The Broken: Horror House

The Broken: Horror House

May went for a walk one summer in the forest. she saw a lonely four storage house and wanted to investigate. but trip on a rock near a river bed and fell straight into an angry river. she scream mommy daddy but they were to far away and she drown right in front of the house. but little may story is far from over. Ten years later two new girls came to the town May was born at one of them Kate lived in May's childhood house as for Maliyah who lived in the house where May's body was found dead both girls begin to see and hear strange things but its not May running the show no someone or something else.

published on July 06, 2016not completed

Tragic Reminder

"Tell me everything she commanded,"
I begin afraid she might not believe anything I said, I told her about going home last night and feeling someone watching me than footsteps than seeing the bloody woman with the bloody coated knife and finally the bloody hands in the bathroom and threats on the wall.
When I finished she just looked at me, shock with everything that i just said.She looked at me and admitted that she saw a woman and a girl across the street this morning so its hard not believe you,she said, the bell ring telling us to go to our classes since we had the same classes for the rest of the day we decided to walk to our classes together.
So what am i suppose to do? I asked
she shrugged her shoulder I don't know have you told your dad,she asked
yes but he doesn't believe me,i said sadly
I grab my books and started to go to my next class, my books dropped out of my hands as a scream left my lips I stumbled back into the lockers panicking like crazy.
Kate turned to me and saw my reaction, Maliyah Whats wrong, she begin to walk towards me but I stop her.
STOP!!! I yelled, She paused we was the only one out here so i was lucky that no one but Kate saw my reaction.
Maliyah, Whats wrong..Whats going on..What are you seeing,Kate asked worried about me?
How can she not see her, I asked myself right in front of me was the woman who i saw at the house, she was cover in blood and right in front of me her knife right above my neck i begin to cry as the knife cut deeper in me.
She turned around to see Kate she dropped the knife from my throat I fell down to my knees and started coughing blood. I look over at Kate and saw worry and fear all over her face the woman was now behind Kate stalking her all around.
No, leave her alone, I begin running towards her but the locker fell over stopping me. The woman pick her up by the throat I watch as she was in mid air than thrown across the hall against the back wall, she fell flat on her face unconscious i yelled NO!! but no one seem to hear me. I heard the woman laugh before saying more in one voice, She ran up to me until she was right in front of me or was it behind me she whisper into my ears just reminding you.

I yelled as she disappeared when the tension left I ran too Kate.

Kate POV

I felt someone lift me up by the throat making it hard for me to  breath I didn't see anyone I just felt a negative feeling around me, next thing I knew I was thrown to the back wall. My head hit the wall I could feel my own blood spill out of the back of my head. How didn't these people hear this? I thought.

A irritating ring begin to grow in my ears as my vision begin to get blurry, I remember seeing a figure of someone before passing out.
I woke up with a sharp pain in my head I grab the back of my head as I slowly sat up and blank a few times to try to clear my vision. Once I did this I start to look around at my surroundings I was in a small office I guess the nurse office which mean I was still in school.

"I spoke my voice sounding raspy what happen, where Maliyah, I asked"

the nurse who was siting at her desk. She turn to me and said nothing only went and check on me. She check my temperature than my head the bleeding had stop but I still felt a sharp pain in my head. I flinch when I felt her hand on my head every time she would touch it the pain would get worst. She wrote my reaction down, and left to get something still leaving me clueless and in pain.
I look towards a few chairs after slowly laying back down and saw my mom walking towards the nurse office i could tell she was very worry. Mom,I yelled quickly getting up but regretting that i did for the pain in my head got worst now it felt like knives staving constantly in my head  begin to feel dizzy as the pain grew i begin to hear ringing in my ears again as my vision begin to double or blur. The machine begin to beat louder as my blood pressure seem to get higher. The nurse quickly came in blocking my view of my mom and gave me a bag of ice i slowly lift up my arm and slowly press the ice against the back of my head. Pain still continued to get worst in my head but my vision wasn't blurry anymore and the ringing had stop. My mom ran towards me this time  slowly got up as at the same time i found myself in a crushing hug. Whoa..I had no idea she can hug that tight, I thought to myself.
Oh honey, she said now looking into my eyes you could tell she was crying because her eyes was watery and she was stuttering.
Are..are you okay, she asked  hugging me again as if  it was the  first time in years since she saw me.
Ye..yes i'm okay just my head hurts really bad and i'm very shaky, I admitted.
Oh, I know honey but you be okay, the parametric are coming to take you to a hospital, she said letting me go.
Wait, what, how long have I been out, I asked looking at her with wonder and worry?
this time the nurse answer almost eleven hours, she answer as two parametric came in, i hesitated getting on the stretcher I looked at my mom who looked at me sternly saying that i should so without fighting i did what she wanted me  to do. This remind me when Maggie almost murder me, only it wasn't Maggie who done this it was someone else but who..who could this person be is itevn a person.
Where is Maliyah, I asked, is she okay, I asked my mom as they begin to take me away?
don't worry about her she with her dad, she reply calmly
Did she asked about me, I asked my mom randomly.
Yes she did she was very worry about you, she reply, I really think she be a great friend for you she smiled at me i smiled back at her i like the fact that i could actually have a true friend.

I wonder if she think the same way.
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in chapter 3 it said she left the hospital on november 18th and thats my birthday. lol
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