The Forest

The Forest

This story is about a girl named Alice. She is soon turning 13 years old. While moving in and getting settled she finds a book that unlocks the truth about Goldfinch. And witnesses a horror that she will never forget

published on November 21, 2014completed

Never Again

While I am thinking in my head adding up all the details and what's been happening to me. I had feeling in my gut that I needed to go back to that house for that book. Because something was telling me that book had the truth, about what's going on around here in Goldfinch. So as I was think about what I should carry with me into that house I saw a black rusty rench. So when I took my first step back into the house,  there was blood all over the walls, my family picture smashed on the ground into one hundred peaces. I had to cover my mouth and nose so I didn't scream and smell the blood and guts all over the floor and steps. As I was walking by all the blood and guts, there was..that looked like three finger markings going up the stairs side wall. As I followed it,  it lead me to my room. I got my rench really to swing at whatever was in my room, but there was nothing there. Or so I thought.

As I tried reaching for the gray book my mirror had bloody writing saying " Your time is up" so I grabbed the book and rushed down the stairs but only leading to the unbarrable horror that lied before me. My mom and dads heads were being held by the guy. He had a axe in his hand saying in a deep dark voise "Your time is up". As I tried running again he threw the axe,  as I was running it landed by the door, I screamed and didn't look back and started running even faster and I said in my head "Never,Never again shall I go back there"

Instead of going into town I ran into the forest and climb up a tall tree and sat there. While all these emotions go through my head about why just happened to me,  something sparked in my nonscheduled I started twiching and laughing, dropping the book. Saying out loud YOU'RE GONNA BE SORRY YOU DID THAT YOU LITTLE BASTERD!!!! THIS weird feeling made me want to kill and only kill. Get revenge for my family because I was thinking why the fudge would he do this why would he want to hurt me and kill my loved ones!! As I was saying and thinking this I found a knife laying under some leaves,  so I jumped down from the tree to pick it up, so I put it in my black goodies pocket. As I was walking I found a almost empty bottle of beer. So I picked it you and started drinking it trying to forget everything and must want revenge.
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:D awesome
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on November 25, 2014
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on November 23, 2014
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on November 22, 2014
Goldfinch is so different...I like it
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on November 22, 2014
This horror story is amazing! Keep it up
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on November 22, 2014
I really really like it!! :) please keep it up!
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? OK..thxs for the advice
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Advice? Lol your welcome
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on November 22, 2014
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on November 22, 2014
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on November 22, 2014
Thank you for the positive comments ??
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on November 22, 2014
Awesome
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Thank you kitty
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on November 22, 2014
Great work
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on November 22, 2014
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on November 22, 2014
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on November 22, 2014
'.' I saw this on hygiene now and this story is really good
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Really?
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on November 22, 2014
Hot now*
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on November 22, 2014
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on November 22, 2014
Keeps up the superb job
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???? ok
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on November 22, 2014
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on November 22, 2014
I like this type of horror story. Keep doing great
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on November 22, 2014
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on November 22, 2014
This story really gets to me It's like a creepypasta. Keep up the great work
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Yea I guess so. But I didn't put that much detail on the murderer or anything It's just a short story
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on November 22, 2014
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on November 22, 2014
Wonderful ???
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You think?
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on November 22, 2014
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on November 22, 2014
I like this story. Keep up the good work
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Thank you
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on November 22, 2014
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on November 22, 2014
I like this story It's like a twist at the end to me
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Haha thxs
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on November 22, 2014
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on November 22, 2014
Please comment if you moved it,???
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Woved. Not moved woved
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on November 21, 2014
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on November 21, 2014