walk home
(y/n)( your pov.)I just got to school laughing insanely I cant believe I just met my sister. I made fun of her,the look on her face was f***ing priceless.Then getting me out of my thought because of Meiko the biggest whore in our school. I guess I was her new victim i smirked she doesn't know what she just got herself into. she started to call me names like freak, ugly, whore,loser,trash, useless,ect.but the best name she called me was crazy it made me smile so i spoke up .
~~~~~~~conversation time~~~~~~~~
(Y/N): thank you for noticing.
meiko: what do you mean thank you.
(Y/N):because you could tell im crazy.
meiko: f*** you crazy bitch!!!
(Y/N): ill visit you tonight.
~~~~~~~end conversation~~~~~~~~
~~~~~~~time skip by hatsune mikuo~~~~~~
i went to the spot that i met them i felt as if im being watched but then again when dont i feel watched. so i yelled sally are you there!!!
(sally pov.)
we where all watching the lady form earier. we saw her go to the place we met her and she yelled my name. I looked at slendy and he said wait.then I heard her yell didn't you say you wanted to have a tea party then we walked out
~~~~~~conversation time!!!!~~~~~~
sally: miss im sorry im late are you ready?
(Y/N):yes but may I ask a question?
sally: yes of course anything.
(Y/N):what is a tea party
creepypastas: what!?!?!?!?!
(Y/N):what the f***ing hell is your problem!!!?
sally: just come with me to our house and we can have a tea party you will have fun!!!!
(Y/N): ok
~~~~~~~end conversation~~~~~~~~
(your pov.)
ok how about while I walk with them I talk to my self some more I laughed at that thought, I saw them look at me.i decide to flip them off and they looked as they got annoyed. as you know I was locked up my whole life with nothing to do but walk around , think of killing people ,draw and look out the bars. I couldn't do much because of the chains. I wonder what this tea party is and if I really will have fun? then out of nowhere I hear sally say where here.
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*I really liked that you made the reader more crazy then the creepypasta's, that's originale, but now the creepypasta's aren't crazy, and that's boring (tip: u could watch the Cp's backstories again to refresh their character)
*it could hep if they could talk AND do stuff, I'm not saying your way of wrighting isen't readable or anything See More like that, but more people would probably rank it when they can really live in the moment :D
This is just atvice, but this is a awesome story already ^-^
and still if you need my help, you know my username :D