Another World

Another World

Abigail was a normal girl. Until two strange men wearing modern black suites told her they were taking her to a Academy of Technology. Turns out, it was a whole lot more.

published on June 03, 2014not completed

"It's called the Levitation."

"It's called the Levitation." As I entered the glass bubble, girls and boys were lined up in front of a platform. One by one, they stepped up and registered. The girl in front of
me turned around. (Picture of Gwen)
"Hi. Do you know what time it is?"
I shook my head. "Time here goes slower than my world."
"Oh. This is your first time registering right?"
I nodded. "How many times am I supposed to?"
"Well," She answered. "You stay here for three years. So that makes three times!"
I understood now. Three years here was like one year at home.
"My name's Abby. How about you?" I asked confidently.
"I'm Gwen. But, we change our names when we register."
"Really?" I questioned.
Gwen nodded and moved up. I did too.
"What do they call this building?"
"It's called the Levitation."
Soon Gwen stepped up.
The lady looked down at her.
"First time?"
Gwen nodded. I could tell her nervousness from her hand fumbling around to find a comfortable position.
The lady stared at Gwen for a couple seconds.
"Gwen, right?" she asked finally.
Gwen nodded. "Gwen Moonstone."
The lady nodded and gave her a device that looked slightly like a smart phone, but say, 200x cooler.
"Don't lose it!" She warned. "And, from now on your name will be Dawn."
Dawn squealed and skipped off.
I stepped up.
"Another first-timer, huh?"
I nodded impatiently. I NEEDED to know my new name!
"Name?"
"Abigail Eaton."
Then, I felt something cold slip into my hand. It was the device Dawn had also been given.
"As I said to Dawn, DON'T LOOSE IT."
I nodded, slightly frightened.
I looked her in the eye. She had pale green eyes, with streaks of a bolder green in them. Her stare burned into me.
"Hmm..." she mumbled under her breath.
"How...about...Silver..."
I gaped. It was the perfect name!
Jumping for joy, I scurried out of the bubble.
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Did gonna be updated?? IT BETTER
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haha thanks,,,
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Seriously though...
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on October 07, 2014
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on October 07, 2014
This is REALLY good!
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on October 04, 2014
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on October 04, 2014
write moreeeee
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on August 08, 2014
Thank you so much for adding a new chapter. I know had how hard it is to add them while you're vacationing in Og ;)
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*Nods her acceptance*
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on July 09, 2014
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on July 08, 2014
Is this story discontinued? It is super awesome, when are you writing more?
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I wrote many new chapters. I don't have good Interne here girly.
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on July 07, 2014
Oops, sorry!
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on June 28, 2014
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on June 28, 2014
OC:
Name: Indigo
Original Name: Avery
Year: 1
Awesome story!
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Thanks
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on June 20, 2014
This is awesome! Thanks for including my OC Gwen/Dawn
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Lol. No. I'm not a banana. I'm a blueberry. :-B like duh.B)
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@JeweledOwl812 moi is funnnaaaay!:D
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on July 25, 2014
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on July 02, 2014
No! Oops i mean np
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LOL I was like "Help my best friend is turning into a banana!"
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on June 28, 2014
Ikr? I am soo funny! *flips hair* JK
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on June 04, 2014
Here is my OC!

Name: Crystaline
Original name: Lindsay
Year: 1
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on June 04, 2014
More!!!
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More. Ok.
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on June 04, 2014
My OC:
Character Name: Hailey
Original Name: Amanda
Year: 2
(btw is Another World like a real series/tv show or something or did you make it up?)
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Nope i made it up.
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cool :D
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on June 03, 2014
Cool! I've got an OC for you if you want to use it!
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I thought you changed the first name. Cuz remember? You changed hailey. In the story the names are different.
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I didn't change anything :p
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on July 02, 2014
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on July 02, 2014
Sorry i haven't included it yet. Can you tell me the name again? Soooo sorry. I haven't had good Internet yet. I'm on vacation.
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character name: Hailey
original name: Amanda
year: 2
:p there you go! :D
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on June 03, 2014
I did!
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on June 03, 2014
Cool! Write more!!!!!!
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on June 03, 2014
Aaaw. .. Thanks!
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on June 03, 2014
Cool story!
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on June 03, 2014
Thanks!
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on June 03, 2014
Aweaome
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Thank you person! Btw i also like music
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