Amnesia...

Amnesia...

A young female hedgehog named Yamilette wakes up in a strange world. Her quest is to find all her friends, keep them safe and to get home alive. Luna, Sapphire, Wolfie, Carmen, Arcane, Camille and Alexis are all close friends of Yamilette and will do anything to bring her back home saftly, even if it means risking thier own lives...

published on August 01, 2015not completed

"Stop! Go away!"

Yamilette's POV
My eyes opened slowly, there wasn't a sign of light. I stood up let my eyes focus into the darkness, as soon as they did I shut them when a horrible stench filled my nose.
"Yuck!" I gag coughing a little. I hold my nose and open my eyes again and gasp. Luna, Sapphire, Wolfie and Carmen....were dead. "No...no, no, no ,no!" I cry letting tears slip from my eyes.
"Yamilette..."
"Stop! Go away!" I shout covering my eyes.
"Yamilette!"
"No!"
"Yamilette! Wake up!"

I gasp and open my eyes, jeez, I'm sweating like I had just stepped into a oven on full blast. I see a figure leaning ovr me and soon realise it was Luna. I shot up and glomped her knocking her over.
"I'm sorry! I won't leave you guys again!" I say.
"Wha-?" Luna questioned but I just shake my head and stand up. I look around the room to see its simaller to the one I was first placed in, but the funiture was slightly diffrent and moved around.
"Where are we, Luna?" I ask walking around the room. "And where are the others?" Luna shakes her head and stands up.
"I don't know...it seems like everyone is separated and I couldn't find a key to get out of here, but I did find a note!"
"Can you tell me what the note says?"
"Sure, hold on" She reaches into a pocket in her jacket and takes out a crumbled note.

"Hello there! I hope your happy who you are with! I found it boring that you all were just wondering around so I decided to give you all a challenge! You all have plenty of stuff and someone with you. But! There is no key. So you will have to hope someone saves you! Oh, and I almost forgot to mention, that door isn't monster proof! Toodles!"

I sit fall onto the bed and sigh.
"Great, so now we wait until a monster breaks down the door or someone comes to save us." I mumble into the pillow
"Looks like it!" Luna walks over and sits onto the bed next to where I lay.
"I was starting to think the person with the notes was helping too" Luna grunted just as annoyed as I was. I sit up and give her a small smile.
"At least there-" I was cut out by a noise from behind the door.
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on July 31, 2016
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on July 31, 2016
wut happened to me next?
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I'm afraid we will never know, I don't think i'm going to contiue this unless everyone gets back into it again, i don't even remember where my notes for this story were XD
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XD I like that story
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on July 31, 2016
Then got fat and couldn't fit out the store...
jk
yeah the end.
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on July 31, 2016
*Sequel* They brought Wolife back through the power of Ice cream and friendship! They they bindged on icecream till the end of time XD
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on July 31, 2016
*Finishes the story* Then one day, Sapphire said screw it and took all her friends out to Ice cream...the end!
Oh yeah, Wolfie died if you wanted to know but that's not important
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on July 31, 2016
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on July 31, 2016
Please continue O.O
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Oh wow...I forgot I had this story XD
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on June 22, 2016
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on March 28, 2016
Wolfie's gone. :c
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on September 11, 2015
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on September 11, 2015
Yamilette and Camille are not sisters anymore so you might have to edit the story
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Really? What happened? But sure :3
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on August 04, 2015
Okay ^.^ changed it
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on August 04, 2015
We had diffrent ideas
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on August 04, 2015
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on August 04, 2015
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on August 04, 2015
Man! I died! :/
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You may or may not have :3
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on August 04, 2015
I know I'm just sayin'
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on August 04, 2015
Huh? It never said you was
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on August 04, 2015
Just because I'm a dog, doesn't mean I'm a burden! 3:
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on August 04, 2015
I love the story so much please continue :D
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Thanks and I am :3
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on August 01, 2015
No problem and i can't wait ;)
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on August 01, 2015
I hope there's no zom-zoms here. :c
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X3 I don't think so, no
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Yayz :3
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