"I was hoping you would help me, to destroy Eggman's empire...and restablish order..."
"Hey, I don't see why not.After all, destroying Eggman's plans is what we are best on,right Redik?"
"We'll need the help of the others then."
Suddenly a portal opened from the base, letting pass dozens of robots,who flew all over the sky, directed in all directions.
Shadow cursed "I thought that machine was only scrap now!"
A robot landed in front of the hedgehogs.And they prepared to fight.
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Creepy o.O
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Point taken
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on February 25, 2016
Redik: Hey, I'm a demon after all. Without a demoniac nature what kind of demon I would be?
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on February 25, 2016
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on February 25, 2016
Whoa, f*cking dark.
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on February 25, 2016
He wants that action....
IF YOU KNOW WHAT I MEAN! *wink wink nudge nudge*
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*Facepalm*
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XD I had to, okay?
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on February 03, 2016
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on February 03, 2016
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on February 03, 2016
REDIK'S GOT A GIRLFRIEND!!!
REDIK'S GOT A GIRLFRIEND!!!
HOO HOO HOO, I FOUND SOMETHING FOR JACKIE TO TEASE HIM ABOUT! XD
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Don't you dare
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Jackie: Alright, deal.
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on January 21, 2016
Redik: ...Ok...but don't do that again ok? I feel bad enough without these jokes.
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on January 21, 2016
Jackie: I only did that to take the nightmare off my mind so I could sleep again!
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on January 21, 2016
Redik: I'm sorry that you still do that nightmare...but that is not a good reason to take pictures of someone who feel alone!
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on January 21, 2016
Jackie: *nods* Under Eggman's influence...
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on January 21, 2016
Redik: Sonic that shot you?
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on January 21, 2016
Jackie: Just said. I couldn't sleep that night because I had THAT nightmare again...
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on January 21, 2016
Redik: Why did you do that?
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on January 21, 2016
Jackie: *winks* Snuck into your room one night when I couldn't sleep. I couldn't help myself, and took pics. Sent them to Sonic the next morning.
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on January 21, 2016
Redik: What?! Where did you take these?!
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on January 21, 2016
Jackie: I know that you kissed your pillow pretending it was her! I got pics of it! *shows him*
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on January 21, 2016
Redik: You don't know that...maybe...
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on January 21, 2016
Jackie: REDIK'S GOT A GIRLFRIEND! THAT HE'LL NEVER SEE AGAIN!
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on January 21, 2016
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on January 21, 2016
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on January 21, 2016
Eep... what's gonna happen to them now?
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I don't know...any idea?
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Thanks, but I have it already.Eheh.
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on January 21, 2016
I don't have any good ideas, but I know something that can help.
When I'm stuck for action ideas, I usually listen to a kick-ass music, with a kick-ass beat! Here, I'll give you one:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=QImBolnTVH8
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on January 21, 2016
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on January 21, 2016
AWWWWWWWWWWWWW THAT MADE ME BLUSH!!!!!!
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on January 20, 2016
Ok,if someone want to be in the story, he/she has only to say it, and I will try to put him/her in.
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Okay,
Name: Scarlette the wolf
Age: 36
Looks: https://www.qfeast.com/Electpurr_the_electric_cat/profile/photo/f1aHxe
Crush: Is married to Shadow the hedgehog and has a 14 year old daughter named Mystic(what Mystic looks like):https://www.qfeast.com/page/tdwTQ9/A-page-for-when-I-run-out-space/photo/e1ZPLX See More
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Ok, I'll start to work on that.
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on January 19, 2016
Possibly 36
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on January 19, 2016
Is that right?
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on January 19, 2016
So, she had Mystic at 12...
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on January 19, 2016
Wait sorry i meant she is 26
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on January 19, 2016
Only a question: how can she have a 14 years old daughter if she's 20?
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on January 19, 2016
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on January 19, 2016
ok, give me the info and I'll put her in the story
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on January 19, 2016
Could Scarlette be in it if thats okay? I'll give you the info about her
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on January 19, 2016
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on January 19, 2016
KISS, KISS, FALL IN LOVE!
(I had to! Cuz of that kiss scene! XD)
(Lyrics from Ouran High School Host Club )
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on January 17, 2016
LOVE IT!
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Yes it's really good so far keep up the good work.
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on January 14, 2016
Really?
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on January 14, 2016
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on January 14, 2016