along came jack

along came jack

Cecilia deheart is a smexy, hot and funny businesswomen from Mottingham. Her life is going nowhere until she meets jack drew, an attractive, smoking man with a passion for reading.However, when a thug tries to beat up ceclina, jack springs to the rescue. ceclina begins to notices that jack is actually rather funky at heart. But, the pressures of jack's job as a waitress leave him blind to ceclina's affections and ceclina takes up listening to someone speak to try an distract himself. Finally, when dumb unemployeed, lucas mayhem, threatens to come between them, jack has to act fast. But will they ever find the sizzling love that they deserve?

published on March 28, 2013completed

Thuggie!2

Thuggie!2
I was on my way home walking, in the distance a figure a gilr figure someone was following her it was a man older then her.
i shouted "hay girl over there Behind you" no reply just a look round and he wasnt there.
the man gave me a stare a rude arrigant stare like you were saying " what are you  looking at and are you trying to help her"
i could feel a slight tingle in my spine like i was meant to do something


                                                     I KNOW!!!

I ran as fast as i could, i could hear him laughing,giggling, someone was with him who and why did the want her,
i dont know who it is but i know i need to get there fast otherwise she is history and there will be no grand-children to tell.

the thought of saving someone (a girl) made me stingle and wanna save her even quicker.


I got there quickly, grabbed their gun and pointed it straight at the guy that had (the girl),(cassie).
i was so scared i could hear a dial sort of sound coming from the bag in the car.
" give me the girl dude" i said powerfully
"Or what"
" i'll shot you i've got a gun"
"ok shot me then"
the other guy quickly added
" G...Give him the gilr man"
"be quite Lucas"
then the police came
" im not gonna give you a sentence but you with the bag 2 years in community service and you well you are fine i guess"
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OMG I LOVE THIS SOOOO MUCH WRITE MORE PLEASE!!!!!!O:-)
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on May 15, 2013
This is SOO good!!!! Write more!!!! pwetty please?? :3
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on April 27, 2013
ok i will thanks my new one comes out soon
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on March 31, 2013
MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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on March 30, 2013
Try to slow down just a little when your writing though to avoid spelling mistakes : )
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on March 28, 2013
Nice: )
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on March 28, 2013