Insanity

Insanity

Lucy is a insane 16 year old girl who hates were she is. so she gets and idea. she escapes the mental home called Helping Hand and runs into a annoying, bad temperd bad boy named Ian. they travel together as "Friends" until she relises that shes falling for a complete jerk AND shes on the run.

published on March 01, 2013not completed

Prositition is the way to go

As i walked Deeper the the woods i noticed snakes and spiders of all kinds.
I kinda wanted to pet some.
"leave the stupid snakes alone lucy"Viv said as i walked by a tall oak.
"wait a secound..." i wisperd looking up. havnt we passed this already?
"yes like twenty times... im suprised you didnt notice" sang Viv
"Shut Up" i mumbled continuing on my way. then i walked back up on the road and fallowed it to whererverit may go.

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Sometime later i reached the city. It was Amazing.
there where abunch of people all wearing difrent things.
no uniforms or white suits.
Personality was everywhere. "wow" i wisperd walking up to a window. the clothing all looked skanky but whatever i thought going inside.
"Hello welcome to..." the shop keeper said looking me up and down. before she could say anything else i knocked her out and Dragged her sluty body into a closet. then i looked around. the clothing was meant for prositutes.
"you know what prositutes are?" Viv asked
"Yes....im not a complet bumkin you know"
ilooked around and grabbed a outfit that would definetly atract atenchion and got dressed.
I chose a short plade skirt with stockings and a Corset with Red bows on it. my boots where tall combat boots that showed off my legs.
i looked nice.
"no, you look like a skank." Viv smirked.
"Shut Up"
"excuse me? quit telling me what to do."
"i can if i want to. you ARE in my head remember?"
"yeahyeah whatever."

with that i walked outside and into  the setting Sun.

After standing outside for a while i walked to a more populated corner.
some of the others looked at me like i was the threat until a girl spoke up.
"Hey leave her alone shes new" the girl tried to smile but i could tell it was forced.
she walked up and put her arm around me
"so whats your name?"
"Lucy... you?"
"the names Violet. that there is Sidny, and the Vampire Queen there is Marissa."
Marissa smiled "Dontworry i wont bite... but i mite take a nibble" she purred
"And remeber to stay away from Ian, hes "marrissas i guess but he mit try to go for fresh meat."
said Violet yawning and stretching.
Just then a Mustang pulledup
"speaking of the Dame Devil" purred Marissa as He got out.
he looked at me and winked.
"So..." i said looking him up and down. "You must be Ian."
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on May 03, 2014
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on April 15, 2013
Interesting!!
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on March 16, 2013
Interesting!!
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on March 16, 2013
nooooooooooooooooooo!!!!
iv never seen sucker punch but if its familiar then crap I have to re wright the story... I hate it when tht happens
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on March 15, 2013
This seems familiar to the movie sucker punch.... It's pretty good though!
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on March 15, 2013
Its ok!!
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on March 10, 2013
oh god I know im a terrible speller O.O
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on March 10, 2013
its good but u spelled alot of words wrong
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on March 09, 2013
Ha!!!! I spelled watch wrong!!!! LOL!!!!!!!
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on March 07, 2013
Whatch your spelling!!!!! This is hard to enjoy if I cant understand it!!!!!! =[
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on March 05, 2013