Chapter 6: Divine Intervention
"Lucas?" Martin asked."The kid I'm helping." Rin stated. "He went to Rusty to get his rings back earlier and I couldn't stop him. And I can't find Either of them."
"Calm down," Martin said. "We'll find him. What did he look like?" Martin asked.
"He's kind of short, White hair, feathers down his arms-"
"Yeah I know him." Martin interrupted. "He stole my pendant. I'm going to guess he tried to trade it to the guy for the rings."
"They'll help us, right, Rin?" the girl asked asked. "Two of them are Kendred, and we havent exactly had the best experience with them."
"Relax, Vanny. These three are good people." He assured her. Martin nodded.
"Of course we will." He stated.
"The peace was quickly disrupted by loud banging on the door.
"Town guard!" A voice echoed from the other side. "We have quesstions for the two Kendred accomanied by a Shedan." They shouted. Martin opened the door.
"Come with us." Two guards stood outside the door waiting. Martin Leo and Lin followed them as Rin an Vanny took their leave.
"We'll see you soon." Rin shouted back to them. Martin nodded.
Within the guard tower, the man from before sat across from them.
"You three." He said. "You were reported for harrassing a jewelry vendor yesterday, correct?" He asked. Linda shook her head.
"That's not true!" She exclaimed. "We asked him a couple questions and he overreacted."
"Is this true?" He asked the other two. Martin nodded. Leo looked at the man.
"Sir, every other person in this town looks at us as if we're criminals." He said. "I don't think it would be too suprising if he did. Do you?" The guard simply shook his head.
"I apologize, but this is not why i called you in. I eceived reports that you were the last people to knowingly talk with him." He explained. "And late last night he went missing. We wanted to know exactly happened with Rusty, and to know what information you had." He stated. A couple more guards entered the room, and approached Linda. They gestured for her to follow them.
"Get up." One of them stated.
"Why? What are you doing?" She asked them.
"I need to ask your friends a couple questions about their home." The man asked. "In the meantime, these two will keep you company, out in the hall." He stated.
"Yess Enzo." The guards replied. Linda looked back at the other two with distress as they led her into the next room.
"As for you two. How did you become captains so young?" He asked with suspicion.
"In all honesty sir." Leo said. "I'm not exactly sure."
"We used to always compete with each other." Martin explained. "We used the skills we learned from each other to progress."
Enzo nodded.
"Well, I'm going to guess Briarwood was a smaller Village, Correct? He asked. The two nodded. Enzo continued to question the two on the layout and clockwork of Briarwood. Trying to figure out the true origin of the boys.
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I await for a new chapter of Impure to be uploaded, as many others do. I may need to re-read the story again in order to be able to fluently traverse to the next chapter, like a person traveling from one town to the next...the same but different at the same time, and must be re-read See More in order to remember...to be able to transfer from one place to the next...I suppose maybe more like following what we Americans call the Louis and Clarke trail if you were to traverse that same trail first made by them...I may have gotten a tad bit off topic....and rambled...though I cannot wait until the next chapter arrives....speaking of chapters...I should continue my story as well some time...
I may have just shut my door to my room due to my parents....watching youtube videos with more than the usual amount of swearing in them....and now I worry whether that may have been rude or not...as that door separates the two bedrooms...
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That may also be the only one of its kind....in Tyler's hands...
I'll probably redraw Linda
CHAPTERS.
EVER.
Is there a reference picture?
I originally meant to do it digitally, but due to an incident I have to do it on paper
Where do I upload the picture?
There are grammatical errors that are bothering me, and it's a little difficult to see who's talking but the plot is great so far! Keep writing ^_^
I guess I know what I'll be reading for the rest of this day! Well done, hope to see more later!
Chapter One = Kind of confusing, and has some grammar errors that are kind of bothering me, but overall really good!
2. It will be easier to understand AND look smoother (and be grammatically correct) if you start a new line/paragraph every time someone speaks.
Mostly just those two things.