Ashes

Ashes

Ashley has always been a kittypet. Safe within her housefolk's yard, she never had any desire to leave, but when she meets a cheeky rogue named Fox she begins having second thoughts. One day when disaster strikes, Ashely is thrust into the world of rogues, warriors, and battles, and must make decisions and go to places she could never have imagined.

published on March 07, 2015not completed

Chapter Four

Chapter Four Ashley sighed, shaking her head.
Fox was a strange cat, that's for sure. And to top it all off, she knew next to nothing about him! Letting out an exasperated groan, the grey shecat stepped around a hedge to enter the line of Housefolk dens in which her own Housefolk resided. As she neared the den, she caught a foul scent.
Stopping in her tracks, Ashley sniffed the air.
What she scented made her eyes widen.
It was fire.

Ashley ran faster than she'd ever run before.
But she was too late. Her House folk's den was burned to the ground. Unable to support her own weight, the kitttypet sunk to the ground, her jaw hanging open. As she fell, she wailed loudly, her sorrowful sounds lost in the blaring noise of the large, flashing monsters. As her mental pain subsided, the broken shecat dragged herself up and started limping down the street, her ears drooping.
By now it was already dark, and Ashley could hear the chattering and hissing of the alley rats. She knew they were coming closer, and that thought scared her. A lone kitttypet was no match for an entire horde of rats. Then she saw them; millions of tiny black shapes rushing towards her like a flood. Rats.
Ashley raised her paw and batted the first few away, but she was soon overwhelmed. The mass of wriggling black bodies was stifling and blocking her airway, not to mention they were also clawing and biting her, tugging on her once sleek pelt. Yowling in desperation, the young shecat knew no help was coming, so she slolwy stopped fighting, accepting her fate. Just as her eyes closed, she thought she heard voices coming towards her.
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Plus that was really specific
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on January 13, 2016
Whoa my sis made something like that she loves warriors!!!
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on January 13, 2016
I will admit, this is interesting. I've never seen someone put fire in their warrior cat stories, honestly. This interests me.
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NP. I would love to see a new chapter ^^
Take your time though, I don't you killing yourself in stress!
I don't care if the story is 1000 years old, I would still love it.
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NP, once again! I really cant wait to see it! I would love to give you more ideas and inspiration >3
I'm glad your excited yourself!
But remember, don't rush yourself! I doubt anyone wants you to die of stress <3
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on January 14, 2016
Thanks again!
I'll start the new chapter right away. . . I'm actually kind of excited to get back into the Warrior Cats fanfiction world. And thanks for kind if giving me the inspiration I needed. ^-^U
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on January 13, 2016
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on January 13, 2016
Thanks so much!! ((: that makes me happy to hear, since this story is kinda old. I'll keep working on it.
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on January 12, 2016
Where is chapter 2? It went from chapter 1 straight to chapter 3.
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Oh, sorry! Let me see.
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on December 14, 2015
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on December 14, 2015
Awesome!
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Thanks!
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on March 07, 2015
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