The Forest

The Forest

This story is about a girl named Alice. She is soon turning 13 years old. While moving in and getting settled she finds a book that unlocks the truth about Goldfinch. And witnesses a horror that she will never forget

published on November 21, 2014completed

Weeks

Weeks past. Someone was walking by the house and saw that the door was open. As  they were walking up to the house they could smell a rotting smell. When they walked into the house to see if anyone was home. That's when I heard a scream the person say the blood and guts and bodies all over the floor. They started to call the cops of a murder. Two hours later the cops came and started to investigate. The saw the family picture and saw through they were missing me.  That's when things started to get weird. The cops believed I did it. So I told myself that I would never go back to that house or even remember what I have seen and been though.

Days soon weeks then months past still no resolution. As I thought,  I decided to get out of town and start fresh. As a new murderer  who wanted revenge on my family and revenge for me.
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:D awesome
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on November 25, 2014
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on November 23, 2014
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on November 22, 2014
Goldfinch is so different...I like it
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on November 22, 2014
This horror story is amazing! Keep it up
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on November 22, 2014
I really really like it!! :) please keep it up!
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? OK..thxs for the advice
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Advice? Lol your welcome
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on November 22, 2014
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on November 22, 2014
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on November 22, 2014
Thank you for the positive comments ??
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on November 22, 2014
Awesome
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Thank you kitty
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on November 22, 2014
Great work
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on November 22, 2014
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on November 22, 2014
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on November 22, 2014
'.' I saw this on hygiene now and this story is really good
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Really?
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on November 22, 2014
Hot now*
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on November 22, 2014
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on November 22, 2014
Keeps up the superb job
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???? ok
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on November 22, 2014
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on November 22, 2014
I like this type of horror story. Keep doing great
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on November 22, 2014
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on November 22, 2014
This story really gets to me It's like a creepypasta. Keep up the great work
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Yea I guess so. But I didn't put that much detail on the murderer or anything It's just a short story
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on November 22, 2014
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on November 22, 2014
Wonderful ???
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You think?
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on November 22, 2014
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on November 22, 2014
I like this story. Keep up the good work
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Thank you
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on November 22, 2014
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on November 22, 2014
I like this story It's like a twist at the end to me
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Haha thxs
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on November 22, 2014
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on November 22, 2014
Please comment if you moved it,???
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Woved. Not moved woved
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on November 21, 2014
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on November 21, 2014