along came jack

along came jack

Cecilia deheart is a smexy, hot and funny businesswomen from Mottingham. Her life is going nowhere until she meets jack drew, an attractive, smoking man with a passion for reading.However, when a thug tries to beat up ceclina, jack springs to the rescue. ceclina begins to notices that jack is actually rather funky at heart. But, the pressures of jack's job as a waitress leave him blind to ceclina's affections and ceclina takes up listening to someone speak to try an distract himself. Finally, when dumb unemployeed, lucas mayhem, threatens to come between them, jack has to act fast. But will they ever find the sizzling love that they deserve?

published on March 28, 2013completed

Your what!

Your what!
So jack and i are going to dinner tonight i cant wait

then the bell goes
"hi jack"
"hiya cece"
"so where are we going"
"Je Adore"
" ha ha"
so we left and headed for the cafe, i quite liked it and i know he liked it as well"
"what do you do for a living Jack"
" i am  waiter in cafe rouge in south london what bout you"
" i am a businesswomen in cenral london you know Gissings"
" no soz"
i was about to go in for a kiss and he strated talking on and on about his job
does he know that i like him, does he see i'm trying to show that i love him
or is he stuck in his own world with me in the middle.
      i stood up. he stopped talking.
"thanks for the meal jack see you tomorrow"
" o..o.oh ok see you"
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OMG I LOVE THIS SOOOO MUCH WRITE MORE PLEASE!!!!!!O:-)
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on May 15, 2013
This is SOO good!!!! Write more!!!! pwetty please?? :3
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on April 27, 2013
ok i will thanks my new one comes out soon
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on March 31, 2013
MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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on March 30, 2013
Try to slow down just a little when your writing though to avoid spelling mistakes : )
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on March 28, 2013
Nice: )
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on March 28, 2013