Impure

Impure

Once, long ago, three factions ruled over the nation of Alma. The Kendred, Shedan, And Morphis, each with its own god. Under the fires of an ancient war, the Morphis died off, and their god disappeared. One thousand years later a dark curse has swept over the land, transforming Alma and her people. It is now up to Martin Dunshire and his friends, Leo Wallace and Linda Baroo, to free the land from a never ending nightmare. As the threat of war is on the doorstep, A dark truth comes to light.one that will forever change Alma. Can they do it before time runs out? (feel free to rate, add to favorites, or comment. All criticism is helpful)

published on January 16, 2016not completed

Chapter 2: Family Secrets

Chapter 2: Family Secrets “…Huh? Where am I?” Leo awoke, then stood in what appeared to be never-ending darkness. He took a deep breath, and tried to step forward. His ankles felt heavy, but was able to walk forward a couple feet before bumping into what appeared to be a wall. He heard whispers on the other side of the wall.
        “You saw by the symbol on his vest! He isn’t an average Kendred Scout!” He heard on the other side, a voice started to reply.
“It doesn’t matter; you saw by his face that he’s a mere child!”
Leo knocked on the walls a bit, discovering it was wooden with bars.
“Wait a minute, this is a cage!” He thought to himself. He grabbed and found a tarp was covering the cage. A sudden shock of pain went up his arm.
“What the hell happened to me?” He looked down in the darkness, hoping to see what was causing the pain, but to no avail.
“Hey did you hear that?” one of the voices outside asked.
“Yeah, it sounds like our friend here has woken up.”
There was ruffling about outside, Leo heard the crumpling of leaves around the small area. A flash of light caught him off guard.
“Gah!” He exclaimed as sunlight burned his eyes. Leo squinted as they adjusted to the brightness. He looked out around and noticed he was at a small camp. He looked down to see his feet were chained to the ground of the cage, and he was covered in cuts and gashes. He looked outside and around the cage. There were two Shedan Guards; A young man with patches of wolf’s fur on him, who was standing beside the cage looking at Leo, and a young girl with the ears and whiskers of a Cat who was sitting on a log next to a tent.
“Hey buddy, having a nice time in there?” The wolf smirked.
“Don’t antagonize him, Jason. Believe me, he’s stronger than he looks!” The cat seemed a bit wary of Leo.
“Ah, fret not, Linette my dear. If he does anything, I still have this.” He gestured to a musket hanging off of his back.
“You realize that there’s a reason we don’t use those, right?”
“Yes my dear. But the accuracy won’t matter from this range!”
Leo reached back for his katana, but it wasn’t there.
“What, were you trying to go for a weapon?” Jason said. He started laughing sadistically. Leo shuffled his feet, and smirked with a secretive realization.
“We took that blade of yours. Linette could really use it in her training. Heh, the only question, what’s with the mark on the hilt? Well, I guess it doesn’t matter, it will be a glorious trophy of your defeat!”
Jason started boasting.
“What was that you were saying about the accuracy of that musket?” Leo asked, bringing up the previous topic.
“What?” Jason pondered for a moment. “You think I’m gonna give my secrets away like that? What are you, stupid?”
“Well, I mean it’s not just the accuracy of the gun that matters.”
“What was that, kid?”
“Jason, Please!” Linette cried out.
“Well, I mean, you’d need to be able to keep up with your target. Even in a small space like this, I would probably outsmart you.” Leo smirked
“We’ll see about that you little runt!” Jason pulled up the musket and aimed it at Leo
“Jason, Don’t!” Linette cried as he pulled the bolt back, but it was too late, before he knew it he had squeezed the trigger. Leo quickly ducked and pulled his dagger off of his calf, and lunged forward, latching onto Jason’s Outfit, pulling him into the cage walls. He held the blade to the boy’s neck
“You were saying?” Leo flipped the blade and pressed it’s face against the wolf’s neck, cutting off his air flow.
“What are you… doing?” Jason said with a final gasp. Leo released Jason’s clothes, and he fell back limp, making a large thud as he hit the ground.
“I-is he-?” Linette started to ask Leo.
“He’s unconscious. I pressed the flat side of the blade to cut off his breathing, he’ll be up in a matter of minutes.”
“Why would you spare him?”
“Because I don’t kill if I don’t have to.” Leo stated. He put her into a blank stare. “Though it would be a lot easier on all of us if you would set me free.” Linette sat in silence trying to think of what to do.
“You realize he’s going to wake up and try again, and if he does I can’t promise his safety.” Leo was attempting to persuade her to let him free.
“I guess you’re right.” She cautiously approached the cage, holding out a key. “Here.”
“Thank you for being negotiable.” Leo said. He kneeled down and unlocked the clasps on his ankles, and reached through the bars to unlock the cage door. He walked up to the girl, and extended his hand. “My sword, please?”
“Yes, right away.” She said with a panicked haste. She ran to where she was sitting earlier and brought back the black blade.
“Do me one more favor.” He asked.
“What would that be?”
“Keep an eye on him.” He gestured to Jason, lying unconscious on the ground.
“Uhh… Yeah…” She stuttered, she started trembling, and stared at the captain’s emblem on his vest. Leo turned and left, keeping an eye on the girl behind him. He sheathed his sword and walked into the distance.

        Leo looked around, wondering where he was. He had lurked around the woods for hours, and it would soon be dark. As he dug through the leafy canvas of the low lying trees, he stumbled upon a path.
“Where in Oblivion am I?” He asked himself. He looked down the path and noticed a small bridge. “This is the path to the village!” He ran up to the bridge to see what way the water was flowing.
“Well, I’m no closer to home, but at least I have an idea of where I am.” He started his trek back to his village with haste. He didn’t know what all had happened in the village, and the thought troubled him.
“Oh please let her be alright.”
        He ran a little farther down the road when he heard a rustle in a bush behind him. He turned to draw his blade, but before he could even grasp the hilt, he had been knocked to the ground.
“Huh?” Leo looked up and realized it was Linda who had ran into him, and was now laying on top of him.
“Gah! Lin- “
“Oh! I’m sorry!” She stood up and looked at Leo.
“Leo? Where have you been?!? She asked him. “The whole village is worried about you! You need to get back there!”
“And what about you, why are you out here?” Leo asked her.
“That doesn’t matter, I need to make sure everyone in my village is ok!” She pointed to a pillar of smoke above the trees, somewhat in the distance. Leo looked at it with great concern, and spoke up. “Here, I’ll go with you, but I should check back home first.” He explained. Linda helped him up.
“ok, I’ll wait for you there.” Linda replied and started running off.
The leaves in the distance started rustling.
“I THINK I HEARD THEM OVER HERE!” Leo heard a voice shouting. He turned and started chasing after Linda. “Linda! Wait!” He shouted. She stopped at the bridge and turned to him.
“What?!” She asked. She was startled. She watched Leo run up to her, and they looked behind him to see two Shedan scouts closing in, fast. Linda extended her arm, and attempted to cast a spell, but only for it to fizzle out. She turned to Leo.
“I’m out of Mana.” She stated.
“I don’t know what that means, but I’m going to assume it’s not good.”
“It means I can’t cast any spells at the moment.”
“Well that’s just lovely, come on, let’s go!” He grabbed Linda’s arm and attempted to run the other way, only to be confronted by a Shedan carrying a Musket, smirking and slowly walking toward them.
“Well, it would appear we’re cornered.” Leo stated. “You know how to fight with a dagger, right?”
“Yeah, somewhat.” She said. The two were almost out of breath.
“Well, take mine.” He handed her the small blade from his calf.
“Why is there blood on this?” She asked.
“It’s his.” He pointed to the one holding the musket. The scouts had stood on either side of the bridge now, and there was no way around without jumping into the river.
“Ok, I’ll take the two on the right,” Leo drew his blade. “focus on the musketeer, he only has one shot, so if you can-” He was interrupted. One of the Shedan had grabbed him, and the other grabbed Linda. They were forced to the ground by the bridges wood railing, and Jason approached.
“You should have killed me when you had the chance, boy” He aimed the musket at Leo. “Any last words?” He asked. “No, eh? Well then, fine by me.” Linda thrusted her body into Leo’s. knocking him to the side. The boy squeezed the trigger, and the ears of the two rang. The pellets from the musket grazed between the shoulders of Linda and Leo, knocked the scouts holding them down backward, and propelling the two off the edge of the bridge into the water below.
“Damn it!” Jason yelled. As he watched the two wash down the river.
        The two gasped for breath as they were swept along the current, with their wounds making it harder for them to swim.
“Linda, hold on to my arm!” Leo yelled to her. She grabbed onto his shoulder, and held on tight, as they heard a loud roar of water in the distance.
“Do you hear that?!” Linda exclaimed to Leo.
“Yeah, hold on tight.” Fighting against the current, Leo drew his blade, attempting to pry it into the ground under the water. He felt it cling to something.
“Ok, we’re anchored.” He said. The strength of the current rushing past them was intense, and his arms were weakening.
He tried to shift his weight toward the shore, and he heard a noise of nightmares. A small, faint, clink of metal. They were moving down the stream again.
“What happened?” Linda asked.
“The blade snapped.”
He reached deeper into the water, and pulled up half of his blade. The roar got louder as they approached a waterfall.
“Brace yourself.” Leo roared. Linda tightened her grip, and they plummeted down in the roaring rapids.

        Linda woke up along the side of the river a few minutes later, to see Leo had washed up beside her. She staggered to stand up, but fell over to overwhelming pain. “Am I going to die?” She thought to herself. She looked over at Leo, and noticed an amount of blood coming from his arm.
“Oh my god. Please be okay.”
She quickly crawled over to him, and rolled him onto his back. She tried to shake him away but he gave no response. She placed her head on his chest, and sighed in relief.
“At least he’s breathing.” Gathering all of her strength, Linda stood up, and started to pull Leo off of the sand of the river bank, and into the grass. She leaned his back on a nearby rock so he would be sitting up. She looked back and realized he left a trail of blood in the sand. She traced it to his left wrist, where the broken end of his blade had lodged itself.
        She tugged on it a bit, but it didn’t budge. She looked closer and noticed it had gone all the way through his arm.
“Alright.” She thought to herself. “Keep calm and think carefully.” Linda looked around for something to wrap around the wound and stop the bleeding, but she didn’t spend too long, thinking Leo could bleed out at any minute. She looked down and remembered the skirt she was wearing over her pants.
“Maybe I could use this?” She ripped some of the cloth off, and went back to trying to pry the shard from out of Leo’s Arm.
“Ah.” She nicked herself on the blade. A small amount of blood trickled from her finger. She grabbed firmly onto the blade, pulling it from his arm. A long arrow cut split across her palm. Working through the pain, she grabbed the cloth and quickly tied it around his wound, and yanked it for pressure. Leo grunted as she tied the cloth.
“At least he’s starting to wake up.” She looked up at him with a bit of relief, crossed with concern. She noticed his face had gone pale.
“Hang in there Leo.”
        Leo’s eyes opened slightly. He grunted and tried to lean forward, But Linda pushed him back against the rock. “Take it easy there. You’ve lost a lot of blood.” Leo looked at the trail he had left on the sand. The only thing he could muster was a grunt.
“I wonder if my mana has regenerated yet.” Linda thought out loud. “It probably has a little, but it couldn’t have much.”
“How do you know that?” Leo managed.
She was shocked by Leo’s response “Well, considering how badly you were bleeding, you’d be dead if we had spent too long down here.”
“Where exactly… is “Here”?”
“I’m not sure.” Linda walked back down to the river, and noticed the waterfall just down the river.
“Not too far from home.” She responded. “Now let me see if I can heal you a bit.”
“Are you sure? I mean you look pretty beat up yourself.” Leo commented about her wounds.
“Don’t worry, living with Claire, I got used to it as a child.”
“You’re strong for who you are, you know that?”
“What’s that supposed to mean?” Linda took a small bit of offense to Leo’s comment. “Are you saying I don’t look like a strong person?”
“No, that’s not it at all.” Leo replied. Linda walked over and sat beside him.
“Then what do you mean?”
“I mean you’re a very nice person. You barely know me.” He paused and looked and Linda’s hand. “And yet you wound yourself to save my life. Your name doesn’t fit you.”
“What do you mean by that?”
Leo chuckled a little. “That’s exactly what I said to my Grandfather when he told me the same thing.”
“What does it mean?” She insisted.
“It means I think I’m going to start calling you “Lin””. Leo laughed a little. It was a shallow laugh though; he was still a bit out of it.
“Why? Here, let me heal your wound.”
Linda leaned over and grabbed his wrist, and held her cut hand over it.
        “Forget about it.” He said. “I’ll explain everything later. First we need to figure out what we’re going to do.” Linda nodded. She closed her eyes and whispered. “Lons Fallas.” A Crimson-Gold glow emitted from her hand, as the bandage fell off, and the skin and tissue on Leo’s arm regenerated. Lin looked at the mark on his arm, and her eyes widened.
“I thought you were out of… What did you call it?”
“Huh?” Linda returned her gaze to Leo. “Oh, it’s called Mana, but this particular spell uses the energy of Chi.” She stated, acting as though nothing had happened.
“I will never understand magic.” Leo closed his eye and shook his head. “Ok, do you want me to explain?” Lin asked him.
“Take your best shot.”
“Alright. So Magic is not one in the same as most believe. It comes from two separate Forces, called Chi and Mana.” She explained. “Either force has its advantages and disadvantages. Mana is the force of the mind, and is the combined spiritual energy of your surroundings. It consists of two schools: Conjuration, and Matter.”
“Go on” Leo urged.
“Chi is the very power from your soul itself, and is the force of the body, allowing access to the two schools of Transference and Aura.”
“And what are the drawbacks of either force?”
“Well, for Mana, it’s a term we refer to as “Mana exhaust”, It occurs when the caster or person being affected has a lot of mana built up.  When a non-hostile spell is used on them, It effects their body, making it hard to move and hard to breathe.” She said.
“Spooky, is it Lethal?”
“Only in rare cases, in most you pass out and wake up about an hour later.”
“Ok then, how about drawbacks of Chi?”
“Well, there is full spiritual exhaust, where your movements and vision are impaired. It has a bit more mortality to it than Mana exhaustion, but it’s still very rare.”
        Leo’s hand had healed fully, giving full view of his birthmark. Lin grew a bit cautious.
“What’s wrong?” He asked.
“I don’t know, this mark… there’s just something about it. It’s almost like it’s calling to me.”
“Oh that? That’s just a birthmark.”
“There’s something different about it though… Maybe if I just-” Lin touched the mark with the cut on her hand, and it glowed brightly. The two screamed as a blinding light consumed them both.

        Leo lifted himself off the ground, squinting. He saw Lin lying on the ground, lying with her back to him. She started moving. Leo stood up and started to run to her. He grabbed his wrist.
“It burns.” He thought. He grabbed the shard of his blade lying beside him, and put it in his pocket. He looked across to Lin, who was now sitting up.
“Lin!” He shouted, hoping to get a response. She turned to look at him, but what he saw shocked him.
        “What’s wrong?” She asked. She looked at Leo, who was tumbling a bit. He seemed off balance. Her eyes widened.
“Leo…” She gasped. She put her hand over her mouth.
“What happened to your fur?” Leo asked her. He gestured to her, as she was no longer covered in fur: she looked like a normal human girl, with pale skin, brown hair, and hazel eyes. The only difference was she still had the tail and ears of a fox, and she had two small black lines on either cheek, just below her eyes.
        “What about you? You look like a Shedan!” She pointed to a tail and pair of ears that Leo now sported, resembling the fur pattern of that of a red fox. Leo looked down and not only noticed the tail, but also that all his wounds had been healed. The mark on his wrist was glowing slightly, and the burning sensation faded with the light. Lin looked down and saw her fur had vanished completely. The two were speechless. The wounds of both of them were completely gone, and not even a scar to prove that they ever even existed.
        Linda broke into a small laugh.
“What’s so funny?” Leo asked her
“You’re adorable!” She fell back laughing.
“This is serious, what if somebody finds us?!” Leo exclaimed. Lin was too busy laughing. Leo walked over to her, but tripped over his tail, making it hard for Linda to breathe.
“How do you move with this thing?” Leo angrily asked. Some leaves rustled in the distance.
“Did you hear that?” He asked. Lin calmed down and wiped the tears from her eyes. Her face was now visibly red.
“Yeah. Just a squirrel” She said. She stood up and walked over to Leo, who was lying down on his stomach. She bent over and started tugging on his ears.
“Ow.”
“Well, they’re real alright.” She stated. She stuck her arm out to help Leo up. He looked at her extended arm.
“Lin, your wrist…”  She looked down to see that the symbol from Leo’s wrist had manifested itself upon her own.
“Okay, let’s forget this happened, and think about what we’re going to do, we’ll figure this out later.” Lin said. Leo solemnly nodded. He looked up at the sky.
“It’s starting to get dark out.”
“Yeah, we should probably set up camp.”
“Ok, I’ll start a fire, do you think you could set up a small shelter?” Leo asked her.
“Yeah, I guess.” She said. Leo walked into the clearing in which they had landed. He gathered some sticks around the edge of the forest, and started to dig a small hole. Lin Headed into a more heavily wooded area.
Leo sparked a couple rocks to get a small flame stared, and then began to blow on the embers. A small flame began to fester, and soon engulfed the smaller twigs. It quickly rage into a large flame. Leo continued to add fuel to it. He used the stub of his sword to poke the flame and rearrange it, allowing it to stay burning.
Linda walked from out of the woods, carrying a large bundle of branches and twigs that she had gathered off the forest floor.
“They’re a bit rotten, but they should last at least tonight.” She said to Leo. She sat them down.
“Hey, if you’re done with that, could you help with this?” She asked.
“…” Leo remained silent, poking the fire with what remained of his sword.
“Leo?” She walked up to him gently, and put her hand on his shoulder.
“Huh?” Leo looked back at her. “Oh, yeah, give me a second.” He stood up and placed the blade on the ground. He looked at the emblem near the hilt for a second, “What does it mean?” He wondered. He walked over to the brush with Linda.
“Hey, is everything alright?” She asked. She gave a look of great sincerity.
“Yeah, I’m just wondering what I’ll do when I get home, what people will say.” He said. “And then there’s the sword my grandfather worked to give me, and I broke it within a day. I know that doesn’t mean a lot to some people, but with how hard he works, and considering he’s my only real family, it’s hard to get things like this.” He said. He started placing the sticks upright, and forming a box-like shape.
“Hey, what if I told you I could fix it?” She inquired. His eye grew a little brighter. “How would you manage to do that?” He asked.
“Here, let it sit on the fire overnight.” She took it from his grasp, and placed the blade among the embers, and threw in the shard from Leo’s arm from earlier.
        “Alright, let that sit. We need to finish this before we do anything else.” She instructed. They started to put up a small canvas around the sides, to make three leafy walls and a roof. As they started placing down bedding, Leo looked at her, and spoke.
“How are we so calm?” Leo asked her
“What do you mean?”
“I mean,” Leo looked at the ground. “Most people would be freaking out in this situation. Not to mention, how am I going to explain this back home?”
“I’m not sure…” Linda said. “Could we sneak back into your village? Maybe while everyone is asleep?”
“But where would we go?” Leo started rearranging leaves on the ground in the small shelter, and then lied down. Lin sat beside him.
“Maybe we should just get some rest, and then figure it out in the morning.
“Yeah, I guess that would be best.” Leo said. The two rolled onto their sides and closed their eyes.
        A couple minutes later, Leo sat up
“I can’t sleep.” He said
“Neither can I.” Linda replied. Leo stood up and walked over to the fire, and pulled out the stump of his blade.
“Do you think you could fix it?” He asked.
“I suppose.” Linda stood up and approached Leo. She took the blade from Leo, and touched it to the shard still lying in the flames.
“Nos Riaper.” She mumbled. The mark on her wrist glowed brightly, and the blade started to mend.
“What the-?!” Linda exclaimed. The glow faded, and she pulled out a blade unlike any other.
“That can’t possibly be right.” She said. She held up the blade. Leo gazed upon the blade, and took it from Linda’s possession. It was a sword that had a blade about three feet long, with the last third of the blade bending into a backwards, diamond-like hook. The blade was as silver as the moon, and the hilt as dark as the night sky. The emblem engraved in the blade now a sleek black.
“I think I know what you meant when you said the mark was calling to you.” Leo said. Lin was looking over her wrist carefully.
        “WHAT THE HELL?!?!” They heard a scream from behind a bush. Leo took a defensive stance, and Linda stood behind him.
“Damn it, Garret, sending me on a goose chase into a darkening forest, doesn’t he realize the dangers of this forest? And what’s more? He sends me out with some sort of “Magic Sword” that should apparently lead me to the-”
“I know that voice anywhere.” Leo said. He relaxed a bit as a large blonde man stepped from the bushes. He made eye contact with Leo.
“What the hell?” Darren seemed incredibly conflicted. He didn’t know whether to be concerned or attack.
“Gah. Just c’mon runt. I’m done with all this magic stuff.” Darren threw Leo a sword, similar to the one he had just received.
“And I don’t know what the hell is wrong with those swords of yours, but you better get them checked.” He turned around and started walking off, gesturing them to follow.
“Aren’t you at least a little weirded out by this?!?” Leo exclaimed.
“Kid, there’s been so much going on back in Briarwood I don’t know what’s normal anymore. Just hurry up… And bring your girlfriend with you, Garret has some questions.” A puzzled expression crossed Leo’s face. He looked at Linda, and shrugged. Lin rolled her eyes.

        They walked a narrow path between the trees as a dark sky loomed overhead. Darren cut through the vines as he led. He looked back at the other two.
“You two don’t have any idea what’s going on, do you?” He asked. For once he sounded sincere.
“Sorry, but I have no idea. I kind of woke up like this.” Leo stated. Lin remained silent.
“We’re here.” Darren turned and gestured to Leo.
“And kid, if I were you, I’d keep that hood up.” He gestured to Leo’s uniform. Leo put his hood up and tucked his tail into the back of his pants. He stumbled a bit as he walked. He held his arms out for a second to gain his balance.
        They emerged from the forest into a large clearing, in which a large wooden wall could be seen.
“There it is; I’ll lead around front.” Darren said. He looked at Lin.
“And you should stay quiet, we don’t need any more problems. The village is already in a state of panic.”
Lin nodded.
        The three walked along the edge of the outer wall, making their way toward the front gate.
“Hey, it’s Darren, right?” Linda asked.
“Yeah, what about it?” Darren replied.
“Earlier, what did you mean you had it with this magic?”
“You’ll see when we get to the Wallace residence.” He said. He went silent as they approached the front gate. The two soldiers standing guard saluted him as he walked by. They turned their attention to the other two. The stared at them as they entered. Their plated armor gleamed in the moonlight. Lin stiffened a bit.
“Relax. They won’t do anything if you don’t provoke them” Leo told her. The soldiers looked at him, and noticed the captain’s emblem on his shoulder. They turned their attention elsewhere, and allowed the two to pass. Lin took a breath of relief.  
        They walked empty streets. Torches lit the dirt paths as they approached Leo’s house. Darren walked up and knocked on the door. A small wooden panel slid open. “That wasn’t there before.” Leo thought.
“Darren, is that you?” Garret’s voice could be heard speaking through the slit. “Did you find Leo?”
Darren pulled Leo up to the door.
“See for yourself.” He yanked down Leo’s hood. Garret sighed on the other side of the door.
“That is what I was afraid of. Come in.” Garret opened the door. The house was brightly lit with candles and oil lamps. Linda and Leo squinted as the headed in. Darren shut the door behind them.
“Darren, I want you to make sure nobody gets into this house.” Garret instructed.
“Understood.” Darren replied. He stepped out the front door and shut he behind him. He stood in front of the door as to prevent anyone from getting in.
“When did you get that door replaced?” Lin asked.
“Just a bit ago, now we can see who’s there so what happened last time, won’t” Garret answered. “Now, Leo, hold out your wrist.”
Leo did as his grandfather instructed, and extended his left arm. Garret grabbed his arm, and stuck a finger onto the mark. A turquoise glow emitted from the tip of his index finger, and Leo’s form reverted.
“Is that better?” Garret asked. Leo was speechless. He rubbed his eyes, the room got a little darker.
“Don’t worry, you’ll get used to it.” His grandfather advised.
        “What are you, exactly?” Linda asked.
“I’ll explain after Martin wakes up, it would probably be in everyone’s best interest. If you want you can go see him, he’s in the back room with Connor.”
“What happened to Martin?” Leo asked.
“He’s recovering from something called “Mana Exhaustion.” He was knocked out because of an aura that your friend over here cast on him.” He gestured to Lin. “But fret not, her intentions were pure.”
Leo was still speechless. He couldn’t wrap his head around the current situation. He looked down at his mark
        A loud thud echoed from that back room. Connor was helping Martin walk out.
“It’s alright, I think I can manage from here.” Martin told his father. Connor nodded, and released his son. Martin looked up at the other two. “What happened to you?” He said to Lin. “Are you not fully influenced anymore?” He asked. Lin remembered her fur had disappeared.
“Settle down, we can explain everything.” Connor said.
“This way.” Garret led them into a larger room, and gestured for them all to have a seat on a couch. Connor and Garret set in two chairs across from the three.
        “Where to begin?” Garret said.
“How about with the Morphis?” Connor suggested.
“Ah yes.” Garret nodded. “Tell me, you three, do any of you know what a Morphis is?”
The three shook their heads.
“Alright,” Connor started. “The Morphis was another faction, like the Kendred or Shedan. As each faction has its respected god, the factions got their names. The Kendred, The Goddess Kendrah, The Shedan, The God Shade, and the Morphis, the God Morphos.
Garret took over. “Despite the worshipped god of each, there were still some that payed respect to the other gods. They were still Almian factions, after all.”
Connor picked up again. “But the Morphis were a very special people. They were rumored to have the power to transcend humanity, and even nature itself. They had a blessing that would allow them to take on the incarnation of nature, it was a gift from the gods for the way they respected and accepted all. But those rumors were true.”
Garret looked to Leo.        
        “Do you understand what I’m trying to say to you? Leo Wallace, you are a descended Morphis, that’s what that mark on your wrist represents. I was waiting to tell you at a better time, but it’s best you know about it now with a war approaching our doorstep.”
Martin interrupted. “But sir, I thought the war was resolved.”
“No my boy, sadly there is little room for peace in the hearts of those who lead us. Briarwood was the only village willing to make a treaty, and we’re still being attacked.”
        “Does that make me the enemy?” Linda asked.
        “No.” Garret replied “Your village and Briarwood will merge. And you aren’t a full-fledged Shedan anymore, thanks to Leo.”
        Leo sat staring into space, trying to wrap his head around everything.
        “How does that work, exactly?” Linda asked.
        “It’s because you attempted to save him, even if it meant causing injury to yourself. You made a sacrifice for him.” Garret paused for a moment, as the others let their minds wander. “In the ancient times, the Shedan always went out of their way to attempt to gain the Morphis abilities, but to no avail. My guess is that you were fully influenced, and his mark realized you were from an opposing faction. You made a sacrifice to save an enemy, and were rewarded.” Garret explained.
        “That and considering that he bares the symbol for “Fox” which is probably why you recovered and converted so quickly.” Connor added in
        “There are other marks?” Leo asked.
        “Yes my boy, so many more. The most common falling under Fox, Wolf, and Feline.” Garret said.
        “Ok, I understand that Garret knows all this through ancestry, but dad, when did you learn all this?” Martin asked his father.
        “That’s a story for another day. Right now you all need to understand what’s going on.” Connor responded.
        “Alright, but what does any of this have to do with me?” Martin asked. “I don’t mean to be rude by I mean, why was I called here?”
        “It’s because you have faint heritage too, but not as strong as Leo’s.” Garret responded. Martin looked up in awe.
        “What do you mean? I don’t have a mark or anything like that.” He said.
        “No, but the power is still within you, and it may someday awaken.” Connor responded.
        “Does this mean you’re like this too?” Linda asked Connor.
        “No, as it comes from his mother’s side.” He responded.
“You keep mentioning this “Power”, but what does it do?” Leo asked. He was starting to get a bit more serious.
        “Hold out your left hand. Wrist up.” Garret instructed. Leo did as he was told, his mark rolled over revealed, a jet black darker than the night sky.
        “It seems… darker… than usual.” He said.
        “Leo, pay attention! Repeat after me. “Nos”.” Leo closed his eyes.
        “Nos.” He repeated.
        “Vulpes.” Garret eased. Leo repeated the words Garret spoke.
        “Now, say them with no breaks, Linda you do the same.” Garret told them. As the two pulled their arms out, they beckoned the call.
“Nos Vulpes!” The two shouted, and their forms changed. Leo sprouted once more the ears and tail of a fox, whilst Linda turned to a more Kendred-like appearance, with only two marks on her cheeks.
        “This phrase will allow you to restrain or unleash your form at will. Saying it once will make you “Cursed” and once more will revert you back to normal. Though you should get used to walking in those states, both with and without a tail.” Garret explained. His tone changed as he closed his eye and crossed his arms.
        “I still don’t understand.” Was an expression the youths each had on their faces.
        “Why did you keep this a secret?” Leo asked his grandfather.
        “Because I wanted to protect you. We lived in a small town before Briarwood, and they didn’t take too kindly to your father’s form changing when he was young.” Garret explained. Leo nodded.
        “I think it’s best you all head to bed.” Connor said. “You have a long day tomorrow, and after today, I think we all need some rest.”
        The three nodded, and Linda and Leo held out their arms again, once more chanting.
“Nos Vulpes!” The two changed forms back to their originals. Martin walked to the door.
        “Where are you going? Connor asked.
        “I thought we were headed home.” Martin responded.
        “No, we’ll spend the night here. You three can head to the upstairs bedroom, Garret and I have a few things to discuss. My room will be the one on the eastern side of the house if you need me.” Connor stated. The three went upstairs and assorted sleeping arrangements. Garret and Connor stayed downstairs discussing tomorrows events.
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I read this over three times now and I still love it. This is a story you can read quite a few times and still be excited and stuff
or something
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MOOOORRRREEEEEEEEEEEE
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YUSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS
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on December 08, 2016
Working on it as we speak
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I'm hoping to add more to it soon
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I hope you can do that soon! ^^
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Thanks, this really means a lot to hear
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I love this so much! Please continue this, I can't wait for the next chapter. :3
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Thank you! I'm gonna update it again shortly, been having a lot of trouble getting my laptop to connect with the school wifi
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on October 30, 2016
Holy- *pauses, the speaks again.* Anyways, are you good now to start a rp? @Do_Not_Fear_The_Reaper
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Not to "butt in" as they say, but that explains quite a bit Reaper....
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on October 29, 2016
Okay.
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on October 29, 2016
Later, when I have stable internet
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on October 29, 2016
O.o Okay...? Um, wanna rp Impure? @Do_Not_Fear_The_Reaper
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on October 29, 2016
Everywhere and nowhere
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Where the heck did you come from?! @Do_Not_Fear_The_Reaper
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on October 29, 2016
Just like me
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Oh, but me and some other readers shall be waiting.
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on October 28, 2016
I may have referred my sister towards the story of Impure....and Qfeast....

I await for a new chapter of Impure to be uploaded, as many others do. I may need to re-read the story again in order to be able to fluently traverse to the next chapter, like a person traveling from one town to the next...the same but different at the same time, and must be re-read See More
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Thanks, and that sounds nice. I look forward to to the addition to a tail tale (qfeast will not let me post this comment, gosh) :D though I would r ecco mend rereading after the next update because I'm revising everything
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Thank you, and I will note that.

I may have just shut my door to my room due to my parents....watching youtube videos with more than the usual amount of swearing in them....and now I worry whether that may have been rude or not...as that door separates the two bedrooms...
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WHERE IS THE NEW CHAPTER! I AM DYING FOR IT!!!
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IT'S THE TENTH IN YOUR COUNTRY! NEW! CHAPTER! PLEASE!
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Gonna put it up later if I can get my computer to connect
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It's on my computer lol it'll be up on on about the tenth, no Wi-Fi to upload it
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GAHD< DOObIT, DANM IT
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on August 03, 2016
I NEED MORE!!!
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There are a few...RPs that are currently going on now..
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*mimicks rocket the rackoon* Oh... Yeahhh
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on July 19, 2016
It seems so, interesting.
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on July 19, 2016
so as you can probably infer, your characters will have more links to them than you think
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on July 19, 2016
More accurate and cost-friendly models were forged by the hands of the reptillian people in the small village, Vasvatican (Sister town to Veres-Vaunty). Meanwhile models were dug up and found in the south-eastern forests, though incredibly inaccurate, they made good for closed-quarters combat and executions. Though still rare as the reptillian people are a private See More
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Guns (Pistols [Or Minute-Muskets] and Muskets) were developed in the earlier stages of "The great war" by the Wilven Kendred, many artifacts were passed down from this era: The golden bow, The Pendant of Wilver, and the "Twin Technique" for steel-forging, aong with the ability to make muskets. The use of muskets faded do to problems with accuracy, and how costly See More
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I see, though (If google is correct) it sounds as if regular HP rounds do more anti-infantry work than penetration, though you do have some knowledge on the subject. Its interesting, though makes sense how there has been different types of ammunition over the years.
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on July 19, 2016
Crossbows used a similar tech back when, with clay on the outside then the point inside the hollow clay ball, which worked to pierce plate armour
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on July 19, 2016
Tyler has the vulpes version of of a longer rifle, admittedly without hollow points (Which I thought were for anti-infantry rather than armor piercing [Which I thought FMJs were for]), but still gets the job of defense done.
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YEESSS, And why are you not writing the story! I need to find out who this mysterious stranger is!
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on July 19, 2016
Dares rifle was a 3 round, cylindrical, long barreled, high accuracy and velocity rounds, and while the cartridges are still lacking, he has hollow point bullets as to pierce armour
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on July 19, 2016
Y'all are getting it all wrong. it was made by the eastern pineapples.... No, but i could really go into very deep plot about this right here if you want to lol
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A six round, cylindrical, short barreled, higher accuracy (and bullet velocity), and the addition of "bullet" cartridges are what was improved. Maybe not the barrel, but it was made for their higher ups personal protection.

*Edits*

That may also be the only one of its kind....in Tyler's hands...
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on July 19, 2016
Improved? Ha, I'd like to see that
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on July 19, 2016
The Foxes made their own, improved version, they never claimed it was completely of their design...though kept the design relatively secret.
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on July 19, 2016
Stupid foxes, stealing serpent knowledge and claiming it as their own, those cunning thieves. Whoa, Deja vu
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The Vulpes smiths made another, smaller version as well which was handed to Tyler's father...then"taken" by him when he left Shedan territory.
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on July 19, 2016
No, it was made by serpents, it ws serpent technology, serpents made it as the pinnacle of their war tech, and awarded to dare for saving a family of gunsmiths
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on July 19, 2016
But....that (maybe the serpent tech is an improved version) was developed by others.
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on July 19, 2016
Oh for hells sake this is why you people aren't ready for serpent tech
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on July 19, 2016
The rifle may have exploded due to an excessive amount of gunpowder...
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on July 19, 2016
... What did you do to the rifle?
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on July 19, 2016
Your rifle...it sort of...
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MUST. FIND. AND. DO. STUFF. I MISS DARE!
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*slams head on table.* Darn it... Darn it... Darn it... I noticed that Leo and Lily have the same backstories. D: Well, should I change mine?
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That is up to you, though having two characters with similar backgrounds may prove easier for them to speak to each other.
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on July 17, 2016
Lol, sure. But I'll have to start tomorrow as its 3:30 here and I have a bit of work tomorrow :/ sorry, but yeah I'd love to :D
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on July 17, 2016
Can't wait. XD Wanna rp Impure on your page?
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on July 17, 2016
XD thank you, wait until ch. 9 (Ish)
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on July 17, 2016
Um, not really. But I do love how you make Leo and Martin be silly or something like that. X3
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on July 17, 2016
OK, sorry about that, anything that is confusing in the story thus far?
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on July 17, 2016
Okay, I'm trying my best to understand. No need to try, I always figure it out later. Sort of.
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Sorry if I'm confusing you with all of this but the plot of this story is very complicated and it is kind if like undertale in the fact it is very hard not to give away spoilers. I plotted this story out for 2.5 years so it's gonna get a but tricky
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on July 17, 2016
Oh, okay.
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on July 17, 2016
Yeah, I have the story centered around five major arcs, the story is currently in the first arc, or "Arc-Rila"
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on July 17, 2016
Oh, makes sense.... I think.
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OK, you may be wondering but that was purely for character placement as to when your character will be introduced
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on July 17, 2016
??? Um, 3?
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on July 17, 2016
Also, now as a random choice, pick a number from 1-5.
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on July 17, 2016
Um... Okay? Your welcome.
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on July 17, 2016
Ah, interesting, this plot just smacked into a stone slab and stuck in place like a puzzle piece. Thank you
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on July 17, 2016
*sits up.* No clue. Shocked? XD Hmm, maybe a snow leopards ears and tail. Or a white wolfs, can't decide.
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on July 17, 2016
XD why the fainting? On an unrelated note, if you were to give your character an animal aspect, what would it be?
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on July 17, 2016
OH MY LORD!!! *faints.*
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I did say I had a great idea, didn't I? XD
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I've finally caught up :P
I'll probably redraw Linda
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Lol, OK :D
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on June 25, 2016
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on June 25, 2016
This is a masterpiece rivalling that of David Gemmel, Or R.A Salvator
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It's just missing that serpentine aspect
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No judgement here, I'm a shockingly bad one myself
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on June 15, 2016
well it's done and being uploaded but please keep in mind i am not the worlds best artist ;_;
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on June 15, 2016
No biggie
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Ok, thank you for the information
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on June 15, 2016
No biggie, and Dare, as modeled in my head to be like a Australian Taipan (National pride) Is most likely to be in anything to the desert to hot, tropical areas
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also, thank you so much for the compliment! It means a lot :D
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on June 15, 2016
the story starts off in the south eastern corner, while the desert is in the north eastern, and bayou is closer to the west. i was meaning to ask you what habitat you would wish Dare to be in,
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on June 15, 2016
LThen what does dare classify as?
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yeah, i have mapped out the entire nation, which is called "Alma" in reference to one of my friends. i've put in similar easter eggs with this (Such as Lake Horo, as in Horo the wise wolf) but the main feature is that the location matters, reptilian shedan such as Kappas and caiman lie within the Dessert and Bayou biomes scattered throughout the world
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....I LOVE IT!!! You did an amazing job writing this story, I hope you will keep writing. :3
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Thank you! It means a lot
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on June 11, 2016
Interesting...I see Rin and his companion have managed to enter the story...It is interesting thus far, and I cannot wait for more.
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on June 04, 2016
I see the new title photo for Impure, and it looks interesting, I like it.
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Thanks :D
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No problem.
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on May 14, 2016
LONGEST.
CHAPTERS.
EVER.
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on May 12, 2016
R.I.P Claire
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on May 11, 2016
I feel like drawing Linda :3
Is there a reference picture?
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Eh, the closest I have would be my ch.3 teaser. It's found under my profile
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Anywhere you want, really^_^
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on April 27, 2016
I've finished it! ^_^
I originally meant to do it digitally, but due to an incident I have to do it on paper
Where do I upload the picture?
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Okay I'm working on it now ^_^
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on April 25, 2016
OK, sorry about that
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It's a bit blurry so I'll use the description from the story
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on April 25, 2016
Oh, yeah
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on April 25, 2016
The person on the top right*
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on April 25, 2016
Is it the one on the top right?
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Holy hell chapter 1 is deep as space!!
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Rhyming like fúckin Zecora
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:{) yeah, I was going by impure rather than qfeast chapters.
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Aww no need... It happens to me all the time... It's becoming a bit of a problem ^^'
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on April 25, 2016
Nvm, I'm gonna kick myself now
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Oh, lol I didn't know. Which rhymes are you referring to?
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on April 25, 2016
Zecora is a my little pony character she rhymes all the time
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on April 25, 2016
What? Sorry I don't understand
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I think I've heard this Chi and Mana from somewhere... :) love the logic
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Advice:
There are grammatical errors that are bothering me, and it's a little difficult to see who's talking but the plot is great so far! Keep writing ^_^
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Alright, thank you ^_^
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*Starts to Redraw Leo with his new Shedan bits*
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I'll update the story when word wants to work -_- sorry the continuation of this being stalled is bugging me too
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It should be up tomorrow
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on April 07, 2016
Finished the chapter
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on April 07, 2016
I had it working, but it crashed again, guess I just never mentioned it :/
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on April 04, 2016
*Contenplates about an earlier said matter* I believe you said at one point that you had word fixed....I guess it isn't...
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on April 03, 2016
Oh... that's new.... a new 'turn' of events one could say.
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Lol
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on March 08, 2016
*stops drawing* well that ends my drawing...*sees it is completely different from what he invisioned* Well...I guess I'll draw that then...hmmmm... since Leo is a tad bit different now... I guess I should draw him again! He's "one of us" now.
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Lol, I have trouble making it symmetrical sometimes, it's the emblem that's on the wax on the profile pic of Impure OCs
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on March 08, 2016
*tries drawing the tattoo/birthmark that was on Leo's arm*
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on March 08, 2016
Lol, yeah I'm trying to introduce more plot to it.
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on March 08, 2016
It was an interesting segment today.
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*Sees a lot added*
I guess I know what I'll be reading for the rest of this day! Well done, hope to see more later!
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Lol, thx. And there will be
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on February 27, 2016
I love it! ^^ I advice you to please keep writing.
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Thank you, that really means alot :)
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on February 26, 2016
It's OK :D
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on February 26, 2016
Okay, cause I just wasn't sure at first.
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on February 26, 2016
No. It's just a filler to show the stress of the war.
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on February 26, 2016
Hey, on the second chapter about the Shedan boy, is that Ashlynn's brother, Liu?
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on February 22, 2016
Yay! ^^
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on February 22, 2016
XD don't worry, I look forward to completing this one. I will update it this Thursday (rest of chapter 1 added, maybe start on ch.2)
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on February 22, 2016
Anytime. But seriously, please keep on writing. I wanna know what is going to happen next! :D
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I hope people don't think the chapters are too long. This is later out as a novel on my laptop.
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They do seem reeeaaally long, but they're worth it.
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Lol, yup, just wish a couple more people would read it, took a year and a half (well, almost 2 by this point) and I'd like people to see what I've come with. But if they don't oh well.
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on February 15, 2016
XD Makes sense.
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Well, that's the reason it takes 2-3 weeks to post new chapters XD
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I'll update this story whenever i can connect my laptop to the internet, depending on how much of it i have done, i have een writing it for 1.5 years now
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on January 16, 2016
Prophecy = FREAKING PERFECT. You are going to famous for this one day.
Chapter One = Kind of confusing, and has some grammar errors that are kind of bothering me, but overall really good!
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thx, whats confusing about it? i want to make it clearer, and ill correct the grammar in a sec
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better advise all the comments here... dont attempt what you read at home, thank you
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on January 16, 2016
aaaaand done with adding lines
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it will take a second though, gtg do something real quick
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on January 16, 2016
OK, awesome! :D
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ok, ill do that
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1. There are a few run-ons, and I had to re-read those parts multiple times before I finally understood what it meant.
2. It will be easier to understand AND look smoother (and be grammatically correct) if you start a new line/paragraph every time someone speaks.

Mostly just those two things.
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