What if Princess Joined Thunderclan?

What if Princess Joined Thunderclan?

If you are a fan of Warrior cats, then you must know Princess. What if she decides to join Thunderclan? Will stuff change or stay the same? please don't be mad at me if you don't like princess's warrior and/or apprentice name and please don't be mad at me if i got some lines from the actual book Warrior cats: Fire and Ice I just want to make sure this story kinda fit in with the actual book. NOTICE: I'm going to make a new chapter every day. I just want some feedback on the previous chapter. Enjoy!

published on March 24, 2021completed

Shadow clan attacks

The Thunderclan group gets back tired and yawning. Goldpaw ran up to where Longtail was at.

"Thanks for standing up for me." Goldstar said, smiling a bit. "is it true? That I am generous and kind-hearted?"

"Not only that. You are pretty and Fireheart is lucky to have you as a sister." Longtail replied, trying to hide is smile.

"Aw, Longtail, that's so sweet." Goldpaw said, smiling bigger. "maybe we can get a big prey from the pile and share it?"

"That sounds great!" Longtail said.

Goldpaw got a rabbit from the pile then met Longtail outside of the apprentice's den. They shared the rabbit, then said goodnight. When Goldpaw padded into the apprentices den, she found a cozy spot to sleep on. The next morning she heard a urgent voice

"Wake up!" the voice said. "Shadowclan is attacking the camp!"

Startled by the voice, Goldpaw woke up with all senses alert. She heard cat yelling and fighting. She ran outside and she saw Nightstar attacking one of the Thunderclan warrior. She ran to the nursery to check on her kit, when she was in there she saw Brindleface licking her white fluffy kit. Goldpaw sighed of relief as she found out her kit was safe.

"I'm going to stay here, make sure yall stay safe." Goldpaw offered.

"You are a apprentice, Goldpaw." Brindleface said. "for the past moons you didn't check on your kit because you were so busy, now you being a warrior depends on if you fight or not."

Goldpaw nodded with determination then ran outside to join the battle. She saw a Shadowclan cat and attacked him from his side, the tom threw him off of her then clawed her leg.  Goldpaw clawed his side really hard as she kicked him off at the same time. The angry tom jumped on her and clawed her again. Only to where she couldn't kick him back off. In the distance she saw Longtail fighting with a another tom.

"Longtail! Help!" Goldpaw gasped out as the tom clawed her without stopping.

Longtail heard Goldpaw's cries and went over there as fast as he could to claw the tom. Goldpaw sees Longtail and the tom fighting and wrestling, then Longtail won the battle and watched the tom limp away.

"Thanks." Goldpaw said, shaking the dust from her fur.

"Anytime." Longtail replied. " just didn't want you to get killed, without having a chance to be a warrior.

Just then, three Shadowclan cats jumped on Longtail out of nowhere. Goldpaw tried her best to fight off one of the cats but failed.

"Get off of him!" Goldpaw yelled as she pounced on one of the cats' back and bit him in the neck. The tom yelled in pain then threw her off, Goldpaw continued to do that to  the other two cats.

"I thought I'd lose you!" Goldpaw said as she pressed her head against Longtail's shoulders.

"Of course not." Longtail replied. "now lets kick some Shadowclan tails!"

Side by side, Goldpaw and Longtail fought of Shadowclan until they fled back.
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