Into the rain

Into the rain

A kid who trys to face his fears but fails.He finds out why he didn't check out the figure in the rain...boo!

published on May 03, 2016completed

Fear the figure

Fear the figure
The next morning my mom had to pull me from my under my bed...She asked why I was hiding I didn't tell her I told her I was just tired..

while I was at school I was talking to my babe when...I saw it..! The figure watching me from the tree line of the woods..I looked at my babe and told her to look.. But once she looked it was gone.. I couldn't believe it..So my babe kissed me and said it will be ok.

So i calmed down..I asked to go to the rest room.I went to the rest room but there it was again looking I ran back to class and told my babe.. Then I told the teacher he went and looked around in the rest room then I heard a scream.

I peaked around the corner...I saw it biting him and it ripped out his spine... By then he was dead I went back to class and carried my babe out of there Until I heard whispers.

I didn't know what they  said so I continued carrying her until I got home once I got done taking babe home I went home.i was resting Until I heard a knock on the door...I answered it...It was my teacher!! I was nervous I said didn't u die he didn't answer I looked at the moon it was so bright it was hurting my eyes.. I asked again the body fell in my house

As I looked at the body I looked up slowly the figure was standing there it had whispered to me..fear me....
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Can't tell u
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on May 07, 2016
HHHHNNNGG WAT IS THIS CREATURRREEE
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on May 07, 2016
I'm gonna tease u all?
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on May 04, 2016
If u go back to part 1 it has no eyes
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on May 04, 2016
Well Its not human btw
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on May 04, 2016
It's a stalker? :0
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on May 04, 2016
U guys want a part two?
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on May 03, 2016
YES PLEASE!!
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Ok I'll make it tomorrow
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on May 03, 2016
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