A Lost Soul

A Lost Soul

This poem is dedicated to a friend of mine, Bonnie1Scott. She requested for this poem and I came up with it for her. Here you go Bonnie1Scott! Thanks for the request and I hope this is what you wanted. If not, let me know and I'll re-try and do it again. Thanks! -Steph

published on March 21, 2013completed

A Lost Soul

A Lost Soul I stand on top of the balcony
Peering out into the woods.
The woods are dark and mysterious
And just starring at it makes me curious.

It feels like Deja Vu
I feel like I been here before
But from where?
I feel like there is something waiting for me over there.

I climb down the stairs
and start making my way into the woods.
It is dark and creepy out here
The leaves crunching under my feet, is the only thing I hear.

My heart is telling me to go back,
but my brain is telling me to carry on
Instead, I listen to my brain
And do the most insane.

I walk down a little path
It leads me to a grave.
I walk over to it,
And read the description on it.

Here lies Samantha Becker,
1934-1948,
Beloved daughter of Alan and Beth
May you rest in death.

I froze at the words.
Could this be true?
Who was I? Where was I?
Did I really die?
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I know this may not mean much over the others complements but I really do love it and your work.
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on January 07, 2014
Just your style, I can tell, as its AMAZING!
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on April 25, 2013
Awesome and amazing! You are truly awesome!
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on April 13, 2013
AMAZING!! *tears up from your sucess* YOUR SUCCESS BURNS!! IT IS TOO AMAZING!! AND AWSOME!! And scene!! :) :P AWSOME!!
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on April 03, 2013
Once again, this is great. Creepy and mysterious and it gave me the chills!
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on March 21, 2013
God that was amazing, i dnt kno hw u did it, but u did!!! ;) Nice poem, i love it!
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on March 21, 2013
This would make a great story if you wanted to go down that path!
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on March 21, 2013
*loud applause* =]
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on March 21, 2013