along came jack

along came jack

Cecilia deheart is a smexy, hot and funny businesswomen from Mottingham. Her life is going nowhere until she meets jack drew, an attractive, smoking man with a passion for reading.However, when a thug tries to beat up ceclina, jack springs to the rescue. ceclina begins to notices that jack is actually rather funky at heart. But, the pressures of jack's job as a waitress leave him blind to ceclina's affections and ceclina takes up listening to someone speak to try an distract himself. Finally, when dumb unemployeed, lucas mayhem, threatens to come between them, jack has to act fast. But will they ever find the sizzling love that they deserve?

published on March 28, 2013completed

OMG jack

OMG jack
OMG i have had enough this new guy called Jack thinks he is the top of the sschool just because he is new (well im new to) that doesnt make me populuar does it NO!
so he decides to come over#

" hiya sweet cheeks"
"umm go away little boy"
the crowd round him went silent
"oh so you think im little"
"you are from south- london right?"
again everyone went quite
"i thought so Jack bye"
then a gilr with pink hair came over
"hi ever since he stepped in the room he's been like this"
"i figured"
" so im cassie but everyone calls me sassy"
" why"
" coz im sassy"
Jack came up to me again
" oh im sorry... is your name chloe"
"no...cece"
"soz babe"
" i will pop you like a zit in a min"
he ran off in to his crowd of lam-o friends i feel sorry him so badly he must come from a mental family
" i know" said cassie quitely
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OMG I LOVE THIS SOOOO MUCH WRITE MORE PLEASE!!!!!!O:-)
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on May 15, 2013
This is SOO good!!!! Write more!!!! pwetty please?? :3
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on April 27, 2013
ok i will thanks my new one comes out soon
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on March 31, 2013
MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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on March 30, 2013
Try to slow down just a little when your writing though to avoid spelling mistakes : )
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on March 28, 2013
Nice: )
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on March 28, 2013