The Unleashed

The Unleashed

This is a story that is about my created character, Jack Lee. Jack Lee will battle alot of evil things like demons, angels, vampires, etc. This is my #1 story so i hope you all like it.

published on March 27, 2013completed

Chapter 5: Suit Up

Vanessa led Jack to a room. She opened the door and turned the light on. There were weapons and outfits everywhere. The room was so big that it seemed to go on forever.
"Holy crap," Jack said.
"We have a large selection of weapons and outfits," Vanessa told him. "Go ahead and choose what you want. I'll be waiting for you outside?"
Vanessa left Jack in the room. Jack looked around.
The room was so big that there was room for a small plane and a chopper.
Jack looked at many weapons. He looked at a few rifles, shotguns, and more. Eventually, he chose a katana sword, a six inch combat knife, and a desert eagle.
After he chose his weapons, he went looking for an outfit. He wanted something that looked cool, but didnt over do it. He put on a pair of black combat pants, black boots, black gloves, and a black T-shirt.
Once He was set, he went outside the room. Vanessa was standing there waiting on him. She smiled.
"Not to shabby," Vanessa told him. "Now it is time for our first mission together. Now lets go."
Vanessa smiled at Jack. She led him to her room.
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I feel like there are too many characters for a short story. ._.
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on April 27, 2013
I like it the ending was very sweet where Farrah came back lol a gift from God =) I like that lol and the sequal thing if up to you lol I just go with the flow lol
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on April 10, 2013
It's good just remember to keep an eye out for your spelling lol
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on April 03, 2013
Very good start off because it foes right to the action. This story is the type to keep u on the edge of your seat and just haves u thirsty for more lol. But one thing u wanna do Ant is since this is just writing, you don't have to put *'s when you wrote out a cuss word. But other than that, I like it so far
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on April 02, 2013
Sounds good =)
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on March 27, 2013