Oke, here's sone atvice... : *I really liked that you made the reader more crazy then the creepypasta's, that's originale, but now the creepypasta's aren't crazy, and that's boring (tip: u could watch the Cp's backstories again to refresh their character) *it could hep if they could talk AND do stuff, I'm not saying your way of wrighting isen't readable or anything See More like that, but more people would probably rank it when they can really live in the moment :D
This is just atvice, but this is a awesome story already ^-^
XD thank you for your advice. they are crazy but slenderman has taken interest in the reader that's why I said that you had been seeing people fallowing you as of recent. and Im glad you liked the story so far. at first I thought you where my first hate comment on this story.
*I really liked that you made the reader more crazy then the creepypasta's, that's originale, but now the creepypasta's aren't crazy, and that's boring (tip: u could watch the Cp's backstories again to refresh their character)
*it could hep if they could talk AND do stuff, I'm not saying your way of wrighting isen't readable or anything See More like that, but more people would probably rank it when they can really live in the moment :D
This is just atvice, but this is a awesome story already ^-^
and still if you need my help, you know my username :D