The Immortals (1)

The Immortals (1)

Four Immortals have to fight that of a god. However with each people species past, this could prove to be a challenge.

published on May 06, 2016not completed

The first awakening

Marissa was running down a large hallway, Collette following close behind. Guards where running around trying to get to where Vaslet and Raiden where fighting. However Marissa was wondering if they needed help. All you could hear were loud bang, clangs and explosions, with the odd time you hearing Vaslet yelling "RAHH!". The whole castle was shaking as the fighting was going on. Collette caught up to Marissa.
Marissa looked at her. "On a scale of 1 to 10 how much badassery are we missing?"
"15" Collette followed up right away. She and Marissa ran up some stairs and into a chamber. The queen of spark, a tall beautiful women with golden hair long hair was stood looking at a screen with two huge 20 foot guards next to her. Each one with a halberd and greatshield, dressed in shinning gold armor. The queen looked suited up herself, in the same style of armor only much lighter and she was short. Being 10 foot tall. She had a long longsword by her side, completely gold once again.
The queen turned as did the guards. "Girls, we've been watching. I'm impressed, disappointed and glad"
Collette and Marissa bowed. "How so you majesty?" Collette asked.
"Well" The queen took some small steps to them. "Impressed by the way you fight, disappointed that you let Vaslet out yet...Glad he is...Raiden would be dead already if not for him" She turned to the screen again but the guards stayed put. The screen was showing Vaslet and Raiden fighting Zeston. They were doing very well. Vaslet would go for quick hits, then back off. Raiden would follow up with his shield and block any attack that was made by Zeston. They were such a great team. They were so in sync. However it seemed Zeston was only getting annoyed. They all watched as Vaslet went in with a jump attack, going to slash his right hand Katana at Zeston. But Zeston just grabbed him, threw him to the floor, sent his foot onto him and punched him while he was on the floor 3 times. There was dust so no one could see what had happened to Vaslet. But Raiden went in a rage and rushed Zeston.
"YOU SON OF A BITCH!" He yelled, running at him with his shield up and his sword pointing past it. But Zeston was having none of it. He sent his sword up along the ground. It sent a large beam towards Raiden. he took it head on, only to be guard broken, his shield being sent above his head but still on his arm. Then Zeston took the opening. He sent his sword right through Raiden's chest.
"RAIDEN!" The queen yelled, turning and running to the spark room. Her guards following close behind.
"Wait you Highness!" Collette yelled following too.
"More running?" Marissa moaned chasing after.

In the spark room Vaslet slowly rose from his hole. He was bloody, his chest was cut across, nose bleeding, right arm cut long and his eye was cut, half blinding him. He stood up slowly. Seeing Zeston walking up to the spark. "RAIDEN? RAID WHERE ARE YOU BRO?" He shouted looking around.
"V-Vaslet...Over...Over here" Raiden coughed.
Vaslet got up and walked over, seeing the hole in his chest. "What did he do? Raiden? Stay with me!"
Raiden looked at Vaslet. "I think my number's up man" Raiden coughed up some blood.
"Raiden don't you die on me!" Vaslet placed his hands on Raiden's chest, trying to stop the bleeding. "Please"
The queen, guards, Collette and Marissa all ran in. "Get him boys!" The queen ordered her guards. Who ran right for Zeston.
Collette, Marissa and the queen went over to Raiden and Vaslet. "I'll heal him, but I need time!" Collette told them.
Vaslet wouldn't let go of Raiden. "You have to get him out of here then!"
"Vaslet let go of my son" The queen ordered.
"Your highness, I'm stopping your son from bleeding out right now!" Vaslet yelled.
Marissa put her hand on Vaslet's shoulder. "I'll get him out, I promise, just do me a favor"
"What?" Vaslet asked.
"Kick that god's ass so hard it sends him to hell" Marissa said coldly.
"Gladly" Vaslet let go of Raiden. Marissa quickly placed her hands on the hole in his chest, freezing slightly to stop the bleeding. Raiden was pretty much out cold already anyway.
"I'm heal him up here, then take him to med for a full body heal" Collette told Vaslet and the Queen.
"Thank you child" The queen nodded. "And Vaslet dearest"
Vaslet had been looking at Raiden. "Yeah?"
"Stop holding back, you're stronger than this you know it" The queen looked at the god now fighting the guards. "kill him, avenge my son. Or at least buy us some time"
Vaslet started to walk forward. As he did Zeston had knocked both guards to the ground. "Now Vaslet...Shall we dance?"
"Fairly?" Vaslet smiled.
"Oh hell no" Zeston smirked and put his arms out in front of him. Two dark beams came from his hands, one from each. They hit the guards. Who now started started to rise, eyes glowing black. A dark miss came from their eyes as they finally stood up. They stood towering over both Vaslet and Zeston. However Vaslet didn't even change facial expression.
"Vaslet don't! This isn't a fair fight anymore get out of there!" Collette yelled, starting to summon some water, wrapping it around Raiden.
Vaslet stood there. From the ground two fire pits were created. "By the blood of my fallen partner...By the flame of rage inside me"
"He's...He's using the BloodEmber awakening chant!" Marissa pointed out. "VASLET DO IT! SHOW HIM WHO'S BOSS!"
"He could kill himself" The queen added.
Collette paused for a second. "I don't think he cares"
"By the Ember, by my blood, by the people I defend" Vaslet slowly started to glow, and his armor started to set a light. "The flame with in me burns bright, it burns with power, it will be thing to burn you" Vaslet kept going. From the fire pits his great started to rise. Both fire pits had a 6 foot bladed sword coming from them. Vaslet soon gripped these. "By the blood in me, by the flame in me, by the people I stand with...I WILL BURN YOU!" Vaslet's body exploded with a fire area of effect. Zeston, the queen, Collette and Marissa all covered their eyes from it. As the flames went they uncovered their eyes. Vaslet was stood there with his greatswords in his hands. "Behold the awakened Ember form!" Vaslet had flaming wings like phoenix. His blades were glowing with flames, as was his armor. His eyes had a burning red flame in them and his chest had a small orange glow coming from the inside. Everyone was shocked. Few people can awaken their power. Vaslet did it was ease. "From my rage a flame was born, by my brother blood a power was embedded...Zeston...Your time has come"
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*bungee jumps off of the cliff hanger* Weeeeeeeee~
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-Holds up a sign with a 6 on it-
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on May 15, 2016
God damn it! the cliff hangers! *cuts saftey net and jumps off* XD
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Idk weather to make these chapters like 1000000000000000000000000000000000000000 words long just to stop this.
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*waves* X3
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on May 15, 2016
K byyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyye XD
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on May 15, 2016
^.^ heehee *lands at the bottom of the cliff* i don't mind, it's nice down here :3
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on May 15, 2016
Sometimes I feel like Collette is the most hated....
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I swear every time I write a story and it's not 100% perfect to you. Because you charterer doesn't have enough scenes of losses one fight. You moan. It's easy just to kill them off. It only take a chapter.
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No no no it's fine. Just say if you want me to just get rid of the story or you charterer. Coz I'll only write another just loose a part. Don't take it back. If you feel that way go for it. Idc.
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on May 15, 2016
......
I take back what I said!
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on May 15, 2016
How? She isn't. Collette and Marissa just haven't had much shown about them because it has been based around Vaslet and Raiden. Mainly Vaslet. You don't what's to come.
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on May 15, 2016
*bounces on the safety net* ^.^ heehee
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Plus, end of the forth chapter is full of feels :-O
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Ikr?
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on May 14, 2016
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on May 14, 2016
Andddd another cliffhanger *falls again*
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God dam it Sapphire!
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on May 13, 2016
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on May 13, 2016
*falls off the cliffhanger* heehee, great story!!!
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on May 12, 2016
I swear, I'm already loving it!
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Glad so.
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Haha thanks.
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on May 08, 2016
It deserve really five stars and two thumbs-up.???????
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on May 08, 2016
... don't tell me you just instantly killed me off.
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Are you dead?
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Clearly didn't read the description.
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on May 08, 2016
Yeah I get the feeling I might....
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on May 08, 2016
"Tried to block it"*
ALMOST, CLIFFHANGER.
So no I did not instantly kill you off. Coz you are alive.
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on May 08, 2016
You left it on a cliffhanger where they almost killed me.
And "tried to dodge it"?
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